Author Topic: The Payback  (Read 184 times)

TheSheriff

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The Payback
« on: May 04, 2003, 08:37:57 AM »
Y’all clown me for my thin blood, shit, y’all act like I got abducted,
All because I’m smarter than you, well faggot, fuck you too,
With your arrogance, bitch you’re ToNe deaf, I’m coming out swinging with my left,
Leaving you idiots bereft of a brain, now look as I bring the pain, I usually
Use words in the main, but when these tramps say my name, I come out with
Physical lyrical magic, it’s tragic how these people think they can mess with me,
Well, let’s see…

Then there’s those pussy ass hypocrites, well know this, I don’t give two shits
Whether you like me or not, because all that I got is my honour and the knowledge
I rock; I never asked you to get involved, now the problem’s solved, all because
You bit once too often, and so I hit you out the park like Kenny Lofton…

Now with these all these fake gangstas and biters, you’d expect there to
Be some fighters, and here we are, infecting you like SARS, ignoring your gay pride
Cars, and refusing to drink in your homo bars, Poetic Underground, bringing you
Pleasant sound, well you know I’m renowned for not fearing the cowards who
Refuse to take opinion, I’m the minion of Angel Michael, life is a cycle,
Sword of Truth, coming hard and loose, more Poetic than Dr Seuss,
And now you’re dancing for my deuce deuce, so back the fuck up before
You use your luck up, and I lose my temper and buck up, you failed suck ups…
 

vitodeluca

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Re:The Payback
« Reply #1 on: May 05, 2003, 04:36:32 PM »
Yo, that was tight man, I especially liked the last 4-6 bars of your first verse
"I’m coming out swinging with my left,
Leaving you idiots bereft of a brain, now look as I bring the pain, I usually
Use words in the main, but when these tramps say my name, I come out with
Physical lyrical magic, it’s tragic how these people think they can mess with me,
Well, let’s see…"

Anybody that can use "bereft" in a freestyle gets props from me, LOL

Good shit man


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TheSheriff

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Re:The Payback
« Reply #2 on: May 06, 2003, 06:48:45 PM »
Thanks man.
 

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Re:The Payback
« Reply #3 on: May 07, 2003, 07:50:43 AM »
yo owen even thought i dont like you
i got to give credit where credit is do
so it was good
The Titans, also known as the elder gods, ruled the earth before the Olympians overthrew them. The ruler of the Titans was Cronus who was de-throned by his son Zeus. Most of the Titans fought with Cronus against Zeus and were punished by being banished to Tartarus