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"ya 2nd line used 2 rhymes from someone's avatar on this board"u mean "sypmphony" with "epiphany"? check out pharoe jomes avatar,i was reading his sig an the punch popped into my head ,u can read it if u want it has nothin to do wit my punch.unless u consider rhymin "symphony" wit "epiphany"bitin then lock me up an throw away the keys
dope battle..Mack - i like ya verse.. hard hittin even though ya multis were small and often times weak.. very long and I will take that into consideration. Flow was good to cuz it was all personals which is important in important battles like this. Dope ass muthafuckin ending.Fav. Line -while i bring more nine's than fourth-grade-classes,we fought-the-fake-asses..tha7th whose scripts-are-wacka,mine-or-yours,on the bone board i guess you did rip-the-jacka.. - cus they dyin-for-sho..whether they drop one rhyme-or-four..AND EVEN IF U SURVIVE,ON YA WAY HOME WELL PUT FIVE-IN-YA-DOOR..Red~Alert - ya 2nd line used 2 rhymes from someone's avatar on this board but it was minor so im not gonna hold that against ya.. your metas are very creative but sorta bland.. like mack ya multis were very simple but your punchlines were on.. however no personals but you new so i will take that into consideration.Fav. Line - i address the problem he shake at the mention rod causin elite's dissension cause his hollow leadership's in question///how can u lead ?u can't "hit str8" at a homophobic convention///i come wit lean-might an a mean-strike rod couldn't rob in hood (robin hood)wit arrow an green-tights///Rod - your simplicity and straight up hittin rhymes amaze me, yo.. every time is just straight up punches.. and the best about it that you still retain that creativity involved with ya punches.. dope shit.. metas tight too.. ya lost it for a lil in the middle but ya regained quickly.. tight. Truthfully.. straight up.. I didnt think you were capable of keystylin as good as this.. blew me away man.Fav. Line - Ya Verse Had More "Fillers" than then fat dudes at an "All You Can Eat Buffet"/Readin my verse is bad for your eyes, like U rinsed Yur contact-lens in Pepper Spray/I-Bo - English not being your first language is obvious in ya verses but thats very understandable and im not gonna hold that against ya.. Multis are on for the most part.. that is rare these days.. seems like tone and a few others are the only ones capable of a tru multi.. nice on my eyes.. lol.. all ya bars have some kinda personal which is a big plus.Fav. Line - im like Santa Clauz, i alwayz come with "dope-deliveriez", sadistic instincz when i knockz R~A & "mopez-the-injuriez"//substractin and studyin ur brain, ensurin that "u've-guraded-your-last-sin"//Maestro "contraz" u'r future movez when dodgin bulletz from this "Re-tar-ded~Assa-ssin"//Tiiiiight battle.. its shit like this that keeps the dubcc keystyle tables turning.Numbaz..Mack - 4.25 / 5Red~Alert - 3.75 / 5Rodzilla - 4.35 / 5I-Bo - 4.25 / 5Mack.. R~A.. average 4Rod.. I-Bo.. average 4.3Vote - Rodzilla and I-BoDope battle.. jesus christ this took me like an hour lol
I-BO: Allright man, you diss my verse then ask me to vote in your battle? Hahaha, j/k man. Here goes: Tight multis that sacrificed your flow in some parts, i.e. the bar about neo in the matrix. Still, good punches and you had some good shit to make it personal against Mack. Some of your metas were a little thin, like in your first line, it mighta made more sense if you said somethin like "I'm like santa clause handin out coke/ dope deliveries" or "tony montana in a santa clause outfit", I dunno. Still, good verse overall you seemed to have a little of each of the keystyle elements4/5So averages out to VDK: 3.7/5Rod/I-bo: 4.1/5Winner: Rod & I-bo
Rod Might Have Bitten Because...Yur verse was fuckin Aimless, Your "Punches" nearly missed tha "Fight"/ (I've Seen This Before, I Dunno Who Did It Tho..)
i seriously lacked personals an i usually base my verse on em .but the personals i came up wit were either real lame (for i bo sumthin about his french) or lame an offensive an maybe considered racist by sum (an elite of bitches an fake-thugs rod "crip"led so he figured he should hate-bloods ain't ya heard ? persians r only good to make-rugs/)
Quote from: vitodeluca on June 23, 2003, 12:09:11 PMI-BO: Allright man, you diss my verse then ask me to vote in your battle? Hahaha, j/k man. Here goes: Tight multis that sacrificed your flow in some parts, i.e. the bar about neo in the matrix. Still, good punches and you had some good shit to make it personal against Mack. Some of your metas were a little thin, like in your first line, it mighta made more sense if you said somethin like "I'm like santa clause handin out coke/ dope deliveries" or "tony montana in a santa clause outfit", I dunno. Still, good verse overall you seemed to have a little of each of the keystyle elements4/5So averages out to VDK: 3.7/5Rod/I-bo: 4.1/5Winner: Rod & I-bolol... i figured you would be fair and proffessional whe voting...thanx for voting btw....
Quote from: R~A on June 21, 2003, 09:33:09 AMi seriously lacked personals an i usually base my verse on em .but the personals i came up wit were either real lame (for i bo sumthin about his french) or lame an offensive an maybe considered racist by sum (an elite of bitches an fake-thugs rod "crip"led so he figured he should hate-bloods ain't ya heard ? persians r only good to make-rugs/) lmaoo, dat line is dope as fuck.....U should've used it lol.....I aint gonna complain about tha race issue, I aint a lil bitch like that......It's a battle......
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