Author Topic: REAL SHIT... (Read 159 times)

da_notorious_mack · « **on:** May 29, 2003, 04:01:40 AM »

im chillin-at-home,tryna write-a-rhyme,but im alwayz feelin-alone..
i get insight-at-times,after a night-of-crimes,i cant deal-wit-the-drone..
get "real-wit-it-homes",they tell-me,theyll-be,con-sequences..
but i told-ya,i got the mindstate of a sold-ier,runnin along-the-trenches..
tryin to prolong-intenseness,attack-my-foes,for stacks-of-doe..
how many attempted the premptive,my spits effective,mack-can-flow..
jus inspect-it,im the best-kid,sine Pac drove-thru-Vegas without a vest-BITCH!
throw blows-at-haters,attacks get high scores like Kobe-fa-tha-Lakerz!,dont test-this..
go against me youll regret-it,dont fret-it,imma fuckin the last-crazy-force..
dont believe-in-me?to prove it easy-G,just ask-Shady-Source!..

jus tryin ta elevate.....

Kill · « **Reply #1 on:** May 29, 2003, 04:05:41 AM »

another nice keystyle...

·SiNiStEr· · « **Reply #2 on:** May 29, 2003, 08:31:55 AM »

Quote from: Kill on May 29, 2003, 04:05:41 AM

another nice keystyle...

vitodeluca · « **Reply #3 on:** May 29, 2003, 08:42:31 PM »

I like it man, it seems lately (this key and your latest board battle) you've been incorporating a little more complex rhyming scheme than in the past. I don't know if it's intentional, but I like it, it's tight. Good rhyme Mack.

T.J. · « **Reply #4 on:** May 29, 2003, 09:40:53 PM »

Quote from: Kill on May 29, 2003, 04:05:41 AM

another nice keystyle...

abstruse · « **Reply #5 on:** May 29, 2003, 10:49:32 PM »

Another nice keystyle Mack. Your keystyles always appear to me of having near flawless flow, the way you correlate multies is amazing. It also seems to me you've improved since you visited shadysource. Keep blessing.

Ignyte · « **Reply #6 on:** May 30, 2003, 01:07:52 AM »

Quote from: abstruse on May 29, 2003, 10:49:32 PM

Another nice keystyle Mack. Your keystyles always appear to me of having near flawless flow, the way you correlate multies is amazing. It also seems to me you've improved since you visited shadysource. Keep blessing.

Reef · « **Reply #7 on:** May 31, 2003, 03:23:53 AM »

Quote from: vitodeluca on May 29, 2003, 08:42:31 PM

I like it man, it seems lately (this key and your latest board battle) you've been incorporating a little more complex rhyming scheme than in the past. I don't know if it's intentional, but I like it, it's tight. Good rhyme Mack.

Inspectah · « **Reply #8 on:** May 31, 2003, 10:36:58 AM »

Quote after Quote after Quote!

Anyways i liked the key mack, some nice multis which i think after reading it all ryhmed, but your a natural anyways dawg, and ya elevating nicely, and steadily. I prefer some of ya ol'keys too man!

Peace