Author Topic: Gang Wars (Short Story, Intro)  (Read 144 times)

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Gang Wars (Short Story, Intro)
« on: July 05, 2003, 07:15:36 PM »
EXT. LIVERPOOL SKYLINE - NIGHT

Lights from the waterfront buildings reflect off the calm waters of the river Mersey.  The famous buildings that scatter across Liverpool provide the perfect yet surreal skyline.  

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EXT. GOODISON PARK CARPARK - CONTINUOUS                                    
A black BMW with blackened out windows is just visible in the darkness of the Goodison Park car park.  A figure slowly and cautiously approaches the vehicle while checking the surroundings for other personnel.

The window of the car rolls down and in a blink of an eye an exchange is made between the driver and the figure.  The figure disappears into the never ending darkness and the car speeds off past the deserted Goodison park gates.
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EXT. ANFIELD MAIN GATES - CONTINUOUS

A large group of kids hang around at the front gates of Liverpool footballs clubs ground Anfield.  Boys and girls alike are smoking cigarettes and drinking bottles of cider and larger.

The group are very loud and disturbing to the local residents and one lady is shouting abuse out of her bedroom window.  The group hurls abuse back at the lady and a boy approaches from the back of the group dressed in a Liverpool football club benny hat and he has his hand gripped tightly around the neck of his glass larger bottle and a drunken evil look displayed across his face.

To the shock of the group the boy launches the bottle towards the window where the lady is standing.  She quickly moves back away from the window.  SMASH!!, the bottle breaks the glass and instantly the group high tails it out of there.

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EXT. LIVER BUILDINGS - CONTINUOUS

A male and female hurry to the side of the Liver buildings.  The man kisses the girls neck passionately and unbuttons her blouse to the girls delight.  The girl takes off the mans belt and unzips his fly.

The girl asks the man to use protection, he refuses.  The girls struggles to get away but the man is to over powering.  Tears rolls down her terrified face as he rapes her.

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EXT. BOLD STREET - CONTINUOUS

Two teenage boys suspiciously wander around a brand new silver Mercedes Benz.  The boys are clearly nervous as they look up and down the street and walk around the area where the car is parked.

Suddenly the car engine starts and another boy sits up in the front seat of the car.  The two boys outside of the vehicle hurry to the car and jump in just as the owner of the car appears.  The owner is shouting at the top of his voice as the car speeds up Bold Street and past the bombed out church.

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EXT. STREET - CONTINUOUS
Streetlights are the only company the traffic lights have on this deserted road.  There isn’t a person in sight nor a car or any other vehicle and the silence is almost beautiful.

A figure appears in the distance.  Its a man and he's running as fast as he can as if he was escaping a prison or competing in the Olympics.  He comes closer and he struggles to keep his pants from falling down as he has forgot to pick up his belt.  

He struggles for his breath and his stops and bends over trying to take in as much oxygen as possible.  He stands up and looks at the stars that line the gorgeous night sky.  

Out of nowhere car lights appear coming in the mans direction.  The car skids but its too late, the car hits the man who goes flying into the air with a bone crushing thud.  The car rolls three times and comes to a halt on its roof in the oncoming traffic lane.  Its a silver Mercedes Benz and a boys sliced arm hangs out of the window, motionless.

The man who has been flung from the pavement to the middle of the road is quickly rushed to by a small boy with a red Liverpool football club benny hat on.  The boys face turns stone white as he seems the state of the man that lies before him.  

Suddenly more car lights appear, the boy stands hoping that its an ambulance or somebody that can help him.  The car doesn’t seem to be slowing down as it comes closer in fact its speeding up.

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INT. BLACK BMW - CONTINUOUS

Drivers P.O.V

The drivers vision is totally messed up and blurred.  He looks down to his dashboard and focuses on a bag of cocaine which is half empty.  He looks up and BANG, the car smashes into the silver Mercedes Benz which lies in the road, the driver tries to regain control but he can’t see where he is going.  BANG, an object rolls onto the car and shatters the windscreen and the car bumps to one side.

EXT. STREET - CONTINUOUS

The black BMW smashes into a wall with a ground shaking bang.  The horn sounds from the BMW and smoke appears from the engine.  A red blood soaked Liverpool benny hat lies in the road and we pull back to reveal the horrific scene.  Ambulance sirens can be hear rushing towards the accident.
 
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EXT. LIVERPOOL SKYLINE - CONTINUOUS  

The skyline stills glistens off the waters of the river Mersey.  Nothing can be heard but the sound of silence.  

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EXT. SCHOOL YARD - DAY
 

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Re:Gang Wars (Short Story, Intro)
« Reply #1 on: July 05, 2003, 07:49:03 PM »
what the fuck?
 

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« Reply #2 on: July 07, 2003, 07:13:45 AM »
ENTER: Benefit Fraud cheat.
 

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Re:Gang Wars (Short Story, Intro)
« Reply #3 on: July 07, 2003, 07:15:38 AM »
Seriously, that was quite good.  Who wrote it for you?

lol j/k
 

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« Reply #4 on: July 07, 2003, 08:21:53 AM »
Seriously, that was quite good.  Who wrote it for you?

lol j/k
Hahah. It was good.
 

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Re:Gang Wars (Short Story, Intro)
« Reply #5 on: July 07, 2003, 08:24:08 AM »
Seriously, that was quite good.  Who wrote it for you?

lol j/k

I was bored 1 nite so I just decided to write that, did you like it.
 

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Re:Gang Wars (Short Story, Intro)
« Reply #6 on: July 07, 2003, 08:30:31 AM »
I did.
 

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Re:Gang Wars (Short Story, Intro)
« Reply #7 on: July 07, 2003, 08:38:03 AM »
coolingtoon.

That was just the intro to the short movie, just so the credits can roll.  I am gunna write about 20 pages about 3 gangs in schools and shit.  Nothing major, just gives me sumit to do cos I am so bored.
 

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« Reply #8 on: July 07, 2003, 11:01:04 AM »
coolingtoon.

That was just the intro to the short movie, just so the credits can roll.  I am gunna write about 20 pages about 3 gangs in schools and shit.  Nothing major, just gives me sumit to do cos I am so bored.

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