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Alive 1...By Jemuel |Keystyle|
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June 09, 2003, 11:14:47 AM »
Can’t see it comin’ down my eyes…
so I gotta make the song cry.
After the skies fell, the sun ignited with the live shells
of atomic bomb brightness … only one survived it.
Peep Twilight Zones encased in the cage of my mind’s well
Safe in my basement, on the matrix under the rhyme’s spell
To enter a world of screams, flesh steamin’ and fried smells
Of human meat, burning, turning to blisters of bluish-green
Eyes fell on the horrid tapestry drawn with morbid mastery
a global catastrophe of sordid, horrible tragic scenes
of the dead and dying. Casket fiends, all itchin’ for fixes
sickened with rickets, sad to see so many beheaded lying
passed the children, ash-black and under collapsin buildin's
cats blasted flat, massive killins victims to Haz-Mat spillin's.
I walked the devestation I was then facin’ with amazement
At the faces of the races with their outer skin chaffing…
Passed the burning baby to a little girl palming her guts.
Screaming in between short intervals of vomiting pus.
She collided with me frantic and was thrown to the ground
and in a panic...released her vital organs over her gown.
I’m no doctor, so I could only watch the violence ensue
As she died screaming at the feet of my shiniest shoes
Why was I the only one alive? The only one to witness
These visions I was drenched in...I almost want to die.
But I’m still livin’. Is it only to frame their limits of pain?
While not able to visit and limit it and get into their brains?
If ya family jumps in the sea, would you follow them down?
Well, would I be alone? Would I have to hear them drown?
Spirits speak to me as I walk thru the streets discretely
Seeing bodies stacked neatly in designs I find sublime
My mind hides my cries under a mask of compassion
Bask in their thrasing, to offer a comforting eye…
But what is the price? Soon my soul’s burning with guilt
Under the gaze of a human race, roastin’ eternally still
While I watch from above with eyes of monotonous love
As they burn safely afar, their skins so hot to the touch
Have I not had enough? I scream for death to come take me...
NOW!! Listening to the world’s screams as their raging...
LOUD!! Where’s the radioactive residue to cause medical
damage to my epidermis, warping my skeletal canvas?!
But I’m the only one alive! And it seems they know it
My mask begins to crack with pieces of pain showin’
They come slowly, most dying before they can reach me
Moaning weakly, that if only they could, they would be me...
It’s not easy, believe me, I’ve learned to worship death
Rather than be alive among the dying while in perfect health
They soon reach me, and flood me with their bloody pleas
"Help us!" "Help us, buddy please!" It’s all up to me!
I look up to see a countless number, and all my family
I happily lept into the waves, and the safety of insanity…
Can’t see it comin’ down my eyes…
so I gotta make
gotta make
gotta make
song cry
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Re:Alive 1...By Jemuel |Keystyle|
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June 11, 2003, 11:27:06 AM »
feed please
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Re:Alive 1...By Jemuel |Keystyle|
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June 11, 2003, 03:54:14 PM »
Rhymescheme and the scene description were very nice. The vocabulary was very good also, nothing too abstruse
but by no means generic. Very nice keystyle, keep blessin.
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