Author Topic: Proph vs. Slim-x (Read 457 times)

Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::.. · « **on:** July 28, 2003, 10:30:49 PM »

aight...im doin this so for Slim's practise...im nto lookin for a win or nothin.

15-20 bars
first to 4
3-0 = KO
no nigga references
votes explained

drop by 5pm wednesday (west coast time)

Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::.. · « **Reply #1 on:** July 29, 2003, 01:56:37 AM »

slim-x dogg it looks like ya facin-defeat/
its hot out so i aint gonna be bringin-the-heat//
u stuck in ya seat, cuz dogg im not finished/
ur raps are slimmest, causes ya verse to diminish//
from my rhyme erosion, a lyrical explosion/
professer xavier bout to get wheelchair frozen//
u winnin is what u supposin, but dogg u postin so much/
half of it bullshit, u havin fits/
i could beat ya ass with only one touch//
immortal thug cant take my mortal slug/
coated n loaded with a deadly poison bug//
ya pull n tug on the tails a' my vallure coat/
yah rhymes sinkin, my verse is bouyant n floats//
all these gats i tote, im like the army reserve/
like pete sampras i hit u wit a overhand serve//
of lyrical heat thats sure to bring u defeat/
ya eatin meat and it aint angus beef//
u red headed n fat dogg why u claimin Slim?/
slim fast maybe or too many slim jims//
ya pink tims got u popped now ur mom sings hymns/...bitch

aight dogg u got till wednesday at 5...bring it

Slim-x · « **Reply #2 on:** July 29, 2003, 09:26:39 PM »

Cock Tha Gun And I Explode Reload/
Just Cause Ya Think Im Ta Old Don't Mean Ya Won't Fold/
Here A Story Thats Untold But Low n Behold/
Ya Wanta Talk Like I Ain't Shit Ya Still Suckin Yo Moma Tit/
Itz Sad Ta Say Im Here Ta Stay So Ya Betta Pray I Don't Come With My AK/
A.K.A Slim-x Rollin Up In A Lexus droppin Bombz From Here Ta Texas/
In Tha Text-ther Is A Place With My Face Under Ace/
So Replace Tha X Fo Xavier Now No One Gona Be Ya Savior Now/
Professor Xavier Is On Tha Scene So At First It Mite Seem Over Said And Done/
Yo Cause Its All Said In Fun Till We Lock Pistol Scopes Hears Aliened /
So Even If Yo Where Blind Ya Gona Find Yo Self In A Ditch/
Bitch n Witch Ya Gona Be Screamin Cause Yo Gona Be Seenin Demon's /
As I Be Livin High Off Tha Hog From Cash Flow From Ya Hoe So Best Lay lo/
Are You Gona Be End Up Like That Bitch J-Low/
So When I Roll throe Yo Town n All Yo Homie Act Like They Ain't Down/
Just Know Ya Tried Ta Play A Playa With True Skillz And Lost /
At All Cost Ta Yo Name Ya Actin Like U Still Gotz Fame/
But Just Liein In Shame/

C-Bizz · « **Reply #3 on:** July 29, 2003, 11:34:57 PM »

my vote goes to tha prophecy because i believe that his verse was better. he had better punches and a better flow.

.:DayGoStyLz:. · « **Reply #4 on:** July 30, 2003, 04:29:20 AM »

Aiight, ima hit this one up....

i gotta say Prophecy took this one. It was pretty close actually. But, Proph had the better punches. Both verses kinda fell off, especially towards tha end. Also, both had sum punches that didnt quite connect. Like Slim, with the line...."yur gonna end up like that bitch J-Lo". Doesnt quite hit. What does it mean? End up...hated? End up...Rich? lol End up...old? U know what i mean? Proph had a couple tha same way, i jus used that one as an example. Both were about equal in flow. Neither used any multies or really any wordplay. Decent shit yall. Jus work on tha creativity, metas, and wordplay. Remember, almost everything has been said before....u jus gotta say it in a way no one ever has. Keep spittin yall...

Vote=Proph..