Syllable Suicide

[MasterOfCeremonies]

MoC droppin some science.... check out the flow patterns and what not on this track i got here.  All feedback of any sort will be appreciated


ill show up in a -surgical mask- -murderin raps-//
-servin these cats- from all angles, but from the -vertical last-//
-burnin it fast-, im -certain your wack- cuz ive never -heard of your ass-//
get -verbally smashed-, these -words will be crass- and you -stay garbage-//
my -blades sharp tip- leaves -lames scarred with- -shaved armpits-//
another -slain artist-, when my -brains started- i shall -remain heartless-//
I -strain cartiledge- with -insane hard shit- and -rhinoceros rhymes-//
with the -hottest of lines- from the -top of my mind-//
that got the precision to hit the breaks, and -stop on a dime-//
-concoctin designs- without a fuckin -glock or a nine-//
but still bitch, MoC can -lock ya demise-//
its a -shock to ya eyes- to see me rippin, flippin and -kickin it now-//
-sit with a crown- Im -sick with the sound-, quick to leave a -bitch with a frown-//
-spit from tha mouth- to throw a -clip in a clown-, im the mu fukka everyone -listens to now-//
get -hit with the rounds- from -my magnum- with -rhyme passion- -hating the industry-//
-lines smashin-, dont -try rappin-, cant be -contained its a mystery-//
ya -minds lackin-, I'll -die laughin- -blazin the sickest weed-, -training and splitting teams-//
your -lame and your history-, your -brain isnt shit to me-, your -disturbed and stupified-//
when i -spit words, you will die- and we watch as -this nerd gets crucified-//
-sick verbs will move inside- while the -spliff burns to lose ya mind-//
a -bitch served in contusion time- confusion rides, -slamming the poetry-//
-dismantling foes with ease-, reach inside a punk bitch, and -hand ya the ovaries-//
im the -man in this locally-, soon I will -handle it globally-//
the whole -planet will notice me- -focusing- like -benjamin franklin bifocals-//
-sendin em stranglin' rhyme chokeholds- -I'm loco-//
-sentences bangin, my dope flow- ninja kicks in -my dojo-//
Im stayin sick, till my -competition is hangin by throats, whoooah-//
-IM LOCO-//

MoC

[abstruse]

there's so many multis i got lost. haha. naw it was sick man.

[MasterOfCeremonies]

thanks for the feedback man

[Kill]

straight up raw shit, dope multies...props, keep postin on WCC

[TiNmaN]

That verse was tha shit man, best from a newbie in a while for real.......

['Illicit']

real dope

[Inspectah]

Raw Shit fo'real.. i liked it.. keep posting homie!

~ 1 ~

[MasterOfCeremonies]

thanks for all the feedback guys... its mad appreciated... im just tryin to do what i do, trying to just make myself into a rapper that cant really be compared to anyone... so yeah... oh yeah.. for the record, im not a newbie, just a newbie to this site... im about a year and a half into this rap game... but thanks again

[da_notorious_mack]

a -bitch served in contusion time- confusion rides, -slamming the poetry-//
-dismantling foes with ease-, reach inside a punk bitch, and -hand ya the ovaries-//
im the -man in this locally-, soon I will -handle it globally-//
the whole -planet will notice me- -focusing- like -benjamin franklin bifocals-//
-sendin em stranglin' rhyme chokeholds- -I'm loco-//
-sentences bangin, my dope flow- ninja kicks in -my dojo-//
Im stayin sick, till my -competition is hangin by throats, whoooah-//
-IM LOCO-//

MoC

id already read the rest....an i told you wat i thought........but yoooo addin these bars just drilled it in how dope you are wit ya flow an multis........GAWDDAMN

[MasterOfCeremonies]

thanks for the feedback homie... its cool that you peeped it on both sites...

MoC

[MasterOfCeremonies]

elevate

[MasterOfCeremonies]

up

[da_notorious_mack]

uppin some mo hot old shit...