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Materialistic
« on: March 31, 2003, 05:09:36 PM »
Caught up in a materialistic world
Disguising myself to convince girls
I'm caught up in a materialistic world
Its never ending like a whind-whirl


I'm tryin to be distinct /
break from the simplicity /
Never sat back to think /
That all the difference needed /
was right infront of me /
less far then near /
standing juxtaposed in da mirror /
everyday imposing myself /
the man you saw appeared /
was really someone else /
now i break-the-mold-from-materialism /
and put at stake-the-untold-for-ur-criticism /

Caught up in a materialistic world
Disguising myself to convince girls
I'm caught up in a materialistic world
Its never ending like a whind-whirl


Now its time to take~a~stand /
Fuk the superflous faking~brands /
The U.S., the media, all influence culture /
From Guess, Fubu, and down to structure /
Business grow, while we're economically ruptured /
But we sit back and try to fit-in /
When all we needed to be is that within /
But this tape is being eject-so /
I could go back to life being only me, Ernesto /

Kinda short, and more like a rough-draft.  Wrote it in 3rd period class, but gimme feedback.


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Re:Materialistic
« Reply #1 on: April 01, 2003, 02:15:03 PM »
Deep.. The chours thingy wasnt bad... Woulda been nice if it was longer..
 

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Re:Materialistic
« Reply #2 on: April 01, 2003, 03:30:53 PM »
thnx, yeh i haven't finished it yet... uppin


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Re:Materialistic
« Reply #3 on: April 01, 2003, 05:08:18 PM »
thnx, yeh i haven't finished it yet... uppin

i wouldn't mind peepin' the full thing when it's done, playa, keep it goin'
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Re:Materialistic
« Reply #4 on: April 02, 2003, 05:49:48 AM »
yeh keep workin on it homie, should turn out nice
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Re:Materialistic
« Reply #5 on: April 02, 2003, 07:30:09 AM »
yo it was ight
The Titans, also known as the elder gods, ruled the earth before the Olympians overthrew them. The ruler of the Titans was Cronus who was de-throned by his son Zeus. Most of the Titans fought with Cronus against Zeus and were punished by being banished to Tartarus