Author Topic: Was this any good?  (Read 150 times)

TheSheriff

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Was this any good?
« on: May 31, 2003, 08:29:47 PM »
I can’t believe shit like this, where I get beat like this,
And I can’t give a challenge, when I get ripped like this;
I used to be serious material, vicious and evil, but now,
I’m just another old veteran, long time ago I was better than
Nearly everybody else, but now, I’m not even bad for your health,
In the list of MCs, I’m not even twelfth, time has gone past me,
In my room I’m the last G, homies dead, skill gone, hurting head,
No longer the bomb, I remember when I was down with Tom,
When he was the Lightweight Champ, but career is like a lava lamp,
Up and down, now I’m the Klass Klown, my robes gone from purple to brown,
The Sheriff has almost been chased out of town, caught in his dressing gown,
And pound for pound, I’m no longer an equal, more like a sequel,
Stuck in the burbs with herbs, used to clown wit homies on pervs,
In De Renne, back when God was my friend, I used to tend
To kill MCs for substantial fees, now I’ve lost the keys
To the Hall of Fame, I’ve past my game, it’s now only a memory,
Lost its energy, when the World Was Mine, I’m past my prime…

WYCLEF: One time, one time…

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Well?
 

pappy

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Re:Was this any good?
« Reply #1 on: May 31, 2003, 09:02:21 PM »
i got mentioned  :D  it was dope
 

Ignyte

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Re:Was this any good?
« Reply #2 on: June 01, 2003, 02:40:15 AM »
yeah pretty cool, nice short story.
Coz you see at the age of birth, we was contaminated with the caucasions curse/
I dont know what came first, the pententiary or the purse/
But I aint into that crap, I'd rather lay back and start working on my raps/
While you niggas stay strapped, with a hoe on your lap, with a dirty puss and crack/
While I stay intact with my people, and carry the mic which is lethal/
 

bez

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Re:Was this any good?
« Reply #3 on: June 01, 2003, 06:51:50 AM »
yer dope
 

Inspectah

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Re:Was this any good?
« Reply #4 on: June 01, 2003, 08:34:29 AM »