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New Keystyle
« on: July 17, 2003, 12:51:25 AM »
Wrote this after getting out of Government Class.

they say we're ensured by civil-rights //
but they control every aspect of life, like signal-lights //
knight sticks will fly taking no residence-in-exception //
ya skin color being the only evidence-in-perspective //
so i'm confused of what laws are truely enforced //
probable cause is seeing a group of colored in-fours //
i see the police and feel an urge-they'll-harm-me //
then ask to advocate injustice, and serve-in-their-army //
travel to distant lands, and help kill innocent-families //
great arsenal of democracy, thats an ignorant-fallacy //
let the youth be the jury, as we drop philosophical-lessons //
while you cover up your appeal to fictious biological-weapons //


Kinda short, will add-on to it though...Drop feedback. [thnx  :)]
« Last Edit: July 17, 2003, 12:54:02 AM by abstruse »


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Re:New Keystyle
« Reply #1 on: July 17, 2003, 02:33:58 PM »
Pretty ill rhymin.. Flow was tight too.. nice to see some educated shit bein dropped..
 

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Re:New Keystyle
« Reply #2 on: July 17, 2003, 02:36:43 PM »
that was ill homay.....nice multis flowed well an dope content...
 

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Re:New Keystyle
« Reply #3 on: July 17, 2003, 03:00:07 PM »
What up SLAVE...
anywayz...

Multis...nyah, they were mad forced and you know it, multis need to be able to be comin of the tip off the tongue, Vocab isn't bad but it's fuckin the flow up a lil cuz ya syllables got a lil off...

The Concept was a good idea, some lines made a good point but it wasn't overall great... So it's cool...nice shit Ab
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Re:New Keystyle
« Reply #4 on: July 17, 2003, 04:28:56 PM »
stfu i aint no slave!!!! haha. naw i know what you mean. thnx for feedback.


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Re:New Keystyle
« Reply #5 on: July 17, 2003, 07:58:15 PM »
tight shit man...i like seein some good content like that. i enjoyed. and dogg...lets put all beef behind us..WCC gots to be all homies.


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Re:New Keystyle
« Reply #6 on: July 17, 2003, 09:29:09 PM »
Aight, coo. I aint never been one to hold grudges.


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Re:New Keystyle
« Reply #7 on: July 17, 2003, 09:38:59 PM »
some nice shit, pretty good topic. and a good example of multis.