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« Last Edit: May 05, 2014, 11:05:59 PM by ابرهم عبدالصمد »
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"I will make records as big or bigger than Death Row".   -Dre, Source 1996

"I didn't do nothing but make people money and I didn't leave nobody high and dry.  Any album (on death row) people are going to check for.  But it's time for Dre to worry about Dre.  I'm focused on the new Snoop Doggs, not like that but you know what I mean."

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Re: 3rd VIDEO Battle! (3-0) This time against some wannabe crip....
« Reply #1 on: May 05, 2014, 11:11:30 PM »
Get it Inf...
 

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Re: 3rd VIDEO Battle! (3-0) This time against some wannabe crip....
« Reply #2 on: May 05, 2014, 11:32:56 PM »
I was new so I had to face lesser competition to work my way up.   Those were lower tier opponents in my first 3 matches.  Now I will start facing the middle weights for a couple matches.... so just to give ya'll a lil preview of who I'm facing next....


My next opponent...

<a href="http://www.youtube.com/v/xUWqkilZ4-s?version=3&amp;amp;hl=en_US" target="_blank" class="new_win">http://www.youtube.com/v/xUWqkilZ4-s?version=3&amp;amp;hl=en_US</a>

« Last Edit: May 05, 2014, 11:56:21 PM by ابرهم عبدالصمد »
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"I will make records as big or bigger than Death Row".   -Dre, Source 1996

"I didn't do nothing but make people money and I didn't leave nobody high and dry.  Any album (on death row) people are going to check for.  But it's time for Dre to worry about Dre.  I'm focused on the new Snoop Doggs, not like that but you know what I mean."

Dre -  Source 1996 cover

"Eminem will be bigger than Michael Jackson as long as he doesn't change."

-Dre, Rolling Stones mag 1999 Em cover

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Re: 3rd VIDEO Battle! (3-0) This time against some wannabe crip....
« Reply #3 on: May 05, 2014, 11:40:17 PM »
Ur good fam keep it up. Fear is for bitxhes. Raise up.
 

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Re: 3rd VIDEO Battle! (3-0) This time against some wannabe crip....
« Reply #4 on: May 05, 2014, 11:46:45 PM »
Ur good fam keep it up. Fear is for bitxhes. Raise up.

Thanks homie  8)
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"I will make records as big or bigger than Death Row".   -Dre, Source 1996

"I didn't do nothing but make people money and I didn't leave nobody high and dry.  Any album (on death row) people are going to check for.  But it's time for Dre to worry about Dre.  I'm focused on the new Snoop Doggs, not like that but you know what I mean."

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Re: 3rd VIDEO Battle! (3-0) This time against some wannabe crip....
« Reply #5 on: May 06, 2014, 12:25:27 AM »
Getting a lot better, nice job.
 

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Re: 3rd VIDEO Battle! (3-0) This time against some wannabe crip....
« Reply #6 on: May 06, 2014, 12:51:00 AM »
That's dope, man. Good work. I think you really need to come more prepared though. I'm tell in you, go watch more serious battles and check the flow of their deliveries and punchlines.



I understand you're new to this and obviously not as good as the people in my video. But learning from great battlers would be good for anyone trying to take it seriously.

That delivery and energy is so important. And once you're comfortable enough to not come off as nervous and tense.
 

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Re: 3rd VIDEO Battle! (3-0) This time against some wannabe crip....
« Reply #7 on: May 06, 2014, 01:14:33 AM »
That's dope, man. Good work. I think you really need to come more prepared though. I'm tell in you, go watch more serious battles and check the flow of their deliveries and punchlines.



I understand you're new to this and obviously not as good as the people in my video. But learning from great battlers would be good for anyone trying to take it seriously.

That delivery and energy is so important. And once you're comfortable enough to not come off as nervous and tense.

Appreciate the feedback... and I checked out the video... but if I'm gonna learn from someone about battlin' I'm gonna learn from my era of emcee's I look up to, cats like KRS, Kurupt, Canibus, Eminem, Mos Def, or even the old Scribble Jam Battles or the Rap Olympics type of shit.

But this new generation with the KOTD is kind of not really my style.   I'm better off trying to develop my own style as you see I got my own style I just need more experience...
« Last Edit: May 06, 2014, 01:17:40 AM by ابرهم عبدالصمد »
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"I will make records as big or bigger than Death Row".   -Dre, Source 1996

"I didn't do nothing but make people money and I didn't leave nobody high and dry.  Any album (on death row) people are going to check for.  But it's time for Dre to worry about Dre.  I'm focused on the new Snoop Doggs, not like that but you know what I mean."

Dre -  Source 1996 cover

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Re: 3rd VIDEO Battle! (3-0) This time against some wannabe crip....
« Reply #8 on: May 06, 2014, 01:22:36 AM »
Na, fam. I'm not saying you have to copy that style. Or their wordplay. Just the flow and the delivery. I know it's hard to say "just sound more confident up there" because you are new to it and confidence will come with experience...but if you sounded more confident it would really sound tighter...even with the same bars you used this round.

Excited for the next battle. Guy on the left would give you trouble. You'd beat guy on the right.
 

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Re: 3rd VIDEO Battle! (3-0) This time against some wannabe crip....
« Reply #9 on: May 06, 2014, 01:33:59 AM »
Na, fam. I'm not saying you have to copy that style. Or their wordplay. Just the flow and the delivery. I know it's hard to say "just sound more confident up there" because you are new to it and confidence will come with experience...but if you sounded more confident it would really sound tighter...even with the same bars you used this round.

Excited for the next battle. Guy on the left would give you trouble. You'd beat guy on the right.

word... good lookin' out
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"I will make records as big or bigger than Death Row".   -Dre, Source 1996

"I didn't do nothing but make people money and I didn't leave nobody high and dry.  Any album (on death row) people are going to check for.  But it's time for Dre to worry about Dre.  I'm focused on the new Snoop Doggs, not like that but you know what I mean."

Dre -  Source 1996 cover

"Eminem will be bigger than Michael Jackson as long as he doesn't change."

-Dre, Rolling Stones mag 1999 Em cover

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Re: 3rd VIDEO Battle! (3-0) This time against some wannabe crip....
« Reply #10 on: May 06, 2014, 12:27:55 PM »
CLIMBIN THE RANKS
 

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Re: 3rd VIDEO Battle! (3-0) This time against some wannabe crip....
« Reply #11 on: May 06, 2014, 02:51:03 PM »
CLIMBIN THE RANKS

Yeah dawg.. done with the light-weights now it's on to the middle-weight division
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"I will make records as big or bigger than Death Row".   -Dre, Source 1996

"I didn't do nothing but make people money and I didn't leave nobody high and dry.  Any album (on death row) people are going to check for.  But it's time for Dre to worry about Dre.  I'm focused on the new Snoop Doggs, not like that but you know what I mean."

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"Eminem will be bigger than Michael Jackson as long as he doesn't change."

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Re: 3rd VIDEO Battle! (3-0) This time against some wannabe crip....
« Reply #12 on: May 11, 2014, 01:49:59 AM »
Oh shit!!!!

I'm give u some feedback from the audience perspective tho...don't lead so much with the 'historical scientist invader' shit so much or you're liable to come off as gimmick. Better just to kill em with metaphors and such. You're not a comic book character/time traveller. But reincarnation concepts can be cool...the KRS1 reference was GOLD tho homie!!
 

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Re: 3rd VIDEO Battle! (3-0) This time against some wannabe crip....
« Reply #13 on: May 12, 2014, 12:45:44 AM »
Oh shit!!!!

I'm give u some feedback from the audience perspective tho...don't lead so much with the 'historical scientist invader' shit so much or you're liable to come off as gimmick. Better just to kill em with metaphors and such. You're not a comic book character/time traveller. But reincarnation concepts can be cool...the KRS1 reference was GOLD tho homie!!

thanks for the feedback homie... but the "historical scientist invader comic book character/time traveler" thing is not a gimmick.  First of all my name is Infinite and Infinite has no fixed time or place.  Second of all my alias Mekkan Refugee is from a different time and different century and it was a jinn that possessed me and put me into a state of misery (Missouri), case of bi-location similar to reincarnation....  
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"I will make records as big or bigger than Death Row".   -Dre, Source 1996

"I didn't do nothing but make people money and I didn't leave nobody high and dry.  Any album (on death row) people are going to check for.  But it's time for Dre to worry about Dre.  I'm focused on the new Snoop Doggs, not like that but you know what I mean."

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"Eminem will be bigger than Michael Jackson as long as he doesn't change."

-Dre, Rolling Stones mag 1999 Em cover

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« Reply #14 on: May 12, 2014, 02:22:31 AM »
Yeah but your audience don't know that^^
 

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Re: 3rd VIDEO Battle! (3-0) This time against some wannabe crip....
« Reply #15 on: May 12, 2014, 04:21:18 AM »
Yeah but your audience don't know that^^

If they don't know they betta ask somebody... they really betta ask somebody...
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"I will make records as big or bigger than Death Row".   -Dre, Source 1996

"I didn't do nothing but make people money and I didn't leave nobody high and dry.  Any album (on death row) people are going to check for.  But it's time for Dre to worry about Dre.  I'm focused on the new Snoop Doggs, not like that but you know what I mean."

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« Reply #16 on: May 12, 2014, 05:54:54 AM »
Yeah but your audience don't know that^^

If they don't know they betta ask somebody... they really betta ask somebody...

Ok brodiebro I'm just giving you some real world feedback. If I was in the audience and didn't know anything about you I'd think you were quicker than the other guy but half of your shit didn't make too much sense. So I'm thinking you're gonna get known as that guy
 

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« Reply #17 on: May 12, 2014, 01:00:42 PM »
Yeah but your audience don't know that^^

If they don't know they betta ask somebody... they really betta ask somebody...

Ok brodiebro I'm just giving you some real world feedback. If I was in the audience and didn't know anything about you I'd think you were quicker than the other guy but half of your shit didn't make too much sense. So I'm thinking you're gonna get known as that guy


that was the best exchange this forums seen in a second hahahahah


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« Reply #18 on: May 12, 2014, 02:50:37 PM »
Yeah but your audience don't know that^^

If they don't know they betta ask somebody... they really betta ask somebody...

Ok brodiebro I'm just giving you some real world feedback. If I was in the audience and didn't know anything about you I'd think you were quicker than the other guy but half of your shit didn't make too much sense. So I'm thinking you're gonna get known as that guy


that was the best exchange this forums seen in a second hahahahah


#betashit


LOOOOOOOOOL!!!
 

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« Reply #19 on: May 12, 2014, 05:36:24 PM »

Yeah but your audience don't know that^^

If they don't know they betta ask somebody... they really betta ask somebody...

Ok brodiebro I'm just giving you some real world feedback. If I was in the audience and didn't know anything about you I'd think you were quicker than the other guy but half of your shit didn't make too much sense. So I'm thinking you're gonna get known as that guy

I appreciate the feedback but to take the character development and personal evolutionary background out of my raps would take away may purpose...

After I was put under a spell by the jinn and sent to live in misery (Missouri) trapped in the body of a man named Brian just trying to fit in... I spent a few years wandering outside the margins of society until I came to realize my true identity thru my artistry and so hiphop is allowing me to construct a ship and build a map to get back to where I used to be at when I was a scribe for the Ottoman tribes documenting the lives of all the soldiers that died.

So if I give that up then I lose my purpose and I'm nothing more than a shit stain on a urinal with a sign saying "out of service"
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"I will make records as big or bigger than Death Row".   -Dre, Source 1996

"I didn't do nothing but make people money and I didn't leave nobody high and dry.  Any album (on death row) people are going to check for.  But it's time for Dre to worry about Dre.  I'm focused on the new Snoop Doggs, not like that but you know what I mean."

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« Reply #20 on: May 12, 2014, 05:45:03 PM »


that was the best exchange this forums seen in a second hahahahah


#betashit

Shut up fatass, wheatdick, devil... I'm gonna have to rap wack just so you can C my level... u ain't ever seen the C or the ocean, only way you move is in slow motion/ yet u a whale with a wheatdick/ usin hiphop just to promote your juvenile tricks/ forming troll squads and hiding behind a "web" of hatred/ I'm gonna crash your hardrive and break thru the 'matrix'/ cause your really 'software' and makeshift....
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"I will make records as big or bigger than Death Row".   -Dre, Source 1996

"I didn't do nothing but make people money and I didn't leave nobody high and dry.  Any album (on death row) people are going to check for.  But it's time for Dre to worry about Dre.  I'm focused on the new Snoop Doggs, not like that but you know what I mean."

Dre -  Source 1996 cover

"Eminem will be bigger than Michael Jackson as long as he doesn't change."

-Dre, Rolling Stones mag 1999 Em cover

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« Reply #21 on: May 12, 2014, 05:52:35 PM »


that was the best exchange this forums seen in a second hahahahah


#betashit

Shut up fatass, wheatdick, devil... I'm gonna have to rap wack just so you can C my level... u ain't ever seen the C or the ocean, only way you move is in slow motion/ yet u a whale with a wheatdick/ usin hiphop just to promote your juvenile tricks/ forming troll squads and hiding behind a "web" of hatred/ I'm gonna crash your hardrive and break thru the 'matrix'/ cause your really 'software' and makeshift....
your shitty mother is devil ah ah ah

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« Reply #22 on: May 12, 2014, 06:37:23 PM »
bars of fury...speaking of bars has the doctor modified your prescription yet brian?

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« Reply #23 on: May 12, 2014, 09:18:06 PM »
bars of fury...speaking of bars has the doctor modified your prescription yet brian?

I'm fine bro.. don't worry about me.  How's your photo-shopping and computer animated voice-over thing going?
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"I will make records as big or bigger than Death Row".   -Dre, Source 1996

"I didn't do nothing but make people money and I didn't leave nobody high and dry.  Any album (on death row) people are going to check for.  But it's time for Dre to worry about Dre.  I'm focused on the new Snoop Doggs, not like that but you know what I mean."

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« Reply #24 on: May 13, 2014, 06:35:18 PM »
bars of fury...speaking of bars has the doctor modified your prescription yet brian?

I'm fine bro.. don't worry about me.  How's your photo-shopping and computer animated voice-over thing going?


im at the top of my bracket in computer animated voice-over things. im taking on all competitors...


...anyone whos doing computer animated voice-over things has to go through ME . IM THAT NIGGA