Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(vito won)

[vitodeluca]

Allright, Adam's rules:

10 bar min, 15 bar max
first to 5, crew votes allowed but explain all votes
Deadline on thursday

[vitodeluca]

Fuck it, I'll spit now...

A little crew bashing....

Vito D Komin' so hard when I spit you'd swear I'm shootin' bricks out my dick, axe adam X as split this kid into wood chips,
hope-adam-X-knew-the lord, voters'll-pack-ouija-boards to de-"cypher" this-when-I-spit, Xplicit's-gettin'-R.I.P. 'd (1)
sound the alarm, it's red alert time, I'll natural -ly rip mack while I kick back and smile,bust nines and techs at-em(adam), X marks the spot on his chest, don't need to get xplicit when I split ya from your toes to ya arm pits,

Comin' "raw" cause I wanna "knock you up"...listen up dumb fuck,

this tale entails rippin' out your entrails, fed ex ya mom's a pale a' your last remains in the mail,
rip a whole-in-ya-back-G and throw-in-battery acid, but this ain't a litmus test dumb ass, and ya sho-can't-pass-it, (2)
it's-tragic how you're so self-important and flows-impotent, hard pressed to come up with somethin'-worth-spurtin',
keep workin on your style cause-it's-worsenin', aww, ass hurtin? One things for certain, dre board's-dispersin'
WCC's the next dimension and if flow was dough you couldn't "pay attention", treat you like a mule that stumbled into an ass kickin' convention,
 somethin-ain't-right when you ride so much dick you a Veritable-Dick-Knight,U must be on the charitable-tip-right? Cause under my win column your sig'll-fit-right,
Mack's dick must not be getting-too-lonely cause all you in his new crew makin' those nuts standing-room-only
not in your crew but I'll rip you limb from limb, like a anorexic statis-ti-cian your chances-of-winnin' are slim,this-just-in: (3)
I won't pause for applause and me beatin' you with the bloody stump of your arm is the only way you'll "get a hand",
like christopher reeves before he got on-the-pony this is your "last stand", take the mic from his hand, even if you were one-and-only dick on earth ya still wouldn't be the man!

1) Ouija (pronounced wee-gee) boards supposedly can be used to talk to dead people
2) Litmus tests show if something contains acids or bases
3) He's in the verbal "dismemberment" cru

[AdamX aka Xplicit]

Alright man I'll try my best to drop today... otherwise tomorrow. I'm busy as fuck.

[vitodeluca]

No worries  bro, and nothing against your crew either, I just had fun playin' with y'alls names,   LOL  

[AdamX aka Xplicit]

Vito you've lost your "deadly touch" like contra fighters with arthritis/ Coming at me with weak shit...looking like you lost your slaughter license/ (1)
 Pussy... I harm vaginas and I know this whore's coordinates/ A solo vocalist with more potent opiates than your dope associates/ (2)
You beat Nat once...should've savored it staying on the shore harmonious/ I'm still posting glorious... with more warheads than the former soviets/ (3)
Vitodeluca is in deep shit...upside down...i think it's time to swallow excrement./ (4)
 I let you flow awhile so you might've seemed cool to degenerates and special problem residents/ And like a kid with speech impediments... you k-kinda t-talk repetitive/ (5)
 Watch X the specialist eat competition...I relish this/ Supreme damages battlers... challengers and managers with recklessness/ (6)
I'm horror's gory genesis... yet you stand there with that bloody gash across your wrist/ (7)
64 000 bells alarming kids...that's one for every dick you've gone and kissed/ With a 6-inch average... that's over one mile of flesh that's touched your lips./ (
Scream when you've had enough punishment/ after this I'm runnin shit// (9)



2 can play it this game/ Watch as  i'm 'bout break down his name

{V}
Vets
{I}
I intersect/ individuals & intoxicants I interject
{T}
The treacherous text/ that this testicle's tryin to test
{O}
Owns this onset

{D}
Deluca denotes disgraceful desperation
{I}
I interpret impossibly intense iterations/ intents in implementing injurious incineration's/
{E}
enter & encounter emcees, eradicating eager enemies/
{S}
spittin' supreme sentences, stanzas & super similes/


{N}
Now I'm never nearby novicery, not nearly
{O}
over
{W}
willingly

Homie your strategy, had to be a tragedy/ Cause this mastery is shattering your anatomy with lethal word galleries/ (10)
Sad to see that you dying in this battle was your only form of flattery//(11)


EDIT: There you go... I numbered the bars.. It's 11 without counting what i did with your name.. It's not as if my verse is much longer than yours... They're about the same length.

[vitodeluca]

Ummm, aren't you the one that wanted a 15 bar max?  Cause yours is like 20 bars not countin' the thing ya did with my name  Anyways, votin' time y'all

[Black Pack]

I'll have to give this to Adam, Vito came with a good verse and tight disses but Adams verse was more original. That rhyming of the name part was very dope...Adams verse had a tight flow and nice punches as well. Good battle


Vote= AdamX

[·SiNiStEr·]

Adam.. that aint 15 bars.. and thats a clever way to battle but there is no real definite bar limit.. i dunno what to do. and kru votes allowed?

[vitodeluca]

Yeah, crew votes are allowed, and he's the one that suggested a 15 bar limit, not me, it's cool tho, I think voters will take that into account.  Just vote fairly Sin (not that I gotta tell ya that).

[AdamX aka Xplicit]

I numbered the bars... Like I said, my verse is pretty much the same length as yours... 1-0 Keep voting

[abstruse]

Vitodeluca - Very good flow, and nice wordplay.  The multi's were on point and so were the punches. Kinda liked the fact that you used less explanations and sticked more to relevant subjects . Fav line
"hope-adam-X-knew-the lord, voters'll-pack-ouija-boards to de-"cypher" this-when-I-spit, Xplicit's-gettin'-R.I.P. 'd"
Overall - 4.25/5

Adam X - The vocab in your verse was nice.  You came with hard hittin punches also.  Beside you breaking down his name, your verse lacked wordplay. Sometimes it was hard to depict the flow on the verse also. Don't really know what happenned to the 15 bar max either. Fav line
"Vitodeluca is in deep shit...upside down...i think it's time to swallow excrement./ I let you flow awhile so you might've seemed cool to degenerates and special problem residents/ And like a kid with speech impediments... you k-kinda t-talk repetitive/"
Overall - 3.8/5

Vote - Vitodeluca

[ill natural]

Vito- Tight verse man, good disses and punches and i like how played around with our names. dope

Adam- I've seen better from you homie.. It was dope but whatever ive seen from you in the past has been much doper. But that breaking down his name shit was maaad creative... That was dopeness and what gives you the battle.

vote- adam

[vitodeluca]

Allright, 2-1, Adam's winnin'..for the record I don't care about this whole "how many bars" argument, his verse is fine as far as I'm concerned.

[Tasa]

difficult to judge you brough heat! both verses had good flows and their strong lines. some recycled/overused lines though.

Vitodeluca best lines:
"WCC's the next dimension and if flow was dough you couldn't "pay attention", treat you like a mule that stumbled into an ass kickin' convention,"

you had a good opening and a pretty solid verse throughout. Ill punches too 4/5

Adam best lines:
Easily that "VITO DIES NOW" part of the verse, that was some clever rhyming. Again a solid verse throughout though a slightly tricky flow for which i had to read your verse twice. I like your opening line and think your disses were slightly more to the point and that name rhyming sequence was really dope. 4.25/5

vote- adamx

[·SiNiStEr·]

aight.. this battle was hot

Vito - Damn boy you keep droppin better shit each time.. I seen some mad wordplay in ya verse and it was damn creative. Creativity and content is what i look for in a verse, ya flow was off the hook too and ya didnt get lost in multis. Damn kid.. you hot right now.

Fav. Line -
WCC's the next dimension and if flow was dough you couldn't "pay attention", treat you like a mule that stumbled into an ass kickin' convention,
somethin-ain't-right when you ride so much dick you a Veritable-Dick-Knight,U must be on the charitable-tip-right? Cause under my win column your sig'll-fit-right

AdamX - Tight verse man.. I like your flow. This battle makes me feel like a newbie haha but its cool. Anyway, nice metas and you have a damn complex vocabulary. Only thing that i didnt like was one part ya lost the flow. That Vito dies now is kinda played out and if I would do that sorta wordplay i woulda done a different phrase than 'vito dies now' but still a hot verse.

Fav. Line -
Vito you've lost your "deadly touch" like contra fighters with arthritis/ Coming at me with weak shit...looking like you lost your slaughter license/
Pussy... I harm vaginas and I know this whore's coordinates/ A solo vocalist with more potent opiates than your dope associates/

Numbaz..

Vito - 4.55 / 5
AdamX - 4.45 / 5

I gave this to Vito cuz he used some more keystyle elements with the multis.. yall had the same amount of metas but Adam only used 2 or 3 bar punches and the words he was usin were deep in vocabulary but sorta easy to rhyme. The played out 'vito dies now' was probably the deciding factor, Adam if you incorporate some of the more keystyle elements you would have taken this one easy.. i know that aint your style but thats what i base my votes on and ive been voter of the month for a while now so your choice.
Dont get me wrong.. yall can say d/r vote but this was the hardest battle ive ever voted on fo real.. Adam and Vito both showin some mad potential.. yall scarin me lol.

Vote - VitoDeLuca