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After Death (Keystyle)
« on: March 29, 2003, 03:14:40 AM »
its kinda hard wit you not around,
kno you in heaven smilin down,
lookin at the whole world goin round
see me scrappin, pound for pound
but i still stand proud, thinkin of you
laughin when i remeber what we used to do
you were more than a grandparent to me, something special
we had a bond like a rose to its pettle
and when it falls off the rose is a shadow of its former self
i was like that, then i looked at myself in the mirror
iu saw a younger veriosn of you, and decided yo do it
put it all behind me, knowin your protectin' me
im connecting, your legacy will live on through me
dont worry, i'll look after your girls
i know its hard for them, and they were your world
heaven if a forgiving place, and im running this race
i look foward to the day when i can see your face
« Last Edit: March 29, 2003, 03:15:24 AM by HipHopPoet »
 

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Re:After Death (Keystyle)
« Reply #1 on: March 29, 2003, 03:54:26 AM »
Yo, I Was Feelin' This, Deep Drop...I Wanna Hear It In Audio, Shud Sound Amazin'...
The Vocab Was Tyte, Flow Was Ill...

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its kinda hard wit you not around,
kno you in heaven smilin down,
lookin at the whole world goin round
see me scrappin, pound for pound
but i still stand proud, thinkin of you

Flow Was Ill On This Part, Vocab Was Ok..

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laughin when i remeber what we used to do
you were more than a grandparent to me, something special
we had a bond like a rose to its pettle
and when it falls off the rose is a shadow of its former self
i was like that, then i looked at myself in the mirror
iu saw a younger veriosn of you, and decided yo do it

This Part I Felt To The Top, It Was Amazin'...Vocab, Flow, This Part Had Everythin'...

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put it all behind me, knowin your protectin' me
im connecting, your legacy will live on through me
dont worry, i'll look after your girls
i know its hard for them, and they were your world
heaven if a forgiving place, and im running this race
i look foward to the day when i can see your face

I Felt This Part The Most, The Last Two Lines Ended It Perfectly, Flow Was Ill....

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Re:After Death (Keystyle)
« Reply #2 on: March 29, 2003, 01:15:37 PM »
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Re:After Death (Keystyle)
« Reply #3 on: March 29, 2003, 05:01:29 PM »
Sup homie, this touched man, i felt the message, and understood what ya feeling.. we all gotta put shit behind us and get along with life.. need a chat ever! holla at me.. you know where im at!

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