need some help on this beat....

[Sir Petey]

heres a snippit of something im working on. what do yall think it lacks? which direction should i take? bonus points if u know the sample i used.

http://www.sharebeast.com/lncjbz52quk4


much love yall

[Sccit]

IT'S TOO REPETITIVE...U NEED TO SWITCH UP THE TEMPO OF THE SAMPLE AND ALTERNATE. MAYBE SOME PIANO KEYS TO KICK IN MIDWAY THROUGH THE VERSE.


SIDE NOTE, U GOT LIKE 3 DIFFERENT NAMES FOR BEATS THAT U ALTERNATE BETWEEN HUH?


THIS  1 WAS CALLED "JAZZY" TOO:


<a href="https://www.youtube.com/v/f9X9a3ngLm8" target="_blank" class="new_win">https://www.youtube.com/v/f9X9a3ngLm8</a>

[Space RockStar SkyStalker Machine]

i saw your ass ahha

[Sir Petey]

i know its repetitive brodenheimer its a demo , thats why im asking for help its a 90 sec snippet of a sample and a drum....and it honestly depends where i make the beat lol jazzy on my lap top and my computer has a different version one might have just used the kick and snare from a previous version so it had the same name i be high as shit and just name a vibe or color or some shit it gives me. they all use bootleg software lmao not sure i should try and link them i think its dope you got a more comprehensive of my overview of all my beats then i do thats why i always hit you up like "remember the name of the one that was all jazzy fam?" and then you reply "was it called jazzy?" and im like "oh yeah, good look fam" we may have had that exact convo

[Sccit]

i know its repetitive brodenheimer its a demo , thats why im asking for help its a 90 sec snippet of a sample and a drum....and it honestly depends where i make the beat lol jazzy on my lap top and my computer has a different version one might have just used the kick and snare from a previous version so it had the same name i be high as shit and just name a vibe or color or some shit it gives me. they all use bootleg software lmao not sure i should try and link them i think its dope you got a more comprehensive of my overview of all my beats then i do thats why i always hit you up like "remember the name of the one that was all jazzy fam?" and then you reply "was it called jazzy?" and im like "oh yeah, good look fam" we may have had that exact convo

my mistake, i didnt mean switch the tempo of the sample, what i meant to say was switch the key of the sample up. so that it doesnt just play in the same key over n over.....like alternate it back n forth, if u get what im sayin. peep this track for an example:

<a href="https://www.youtube.com/v/uBUjGHW14YM" target="_blank" class="new_win">https://www.youtube.com/v/uBUjGHW14YM</a>

^notice how at 1:15 the key of the sample switches up....shit sounds dope and adds an element to it.

[Sir Petey]

Fa sho, I tend to do that in beats alot that I make from scratch, easy way to add variation.

I'll try that and post results in a bit

[Space RockStar SkyStalker Machine]

Add the variation n you good