abstruse vs mack

[abstruse]

Since you didn't respon to my pm i'll set it up

15 bar max
First to 4
3-0 = K.O.
Oh yeh, no dickryding votes plz

I'll spit later on tonight.

[abstruse]

Wrote this at school, dropped it now cuz I wont be on later.  No beef as always. FEEDBACK, this is my first battle.

grab-a-pen and shoot at this fake anikan i'm serious// (1)
assailant when another ass-is-bent means he's devious// (2)
the sounds-enticed, wit mack now-insight stalled-n-tamed//
found-to-bite and clowned-his-name into the hall-of-shame// (3)
step-to-me and get socked-silly, like Nickel-nine you mock rock-city // (4)
grab my nina and aim at the queena(of) WCC, expect to get popped //
ya-lack-50, i'ma-switch-quickly, ya status to how to get robbed // (5)
You Aretha but the respect from A-B-S aint mutual //
Like K-R-S I teach flow to these inferior pupils // (6)
Ironic i drop finishin punches, but weak rappers like you i aint used-to//

(1) He had a collab with Kalipzo where he said he was WCC's Darth Vader aka Anikan Skywalker.
(2) Assailant - A person who attacks another
(3) Really no explanation needed.
(4) Royce 5'9 is Nickel Nine, and he made a song called Rock City, but he aint even from Detroit
(5) He made a keystyle called How to Rob.
(6) He had another keystyle where he used the rolls of a Teacher & a Pupil.

[da_notorious_mack]

dammmmmmmmmmmmmmmn i jus had my verse woite an lost it...fuck...ill get it up by tomorropw

[vitodeluca]

Daaammmn, that was a tight verse homie.  

[abstruse]

I've had that happen to me at least 3 times, now I just type it in Notepad before I post, just in case something happens. SOS
^Save Often Sucka

[da_notorious_mack]

damn another lame studied-my-life
so when i say these hoes luv-me-im-right
spit ugly-on-mics..you duck-me-in-fights
fuck-me-im-tight...
any punk wanna test...VDK we ride-an-kill-um
R Kelly mufucka...talkin bout "hide-your-children"
yeah you spit aiight...but ya gun-play-worth-less
you look like a ho...with that sign one-day-service..
does you mum like her sons gay-purpose?
abtruse wanna move like mack-move,but the facts-prove
that this kid is wack-dude...
theres a 100 dudes betta than u id ratyher kill-in-stead
i mean look at ya pic...you look like the living-dead!
ya shit spits will-impress,jus cus u researched-my-history
but still lil homie you aint-shit-to-me....

[T.J.]

this is my first battle.

dont lie

[Kill]

if this is your first battle I got a question: How much shit had you already written in your life before this ?

Cause that shit's pretty dope, you got nice vocab, you use multis, you did sum research and hit mack wit personals...

['Illicit']

yeh abstruse shit was hot, he had some punchlines, personal, good multis overall a tight verse, but Mack, though a bit simple, hit harder imo, multis as always good punchlines a bit more attacking. if abstruse woulda made more out of his great research as in creating better punches n personals out of em he woulda had this.

vote: Mack

[abstruse]

Mack, thats not me in my sig, its Slug from Rhymesayers . Oh Answer and Kill, this is my first keystyle battle, i've battled before, but those were freestyle battles. I post a keystyle here and there and i've been spittin for a bit(5 months), just never got into battling.

GET SOME VOTES UP!!!!

[bostonboy]

sup I cant vote since me n mack are in the same crew.... but solid battle..... you did your research on mack n hit with some good punches.... mack as per usual came back strong.... lets see what happens.... yo abstruse we need votes on my battle with cee hoody

[·SiNiStEr·]

aight.. good battle


Mack - simplistic and mediocre hitting hits but i like ya multis.. they tru multis and i can only speak of 2 others that keep the multis raw. simplistic gets a lil annoying but its reminds me of a tru keystyle battle with the multis and 2 bar punches.

Abstruse - not bad for a newbie. hard hitting but sorta short.. why is there such a difference in bars here? anyway, good hittin verse wit a good flow.

Both verses were pretty good, better than i expected, both had a decent amount of personals and pretty much the same punch amount.

Mack - 4 / 5
Abstruse - 3.85 / 5

Mack took this cuz of his multis were tru to dubcc style and abstruse's verse was just damn short. But good battle to both and keep spittin'

Vote - Mack

[vitodeluca]

This is a close battle IMO, so I gotta break the shit down into categories:

personals:
 Abstruse, but it's hard for Mack to know anything about ya since you're a newbie so it's hard to give this one too much weight
flow: Mack, his shit is just too tight

metas:
Tie, I thought you guys both had some ill shit in there, enjoyed readin' it
multis: Mack, his multis were spot on everytime, and a little more complex

punches: Mack, but just by a hair on this one.  Both of you had good punches.

Gotta give the battle to Mack, he did real well considering he knew very little about you, he came tight as always and had some real good punchline and metaphors.  This shit was close though, and abstruse, you shit was tight too, this was a good battle.

Vote=Mack

[abstruse]

Well I got K.O.'d, good battle Mack.  This'll just make me better, till next time.  Thanks for voting yall.