((((((((Ill Natural vs Fabulous Verstyle))))))))))))

[ill natural]

rules:
10-15 bars
blind verses
deadline this saturday


If you got problems with the rules... change them


edit: i changed the deadline from thursday to saturday cause i dont have no time today or tomorrow to write anything. Friday is my day off so ima just have to drop on saturday. Ill try and drop tomorrow but can't make no promises. And yo, check in... i aint wasting a verse.

[ill natural]

i forgot to say first to 4 wins

[Fabulous_Verstyle]

koo

[ill natural]

I’ll slaughter you terminally, so you can never resurrect/
Butcher your arms and legs, then you’ll turn to Nugget sex// (incase you don’t know what this is it’s when people without limbs have sex)

SIZE ME UP? You can’t COMPLETE THE MEASUREMENT, I’ll DE-FEET your regimen/
Feed Fab ESTROGEN, since he’s PUSSY already that’ll COMPLETE THE REST OF HIM//
Fuck uncalled 4. Ill Nats uncalled 5/
Fab has so many recycled, in his verses I thought I was looking at the archives//
wanna act brave? You’re living in your last days/  
i'll make you the BUTT OF A JOKE and use your career as an ASH TRAY//
youre a nuisance, cover your mouth with duct tape/
the only time anybodys FEELING YOU is when youre getting BUTT RAPED//
to me this is just a joke i simply drop my rhymes/
but your lyrics got RAN OVER when they CROSSED the line//

 
Homes, i dont see u.and i dont wear corrective lenses/
spit shit, that'll wreck ya senses...ur BEHIND MY BARS… like uve just been SENTENCED//
The day you beat me is the day God and Satan slow dance/
And hold hands in romance...so basically thers no chance!//
So go back to ya notepad...And start jottin down your wack rhymes/
You will be better off no showin, like SUNTANS on black guys!//

 
I’ll end this and keep it concise, but on a final thought anyone who ever told you to be yourself couldn’t have given any WORSE advice//


// inidicates the end of a bar. peace

 

[Fabulous_Verstyle]

a quik drop............
chekin in

Im about to put ya punk ass in a submission~ while spitting bars that’ll leave ya pussy ass in Critical Condition/
Your hole Rhyme scheme is missing~ so who you think you dissing~ better be careful fo yo ass Come up missing/
Your easy to break down kinda like chemical Digestion~ wont stop until your bodies restin/
Without a question~ ill break ya head in~ and have blood dripping off the bottom of ya chin/
This cat don’t have a clue~ about rhyming so im gonna hit em easy like the common flue/
He thinks he tuff shit cause he joined a crew~ nigga ill eat you like stew~ and put you in my mouth and chew/
Than let my stomach break you down~ watch you get eating up by acids then drown/
You fucking clown~ you aint no longer gonna be around~ cause im wearing the crown/
Next youll flow down my Intestine~ where youll stop and be restin~ and then the Other shit rushed in/
While you telling god to forgive you for your sin~ im up there drinking Tonic gin/
You starting to Turn all affectional~ while yo ass bout to drop out my anal/
While you heading towards the bowl which is very navigational/
I look back and whipe my ass and flush ya down the pipes~ followed by baby whipes/
Theres all different types~ of germs you’ll meat ones with polka dots and ones with stripes/
Then youll empty into the cesspool~ where the toxins will make you drool~ and kill you in less then 5 minutes you fucking fool/
You want 10-15 barz that’s enough time for me to Kill your entire Squad~ that’s wat u get when you Fuckin With A god/
Hitting you harder then a tree getting hit by a lighting rod~ and slice ya down the middle like a farmer splittin a pod

[ill natural]

Aiight votes please

[Dj Mex]

vote Fabulous nice rap man

[ill natural]

My bad, forgot to say you gotta explain your votes. So just explain mex. thanks

[bostonboy]

vote = ill natural.

verse was dope.... used metas and multis while fab did neither.......... fab had decent flow but as i learned the hard way here in battles flow dont mean shit when texting... all bout technique

[·SiNiStEr·]

aight fuck me.. i had a long and explained verse but i accidentally hit back.. or somethin..


basically ill nat came harder with some dope punches and wordplay..
fabulous pretty good for a beginner but throw some more variety in there and you done..

vote - ill natural

good battle you too.. sorry for short vote

[8Trikz]

DAMN I think dat ill had dis 1 cuzz... listen he had mo complexity in shit, made me laugh like'a fat bitch cuss...good ass flows...good ass flows...

VOTE:ILL NATURAL

[ill natural]

Thanks for the votes so far.. thats 3-0 then (without counting dj mex... hurry up and explain your vote man).
And fab, if u got a problem with kru votes lemme know.. then we wont count boston. More votes yall... Uppin
Big ups to all yall who voted so far

[da_notorious_mack]

yo i aint finna vote...cus yall been on some shit bout vdk always vote fa each other..but ill ya got this...yo when ya verse fa the collab gunna be ready?

[.:DayGoStyLz:.]

Good shit yall. I liked Fabulous's whole 'digestion' theme. His flow was ok, and the punches were decent too. Overall pretty good. Im jus feelin Ill's shit a lil more. I thought he had betta punches, and betta metas, and sum multies. Flow on both verses was about equal. But Ill took this one. Good battle yall...peace

vote=Ill

[.:TimeLock:.]

vote = ill natural.

verse was dope.... used metas and multis while fab did neither.......... fab had decent flow but as i learned the hard way here in battles flow dont mean shit when texting... all bout technique

i kinda agree with this guy here but i still think it would ahave been even better if ill's shit had a better flow to it i think near the end up to right before the last 2 lines he was fading the shit outta Fab

Fab don't get me wrong ur shit was tight and might have be good enough if the was a mic battle but it just was to simple worded for a text battle

my vote = ill-natural