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Expert of The Game (An Elite Production) Ft...Jem
« on: July 08, 2003, 05:36:49 PM »
It's my piece bout Bitches yall...

girls these days are suppose to be state of the art...
they fakin the parts...till thier breakin ur heart...
all the lies and shit...and ya scared to get used...
could strip the false...still aren't barin the truth...
claim they charishin you...when you look in they lovly eyes...
really hungry lies...so they get what they wanted money wise...
you get stomped in the end...cuz after ya mokin the men...
that can't get a girl...she leaves once ya pockets are slim...
then you go out one day...and see her walkin with HIM...
think you cann't read em like the book...they're gone with the wind...
when you talk to ur friends...she didn't love you in the first place...
remember the rings and pearls you gave up just to get to first base...
on her birth date...at your job you tried to give it the time...
so when you go out with her...you can spend every nickle and dime...
then she sits and just cries...cuz it didn't cost you a million...
then the next day she comes up, and shes talkin of children...
you give in cuz she cries and you see what her eyes are just worth...
she gets pregnet then leaves...to collect the child support...
so you got to work two jobs...and still go to in-ter-views...
she believes love at first site...guess ur pockets were in-her-view...
you pay every month...she comes back with more diamonds and shit...
you get tied in the mix...then she start, tries and shes hidin the kids...
so why you still payin for something u can't even fuckin see...
how many other fuckin guys support this bitch that desided to up and leave...
you do it cuz you're the better person...to keep ya kids happy...
restrainin order, can't go raftin or even show up to his track meets...
you helped this bitch make these kids and you can't see em at all...
think back on the time you went fishin at that creek in the fall...
why did it have to end this way...you had to lose something lovly...
fed her hundred dollar meals...but she was obviously money hungry...
she really just used you...i know that its crutial and fuckin brutal...
you still love her like you used to...even if u don't choose too...
shes all happy and shit...till shes with a man and the crap that she gets...
dies from aid and other shit...and you smile and just laugh at the bitch...
you're so happy cuz you were going insain...she was just a growin pain...
now you got to try to raise these kids...thats don't even know ur name...........

Fuck it..Fuck it...FUCK IT!...
« Last Edit: July 08, 2003, 05:40:57 PM by God's 2nd Nature »
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Re:Expert of The Game (An Elite Production) Ft...Jem
« Reply #1 on: July 08, 2003, 05:45:00 PM »
Damn Jem, nice keystyle. Very indept narrative, and so fucking true.

"so you got to work two jobs...and still go to in-ter-views...
she believes love at first site...guess ur pockets were in-her-view..."
^Fav Line.


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Re:Expert of The Game (An Elite Production) Ft...Jem
« Reply #2 on: July 09, 2003, 02:22:14 PM »
Got Dayum, My other ill Piece "Alive" got slept on like this but now people that read it think it was the illest of this month...So mutha fuckin drop some feed for a nigga...
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Re:Expert of The Game (An Elite Production) Ft...Jem
« Reply #3 on: July 09, 2003, 02:40:21 PM »
ill piece.. ill rhyme scheme and real multis which is rare

the best part of this key is that it is so true.. but girls down here arent into money just attention.. bitchez.. i just dont associate myself wit 'em.
dope piece either way.. nice drop
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Re:Expert of The Game (An Elite Production) Ft...Jem
« Reply #4 on: July 09, 2003, 02:42:32 PM »
Elite product... we are now offically, a full scale crew. Dope piece Jem. People give this man some feed back.. bitches ain't shit but hoes and tricks... lol
 

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Re:Expert of The Game (An Elite Production) Ft...Jem
« Reply #5 on: July 10, 2003, 03:55:17 PM »
FEED PLEASE
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« Reply #6 on: July 10, 2003, 04:04:40 PM »
I like it too, good shit.  The subject matter is pretty advanced, especially (no offense here) for someone your age.  Is this derived from personal experience or??  Anyhow, good metas, good flow, good imagery.

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« Reply #7 on: July 10, 2003, 04:09:21 PM »
I like it too, good shit.  The subject matter is pretty advanced, especially (no offense here) for someone your age.  Is this derived from personal experience or??  Anyhow, good metas, good flow, good imagery.

Thankz...No My frien was talkin bout his experience wit 2 girls like this...
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Re:Expert of The Game (An Elite Production) Ft...Jem
« Reply #8 on: July 11, 2003, 03:25:43 AM »
Very, very good piece
 

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Re:Expert of The Game (An Elite Production) Ft...Jem
« Reply #9 on: July 11, 2003, 05:20:26 AM »
i was hella feelin this piece..it really shows my motto

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