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Abstruce VS Jemuel
« on: July 28, 2003, 06:42:59 AM »
15 lines...
Due Some time today...


No Beef Homie!

Its a fine day to look inside this nigga with kitchen-knives...
Damn, like a "pregnant dogs" we all knew you was "half bitch-inside"!

Toyin with strangers, leave ya cold like an Eskimo/
Im on top of "us(U.S.)" like "Canada", you resembling "Mexico"!!*
You know you the next to go... flowin-and-rhyme-stories/
"Dont know who you fuckin with", like getting "thrown-in-blind-orgies"!!
Strictly, he blowin-my-vorheez... I had to kick-him-off...
"Puttin words in his mouth" since-"my-dick-can-talk"!!
Flip-ya-script-an'-all, Softy trigger? pull-it,-try'n-stop-me...
"Got ya mug shot"...Even got some "bullets-beside-his-coffee"!!
Sloppy nigga, Look at the wack degression-of-ya-rhymes...
Take a "golf club to ya head", "provin depression's-in-ya-mind"!!
Obssesion-isnt-right, after ya death...where do I go-since?
Since I "partied like it was '99", left the scene with no-"prints"!(Prince)

*He's Mexican...
« Last Edit: July 28, 2003, 06:46:48 AM by Jemuel »
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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #1 on: July 29, 2003, 02:52:53 PM »
My bad for the delay, they're layin down tile at my house, so I had to move everything including the computer.

Anyway Props on the Verse. But like Supernat, 'service, concentration, watch how real emcee rocks the house'. NO BEEF@

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lets begin-the-inception, i'm wet from front to back like the fisheys //
kid's yet-to-get-an-erection, and is askin 'can anyone beat-me ??' //  (He's 14)
ya styles dead, bettah yet deceased, i'm the winner who set-doubt?? //
cuz like ya position with elite, ya shoulda had this challenge LEFT-OUT //
ya best to set up a border, or throw them racial jokes and try to use-a-fence (offense) //
or you can round up ya Nigerian Friends, cuz you'll need all the AIDS you-can-get // (aid)
dude ya whole styles tainted, flow's broken like bank accounts from hammer //
relax ya shit kid cuz ya aint-shit, cuz neither you or M&M's melt-in-wrappers (melting rappers) //
WINNING ??
maybe when im drunk seein two Jems, cause in battles your gone-when-its-sober //
and people can say ya got overconfidence, but 10 bars got ya confidence-over //


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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #2 on: July 29, 2003, 03:08:05 PM »
Jemuel - Hard hittin as always.. time metas, multis, came with everything just another jem verse but it was still up to par.

Fav. Line -
You know you the next to go... flowin-and-rhyme-stories/
"Dont know who you fuckin with", like getting "thrown-in-blind-orgies"!!

Abstruse - wow, i see that you sorta used Jem style against him, which is new and it hasnt been done before, interesting. Truthfully, I think each verse came as hard but Abs had personals.. also jem placed the race card so did you.. nice shit homie.

Fav. Line -
ya best to set up a border, or throw them racial jokes and try to use-a-fence (offense) //
or you can round up ya Nigerian Friends, cuz you'll need all the AIDS you-can-get //

Numbaz..
Jemuel - 4 / 5
Abstruse - 4.35 / 5

IMO both verses came the same as hard hittin, Jem had better flow but Abs came with a personal every line.. no prewritin..

Vote - Abstruse

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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #3 on: July 29, 2003, 05:49:25 PM »
vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :o


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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #4 on: July 29, 2003, 08:46:39 PM »
Vote- Abstruse

Jem, your verse was good, but lacked personals and some of the multis seemed forced.  Still a good verse but Abstruse came with more of a verse aimed at you personally and he had some good metas, even tho he wrote off ya verse a little.  Tight battle tho, just have to give it to abstruse...

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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #5 on: July 29, 2003, 10:27:51 PM »
Vote :Jemuel    Rate : 7.8 Vs 7.4

My Bad


Tha Info On How And Why I Vote Fo Jemuel

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1. I Like Tha Start ( like a "pregnant dogs" we all knew you was "half bitch-inside"! )


Its a fine day to look inside this nigga with kitchen-knives...
Damn, like a "pregnant dogs" we all knew you was "half bitch-inside"!


2. This Was Cool As Fuck



Toyin with strangers, leave ya cold like an Eskimo/
Im on top of "us(U.S.)" like "Canada", you resembling "Mexico"!!*
You know you the next to go... flowin-and-rhyme-stories/


3. This Part Is Good But Could Be Better


"Dont know who you fuckin with", like getting "thrown-in-blind-orgies"!


4. Was Ok

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Strictly, he blowin-my-vorheez... I had to kick-him-off...

5. It was Funny As Hell


"Puttin words in his mouth" since-"my-dick-can-talk"!!


6. Very To Tha Point.


Flip-ya-script-an'-all, Softy trigger? pull-it,-try'n-stop-me...

7. Hardcore

"Got ya mug shot"...Even got some "bullets-beside-his-coffee"!!

8. This Part Was Cool (

Sloppy nigga, Look at the wack degression-of-ya-rhymes...
Take a "golf club to ya head", "provin depression's-in-ya-mind"!! )


Sloppy nigga, Look at the wack degression-of-ya-rhymes...
Take a "golf club to ya head", "provin depression's-in-ya-mind"!!
like a "pregnant dogs" we all knew you was "half bitch-inside"!ince I "partied like it was '99", left the scene with no-"prints"!(Prince)
*He's Mexican...
« Last Edit: July 29, 2003, 11:16:34 PM by Slim-x »
 

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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #6 on: July 29, 2003, 10:39:46 PM »
This was a hard one dogs, both of you dropped cool verses but this is how I saw shit.

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Jem:  Dope verse, everything flowed very well and the structure of the rhyme was dope and on point.

Fav line(s):
Toyin with strangers, leave ya cold like an Eskimo/
Im on top of "us(U.S.)" like "Canada", you resembling "Mexico"!!*
You know you the next to go... flowin-and-rhyme-stories/
"Dont know who you fuckin with", like getting "thrown-in-blind-orgies"!!

Them first lines where dope, punches where strong and it just entertained me while reading it.

Score:  4.50

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Abstruse:  Smae to you mate, nice verse, some very nice mutlies and the structure of the verse was also dope.

Fav line(s):
maybe when im drunk seein two Jems, cause in battles your gone-when-its-sober //
and people can say ya got overconfidence, but 10 bars got ya confidence-over //

Felt them lines alot, nice way to finish the battle.

Score:  4.25

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Both verses where good and the battle was dope but Jem's verse had me more entertained throughout and the verse was hard hitting and more personal than Ab's.

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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #7 on: July 29, 2003, 10:47:49 PM »
Hey yo Slim-X, I seen you vote for couple other battles also, we usually give supportin information to how we voted, if ya could juss write a lil bit, then it'll count.


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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #8 on: July 30, 2003, 08:43:00 AM »
MAJOR PROPS ABS...

my hardest battle here yet...i love it!
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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #9 on: July 30, 2003, 04:53:37 PM »
Thnx. So what we going up to 4? since it's already 2-2 and we never really cleared that up. I'm cool with 4 or wahtever the fuk. VOOOOOOTES!!!!!!!


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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #10 on: August 01, 2003, 01:16:40 PM »
VOTE MOTHAFUKAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz  ;D


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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #11 on: August 03, 2003, 05:26:21 PM »
THIS SHIT AINT DONE YET!@ VOTE!!!! (i'll vote in yo battles in a sec)


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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #12 on: August 03, 2003, 06:54:53 PM »
vote=abstruse
sinister's vote basically sums up my opinion... both of ya hit hard but abstruse came more personal than jemuel.


kid's yet-to-get-an-erection, and is askin 'can anyone beat-me ??' //  (He's 14)

LMAO ;D



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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #13 on: August 03, 2003, 07:07:23 PM »
That was also subliminally towards you  ;D, haha


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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #14 on: August 03, 2003, 07:08:15 PM »
jem's 14? lol that explains a lot
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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #15 on: August 03, 2003, 07:13:01 PM »
That was also subliminally towards you  ;D, haha


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im 15 in a month so it dont faze me ;D ;D ;D

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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #16 on: August 04, 2003, 10:04:17 PM »
Uppin for votes, vote please.


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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #17 on: August 05, 2003, 01:26:55 AM »
vote - abs

Jem ya had like 3 or 4 good lines... the coffee line was ill espescially.. but u did not diss ya oponent dawg i mean... u need personals

Abs - punches were off a bit but his personals were on point that left-out line hurt, n that m&m line is the punch of the battle

Punches - maybe jem by a pubic hair
personals - abs
multis - same
creativity - bout the same

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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #18 on: August 05, 2003, 02:43:22 PM »
That's 4-2, since Jem agreed on aim to go up to 4 thats a wrap. Nice battle Jem.


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Re:Abstruce VS Jemuel
« Reply #19 on: August 05, 2003, 02:54:42 PM »
Very good battle Ab...Nice shit, lookin forward for a rematch soon...
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