Author Topic: Some of my keystyles (Read 168 times)

godeatgod · « **on:** May 24, 2003, 08:51:55 PM »

Please note that I don't listen to all that much rap and I'm real new to free/keystyling so, be easy with the coments.

I spit these flows for the undead zombie/he raped my mother needed some cash and called me/I said yo fuck you im broke as a mofo/he fucked my dad, stole his cash to buy blow/now hes at my dealer asking for the powder/fucker gave him a grand and all he got was baking flour/sniffing that shit it sizzles in his head/blowing up a brain that's been long dead/I'm going out with a bang so I'll fuck this bitch like a true playa/busted on her face and said "hey, thanks kara"

Fuck a whore's ass til she's blue/ with a black tenis shoe/spending all my money all the malls/laces causeing damage to your vaginal walls/moaning as you cum blood/my foot on your back/your face in the mud/after I cum I'll finsish you with a steel rod/done for the day like the Marquia De Sade/I'll end this now in fear of no rent/artistic expressed crushed by our government.

I'm just fucking around now/I'll pull out the big guns later/cos I'm down with my nigga Dragons Raider/Pulling a train on that whore Mrs. Bush, like a plow/GW walked in, as I blew my nut on her face like BLOW/He started talking threesome and I was like "what'd you say?!"/before I could run in came the CIA/ducking bullets, and a flame thrower/kicked Mrs. Bush in the cunt just to show her/that I'm above the United States government/down with Sadam but not from Iraq I was sent from Brazil/to get my fill of white pussy like Buffalo Bill/elderly hips are like hams/but still them old hoes can kick out the jams

I walked into K-Mart and everything was a blur/cos I bump into this girl named Clair Obscur/she look like she had some ass implants in her booty/a replica of J-Lo, wish I was her boyfriend Rudy/I'll close this casket because most goth kiddies don't like rap/bring me the Cold, Disturbed, and all that sap

Sucking on a popsicle like it was Trent Ressnor's cock/she liked the Spice Girls so I pulled my glock/I asked her on a Net date but all she did was mock/picture me a 44 year old perv and her, 16 what a shock

She can't even come up with a good come back/maybe it's cos of the sperm all over her back/she'd fuck any anorexic guy who looks like Brian Warner/slap her young face with his cock and floor her

Why did you ask about my girlfriend Yana?/do you want me and Christy to get it on with ya?/this freaky bitch is wanting a three way/my cock is so famous you have to put it lay away/and as for Chris she isn't a lesbo/she doesn't lick vagina like you hoe

Look at VioletFire/trying to diss me/think you can roll with me sissy?/well if you want in theres a couple things you must know/I don't fuck with black magic and I don't own a crow/I don't wear makeup or act like Satan/black isn't a color that I be paintin'/and I don't fuck with the homo sex either/if you try to suck me off I'll fuck your moms beaver

Ignyte · « **Reply #1 on:** May 25, 2003, 11:28:07 PM »

yeah it was alright, a bit simplistic in some ways and it dropped slightly picked up and dropped.
dont know whats up with that marilyn pic.

Reef · « **Reply #2 on:** May 26, 2003, 11:55:52 AM »

Not too bad man.. Stick around and keep spittin

Kill · « **Reply #3 on:** May 26, 2003, 04:29:24 PM »

Quote from: Gareefa on May 26, 2003, 11:55:52 AM

Not too bad man.. Stick around and keep spittin

Juda · « **Reply #4 on:** June 03, 2003, 01:56:46 PM »

nice job guy, im feelin' it

TheSheriff · « **Reply #5 on:** June 03, 2003, 01:58:12 PM »

that very first line was great (zombie/called me), the rest was aight, keep it up

gyrl1da · « **Reply #6 on:** June 03, 2003, 02:31:32 PM »

hmmm.... well u have talent at writting. the subject matter was a lil bit hard core, not that there's anything wrong wit that... lets just say u got a good imagination. keep workin hard cuz u can definitely write!