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you is insignificant
« on: March 29, 2003, 03:29:20 PM »
I don't exist. And nobody notice.



You live dying and die to live



You is not special.
Cause I don't care where I belong no more
What we share or not I will ignore
And I won't waste my time fitting in
Cause I don't think contrast is a sin
No, it's not a sin
 

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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #1 on: March 29, 2003, 04:56:22 PM »
Stop smoking crack.
 

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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #2 on: March 29, 2003, 04:59:34 PM »
sorry for bein to deep for this superficial society
Cause I don't care where I belong no more
What we share or not I will ignore
And I won't waste my time fitting in
Cause I don't think contrast is a sin
No, it's not a sin
 

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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #3 on: March 29, 2003, 05:26:13 PM »
sorry for bein to deep for this superficial society

Uh yeah, that's right. It's US who are fucked up, not the guy posting nonsensical messages which waste our time.
 

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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #4 on: March 29, 2003, 07:39:38 PM »
I don't exist. And nobody notice.



You live dying and die to live



You is not special.

i think you should change your avatar
 

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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #5 on: March 29, 2003, 11:13:36 PM »
I don't exist. And nobody notice.



You live dying and die to live



You is not special.
WTF  ???
 

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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #6 on: March 30, 2003, 12:01:35 AM »
I AM SOMEBODY!
 

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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #7 on: March 30, 2003, 03:45:09 AM »
maybe I should stop postin stuff like this on Rap Boards.
Cause I don't care where I belong no more
What we share or not I will ignore
And I won't waste my time fitting in
Cause I don't think contrast is a sin
No, it's not a sin
 

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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #8 on: March 30, 2003, 03:57:38 AM »
maybe I should stop postin stuff like this on Rap Boards.


i like your pics but i dont understand wtf your on about

there is hope


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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #9 on: March 30, 2003, 04:01:20 AM »
so... maybe I should explain the hell my poem is about?
Cause I don't care where I belong no more
What we share or not I will ignore
And I won't waste my time fitting in
Cause I don't think contrast is a sin
No, it's not a sin
 

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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #10 on: March 30, 2003, 04:02:29 AM »
so... maybe I should explain the hell my poem is about?

please

there is hope


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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #11 on: March 30, 2003, 04:08:55 AM »
that poem wasn't exactly complex or profound. i like the basic sentiment but it's somewhat contrived.

you is having the bad grammar to
« Last Edit: March 30, 2003, 04:09:31 AM by Kaidy »
 

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« Reply #12 on: March 30, 2003, 04:10:15 AM »
I dont wanna discourage you, but whatever 1 does it will be insignificant.
Even if you die, of course sum cry and they dont lie if they say you had a good character and they liked you. But in the end, that's insignificant too.

I dont exist. I cant. cause im too deep for a society in which nobody wants to think.
ppl dont like to think. they do all they can not to think.  because if they do:
they realize that they are nothing. because they only shine, they dont reflect.

Life is just a long long cruel and painful death.. imagine bein shot and livin and dyin slowly. that's life. Life=Death.
Cause I don't care where I belong no more
What we share or not I will ignore
And I won't waste my time fitting in
Cause I don't think contrast is a sin
No, it's not a sin
 

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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #13 on: March 30, 2003, 04:13:03 AM »
that poem wasn't exactly complex or profound. i like the basic sentiment but it's somewhat contrived.

you is having the bad grammar to

the grammar is intention. i know it means nobody noticeS and you ARE ..
grammar dont matter (i know doesnt is right :D )
Cause I don't care where I belong no more
What we share or not I will ignore
And I won't waste my time fitting in
Cause I don't think contrast is a sin
No, it's not a sin
 

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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #14 on: March 30, 2003, 04:14:31 AM »
I dont wanna discourage you, but whatever 1 does it will be insignificant.
Even if you die, of course sum cry and they dont lie if they say you had a good character and they liked you. But in the end, that's insignificant too.

I dont exist. I cant. cause im too deep for a society in which nobody wants to think.
ppl dont like to think. they do all they can not to think.  because if they do:
they realize that they are nothing. because they only shine, they dont reflect.

Life is just a long long cruel and painful death.. imagine bein shot and livin and dyin slowly. that's life. Life=Death.

ive started to understand

there is hope


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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #15 on: March 30, 2003, 10:53:46 AM »
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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #16 on: March 30, 2003, 11:14:06 AM »
the only time i could ever think up something like that is if i was high......what's that telling you?


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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #17 on: March 30, 2003, 12:17:15 PM »
you dont have many friends do you...

it's not about that
Cause I don't care where I belong no more
What we share or not I will ignore
And I won't waste my time fitting in
Cause I don't think contrast is a sin
No, it's not a sin
 

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« Reply #18 on: March 30, 2003, 12:38:48 PM »
I dont wanna discourage you, but whatever 1 does it will be insignificant.
Even if you die, of course sum cry and they dont lie if they say you had a good character and they liked you. But in the end, that's insignificant too.

I dont exist. I cant. cause im too deep for a society in which nobody wants to think.
ppl dont like to think. they do all they can not to think.  because if they do:
they realize that they are nothing. because they only shine, they dont reflect.

Life is just a long long cruel and painful death.. imagine bein shot and livin and dyin slowly. that's life. Life=Death.

Ridiculous concept. Your actions dictate whether or not you change the world.

Look at FDR, Churchill, Alexander, and...Hitler. You do exist, because society is deeper than artsy poems that have no rhythym or rhyme.
 

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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #19 on: March 30, 2003, 01:11:18 PM »
rhythm or rhyme doesnt matter shit.

I can rhyme as tecca nina but I dont have to. Rhymes kill content what kills the expression of feelings in this case

dont act like you know what life's or my thoughts are about, where the fuck is the  day nursery you should be in right now?? gotta make a call
« Last Edit: March 30, 2003, 01:12:49 PM by 7even »
Cause I don't care where I belong no more
What we share or not I will ignore
And I won't waste my time fitting in
Cause I don't think contrast is a sin
No, it's not a sin
 

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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #20 on: March 30, 2003, 01:13:56 PM »
rhythm or rhyme doesnt matter shit.

I cant rhyme as tecca nina but I dont have to. Rhymes kill content what kills the expression of feelings in this case

dont act like you what life's or my thoughts are about, where the fuck is the  day nursery you should be in right now?? gotta make a call

I just love how you respond to an observation on your poem with a personal insult.

By the way, your crack addiction is becoming yet more obvious.

Also, yes, rhymes can be artificial, but the Masque of Anarchy, the deepest political poem ever written, rhymed. But I guess you're too shit to combine rhymes and content.

Now, if we get back to the concept: ridiculous. For all the reasons already listed.
 

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« Reply #21 on: March 30, 2003, 01:16:07 PM »
constructive critic I dont bother. you dont do it though.

--> insult
Cause I don't care where I belong no more
What we share or not I will ignore
And I won't waste my time fitting in
Cause I don't think contrast is a sin
No, it's not a sin
 

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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #22 on: March 30, 2003, 01:18:54 PM »
rhythm or rhyme doesnt matter shit.

I cant rhyme as tecca nina but I dont have to. Rhymes kill content what kills the expression of feelings in this case

dont act like you what life's or my thoughts are about, where the fuck is the  day nursery you should be in right now?? gotta make a call

I just love how you respond to an observation on your poem with a personal insult.

By the way, your crack addiction is becoming yet more obvious.

Also, yes, rhymes can be artificial, but the Masque of Anarchy, the deepest political poem ever written, rhymed.. But I guess you're too shit to combine rhymes and content.

Now, if we get back to the concept: ridiculous. For all the reasons already listed.


do you just combine my poem with the best political poem ever?

thanx. cant be that bad then, huh?
Cause I don't care where I belong no more
What we share or not I will ignore
And I won't waste my time fitting in
Cause I don't think contrast is a sin
No, it's not a sin
 

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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #23 on: March 30, 2003, 02:22:55 PM »
2 words: YOU SUCK!


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Re:you is insignificant
« Reply #24 on: March 30, 2003, 04:42:33 PM »
dein gedicht erinnert mich partiell an t.s. eliot's the hollow men. bezüglich dem hampelmann über mir brauchst du dir keine gedanken machen. seine einzige waffe ist sein brett vorm kopf.