Somethin' Special

['Illicit']

this is jus some shit I wrote for my girl (Angel) two weeks back, it doesnt follow any precise structure or special subject, jus thoughts I wrote down. I showed it to her and she liked it so I will post it here to get yalls opinion, hence if you dont like it, i dont care cuz she liked it lol

prestory...I've seen her two years ago in the bar me n my friends always hung out at, she was a waitress back then...two years later, now, we talked for the first time (well actually back in november) and later hooked up...


Somethin' Special[/u]
 
Two years ago I wouldn't've thought
I'll find what I sought
somebody just like you with true feelin's involved
it's hard, to speak my mind so I'm writin' it down
I'm not that good at bringin' words but I'm tryin' it now
I might not really be the best 'n perfect guy your around
but I'ma try my best to always make you smile when you frown
my feelin's grow more 'n more everytime that I'm wit ya
and even stronger is my longing for your touch when I miss ya
I picture, you in my arms, your in my thoughts when I wake
get up, come home from school and lay down when it's late
spendin' time with you is like true happiness that don't end
and I'm so glad that we turned out to be more than just friends
never had trust like this before or heard sweet words from a girl
but then you came, lifted my spirits showed me a whole new world
of true affection and care without limits and no fear
mere honesty and happiness no space for tears
I'm not perfect, but still learning constantly yearning for your presence
fulfill ya needs by all means necessary to show I'm not careless
the arguments we always have, our evening talks 'n discussions
the way you kiss 'n share a smile you got the key to my lovin'
one single rhyme ain't enough I could fill pages from day to day
don't get it wrong, ain't rushin' nothin', just hope you feel the same way
everything I wish for you got it, I'm sincere with my logic
your somethin' special you should know, I'm honest, my own little goddess...


It's now a month since I'm wit ya
still holdin' on, growin' strong
ain't enough love I can give ya
still this is where I belong
the emotions we are sharing
seem so equally spent
like the nickname that you carry
you must be heavenly sent
I've not for once felt insecure
with your feelin's towards me
somehow I know that you're as sure
as me, it's like a dream
but I wake up and it's still real
I go to sleep, it's you I see
like my eyes have never shut, I feel free
of all obstacles that're put in my way
a constant smile blesses my face
just one single thought of your grace
you in my arms as we embrace
I want to be there when you're in need
of an ear to hear you speak
a shoulder to cry your tears
a tissue to wipe your cheeks
to share your pain you sometimes feel
why you chose me, goes beyond my belief
falling in love I now perceive
and I enjoy it in every piece


A month 'n two weeks, might not sound long but it is
startin' to feel a feeling I've never before did
must be love 'cause I'm filled with joy by every sound of your voice
every touch, every kiss, just everything when we're joined
shared an unforgettable moment with you and I'm glad that I waited
you had respect and patience, with you I didn't waste it
why is it, you blow my mind everytime I see 'n am wit' you
and why is it, when we're apart the thought of your smile makes me miss you
this song I dedicate, to you, I hope you like it
I speak the truth with the words I write, and I ain't lyin'
there came a time not long ago where you started to mean the world to me
an Angel to call my own I finally found please don't let us ever be
seperated or apart in any kind
I love the feeling of knowin' that your mine
just like I'm yours, truly with deep regards
I finish this last chapter of how I express my heart
every beat includes a wave you dispatch to make me feel
the love you have for me no single doubt it's truly real
you believe in me just like I believe in you and I am grateful
respect me for who I am and the warmth that I receive from you
no matter how far away you or me should ever be
a picture of your face lay before my eyes to see
I could try to fight all I want, to get you off my mind
but there's no way I'd ever try to close my eyes
out of fear of goin' blind
I just hope you don't take wrong what I hearby try to say
...I now have finished the final verse...
I'm in love with the perfect girl
pray you read it through...and reply back with...I feel the same way...


It was written on three different days, hence three parts...



drop some feedback

[gyrl1da]

that was soooo sweet! but damn, it reminded me how single i am... i was wit my nig 4 a year and a half and it's only been 2 weeks since we 86'ed it, but i still remember when i was feelin' him, how special it was, just the way u described... readin this made me wish he had at least attempted 2 describe how he really felt about me but he never did... anyways, back 2 reality, tell ya other half gyrl1da says she's 1 lucky lady.  

[Reef]

That was real tight man.. I neva really seen a drop from you like this really and i really enojoyed readin it

['Illicit']

ima tell her, I been/am too lol.  

thx for the feedback yall

if anyone wanna drop more FD, go ahead I dont bite.

[Inspectah]

I was feeling this homie.. you always bless ya true talent on this board.. anyways i thought it was tight, and expressed some of the feelings, or all of the feelings you had for this girl, and may still have... Ya know i posted up shit like this with my feelings towards a girl.. and its all good..

Keep Blessing Homie! Do what ya do best!

Peace 1

['Illicit']

thanks a lot homie, I apreciate it

[Inspectah]

No problem dawg... anytime..

C'mon people, we got to get this homie some more recognition for his dope key!

Get the feedback rollin!

Peace Illicit!

[White-Chocolate]

yo man that shizz deep, i'm feelin' it, i like the deep style once in awhile,  i remember them dayz i felt like that, well all i can say is do yo thang and keep faith, ur luv sounds serious for this gurl, i say keep it that way man, you never know, you could end up like all the other singles brotha's dreaming of them moments, peace

['Illicit']

thx dawg

[:-:Mistah Menace:-:]

Werd, Feelin' This To The Top, Flow Was Tight...Vocab Was Weighty, A Very Nice/Sweet Drop...

I might not really be the best 'n perfect guy your around
but I'ma try my best to always make you smile when you frown

I Feelin' That..Nice Flow To It.

I picture, you in my arms, your in my thoughts when I wake
get up, come home from school and lay down when it's late

As Before, I Feelin' It, Nice Flow, Simple And Weighty

It's now a month since I'm wit ya
still holdin' on, growin' strong
ain't enough love I can give ya
still this is where I belong
the emotions we are sharing
seem so equally spent
like the nickname that you carry
you must be heavenly sent
I've not for once felt insecure
with your feelin's towards me
somehow I know that you're as sure
as me, it's like a dream
but I wake up and it's still real
I go to sleep, it's you I see
like my eyes have never shut, I feel free
of all obstacles that're put in my way
a constant smile blesses my face
just one single thought of your grace
you in my arms as we embrace
I want to be there when you're in need
of an ear to hear you speak
a shoulder to cry your tears
a tissue to wipe your cheeks
to share your pain you sometimes feel
why you chose me, goes beyond my belief
falling in love I now perceive
and I enjoy it in every piece

The Flow Was Sick On This, I Started Flowin' It, V.Good Structure, Feelin' It..

an Angel to call my own I finally found please don't let us ever be seperated or apart in any kind
I love the feeling of knowin' that your mine

I Feelin' It, Nice Flow, Simple And Weighty

no matter how far away you or me should ever be
a picture of your face lay before my eyes to see

These Where The Lines I Felt The Most, This Would Be A Sick End To A Verse..

Peace, 1

If You Do Audio, I Suggest You Record Yo..Shud Be Sick, Keep Droppin'...

P.S Weighty = Amazin'

['Illicit']

yo thx for the extensive review homie. apreciate it,  yeh I'z thinkin bout recordin it, jus need a beat that oughta fit it.

I'll keep you updated on it.