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Who Do You Vote For ???

Slim-x
8 (53.3%)
Storm
7 (46.7%)

Total Members Voted: 10

  

Author Topic: Slim-x vs Storm  (Read 2540 times)

ONETIME

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Re:Slim-x vs Storm
« Reply #45 on: August 26, 2003, 07:40:47 PM »
if it wuz stated in the rulez tht theres no time limit, thn i guess its still on
 

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Re:Slim-x vs Storm
« Reply #46 on: August 28, 2003, 09:18:58 AM »
im still in, theres no way im gonna forfeit my first battle. but my classes just started so ive been pretty busy but ill post day of tomorrow. peace
If tha bitch can't swim, then shes bound to drizzound!
 

Slim-x

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Re:Slim-x vs Storm
« Reply #47 on: August 28, 2003, 09:31:25 AM »


I Feel That Fo Real I Gotz Work N School Take As Long As You Want...


 

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Re:Slim-x vs Storm
« Reply #48 on: August 29, 2003, 09:37:00 AM »
You lost slim, its over, try not to fight it/
That was a decent keystyle, but it took you 3 weeks to write it/
You a slim bitch and I’m motherfuckin jacked/
You talk like you’re a thug but we all know its an act/
This battles almost over so get your bags and pack/
Cause when I win this shit I don’t wanna see you comin back/
And if I see you on the streets best believe I’ll be strapped
So lets make a pact…if I win you never post on this board again/
You get off the internet and try to make a friend/
Cause I’m sick of this bullshit dogg this is the end/
You can’t hang with real gangstas so don’t even try it/
You say you got a record label well bitch I don’t buy it/
I own you X, there is nothing you can do/
Maybe in your next lifetime your rappin will be cool/
But postin up this shit and you look like a fool/
Stick to your day job dogg or go back to school.


You're up. Lets finish this.
If tha bitch can't swim, then shes bound to drizzound!
 

Slim-x

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Re:Slim-x vs Storm
« Reply #49 on: August 29, 2003, 10:09:17 AM »

A life without pain
--------------------------------------------------

Only fear is my death comin back a bloody murder/
Plainin ta kill ya with no chase cutin off ya face/
Fuckin ya baby momma in ya place as I be cumin in her face/
Be pullin on her waist as she screams in pain tastin her tagg/
Oh ya that just be slang as ya bitch ass be slain no pain/
A-life-without-pain it sound-so-insane with nothin ta gain/

Only death do I fear cause when I die I will re-a-pair/
Plainin-great-things replacing-fake-friends fo enemies/
Enemies with in, still I live my life full of sin no place ta began/  
Be pullin dead body of tha lost-at-all-cost I just went-off/
Left tha rage go showin off my 12 gage mowing hoes down/
Str8 wearin my crown repin my town ya be actin like I be from tha pound/  
   A-life-without-sound ya never-ta-be-found with nothin ta gain/
Itz like it must be insane or some shit from ya brain no pain/
No pain cause when I make tha cut itz ta ya vain, then ya ass got hit by a train/

So do I need ta explain itz was ya suicidal mission fo ya ass ta die/
U’s too fucked up n high so U’s thinkin ya could fly/
That why I ain’t guna fry even when ya momma starts ta cry/
Its do n die hoes like you don’t need ta know why/
So that’s good bye/
 
« Last Edit: August 29, 2003, 10:12:47 AM by Slim-x »
 

Slim-x

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Re:Slim-x vs Storm
« Reply #50 on: August 30, 2003, 09:07:47 AM »


Just One More For Me And Im Done.

After You Post Your Last One Voting Begans
 

Storm

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Re:Slim-x vs Storm
« Reply #51 on: August 30, 2003, 03:54:23 PM »
You call this a battle, bitch i call it a joke/
How can you claim to have a record label when you're 24 and broke/
You got one last verse kid so try not to choke/
Like it makes a difference...this battle was over before it even started loc/
Your from the darkcide, well im straight from the streets/
And im warning you now that im definitly bringing heat/
I'm elite...Just like candy i'm motherfuckin sweet/
Diabetic, my words are poetic/
Compared to my rhymes your fuckin shit is pathetic/
I had a lot of fun battling you Slim X/
Sorry I had to fuck you up, im done with you next!


Alright man, im done.  My shit got pretty weak by the end but whatever.  Get your last one done and then people can vote. Peace.
If tha bitch can't swim, then shes bound to drizzound!
 

Slim-x

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Re:Slim-x vs Storm
« Reply #52 on: August 30, 2003, 11:04:14 PM »
This my last post fo this battle
so I had some fun with it

Ya post was cool bro.
Its good ta battle someone with skills.
this is my first real battle. ya know.

It Was cool. Maybe latter after its over we can battle agen.
in a month from now or so.

good luck.





Ya Last Words


Intro : As I lay you down ta sleep just re-think who brought tha heat and who fell from de-feet/

Personals:

Storm itz tha end of ya term cause ya gotz bad form, I be like a germ/
So when ya swarm try ta hit-in-mess tryin ta diss but in-up in piss and then getz dismissed/
No serum for ya disease bitch please ya be on ya hands knees begging please/
U be tyin ta get ya gold but low-in-behold U about ta fold/
Itz been an-age since ya page U thinking U got ta chance ta dance toe ta toe with slim-x/
What next u gunn-a act like u mike ( Mike Tyson ) but only a tyke or maybe just a dyke/
 

Chorus:

So when ya step ya me and found out ya bout ta die or just be leavin with a black eye/
Nah U can just kiss ya ass good bye n slowly die, bleedin best believing U bitch ass gunn-a fry/
All this when ya high told ya ass ya can’t fly, that’s why I say good-bye/  

Personals Part 2:

Just 4 a minute you though U where with it like George Bennett tryin ta get ur ass ta tha senate/
Been-it done that still ya shit is crap raped in a wacked pick-nic basket/
A-tis-it-a-task-it ur ass goin home in a mother fuckin casket, who ya not gunn-a last-it/
Roll right past-it n blast-it all ta hell, rappin ta Whom Tha Bell Tolls/
Fuckin up all ya golds, laughin like what just happened/      



Outro :
Clip by clip drip by drip U’s be face-in a place-in which no good dogg’s be placed-in/
But not ta be tha space-in between heavens in hell, who fell shall upheld/
U’s was dead on a rival got killed by my death disciples/
Ya Last Words/


 

Slim-x

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Re:Slim-x vs Storm
« Reply #53 on: August 31, 2003, 12:02:45 AM »

This Will Last Fo 7 Day And The Person With More Pointz Win's

End Time For Voting ( Poll vote and a Post - needs both to count ) will be at " 9-6-2003 at 12:00 am cali time......

This post. is at " 8-6-2003 at 12:00 am cali time now.

Thank you for your vote for ether party.

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 This Will Be A 5 Part Poll Vote Battle ( Must Post As Well To Count )

This Will Last Fo 7 Day And The Person With More Pointz Win's


Battle Starts After You Post...


Battle Rule's

TKO = 0-?

1. 5-20 bars, one verse each

2.  No Gay Talk...

3. No Bitin

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Rules On Voting And It Counting

Voting Starts After The Last Post ( After The 5th Post From Both ) No Voting Before None...

1. No Hate Votes That Means Your Vote Dose Not Count If Your Talking Shit To The People In The Battle.

2. Must Post And Use Poll Are It Dose Not Count.


( Please Vote For One Of Us As I Will Do Tha Same For You..)

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Yo whats the deal with this guy named slim X/
He posts 50 times a day to make up for not gettin any sex/
This thugs even faker than a movie/
Try’s to be a vet but is scared to face a newbie/
Its true B…ya got no skills/
I’ll stop with this bullshit and go straight for the kill/
I’m hunting your punk ass down like my name was Good Will/
You don’t have to be a mathematician to know that Slim X can’t spit/
When you add up his words they simply amount to shit/
Seriously dogg, you can’t spell, you need an education/
Forfeit now and I won’t embarrass you if its any consolation/
But talk shit and ill fuck you up without hesitation/
Cause ill rap circles around you like the sun in its rotation.


You're up dogg, bring that shit.



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This Be The One Called Slim-x Bout Ta Lay This Down Fo Ya/
I Bring tha Heat , Drop Tha Beat I Rise From Defeat Must I Repeat/
I Make Platinum Of Tha Streets Reppin My Hood Let It Be Understood/
I Be Like Thugwood Still Up Ta No Good Shoulda Came Strapped/
 Cause You Bout Ta Get Capped Or Just Slapped Like A Hoe/
All-the-o You Dead On Arrival Gotz Capped By My Rifle/
I Be Tha Death Disciple Gona Make Bitchz Pay/
Lookin 4 Tha Nxt Slay Cause U Bitch Gotz Ta Pay/
Droped Down Grabed My A.K So Whatz Can I Say/
Killin Hoe Like You Every Day/
This Be My Payday Bloody X-Day Fuckin Slay-Day/
Death Of A Killa With great Skill Lookin Fo His Nxt Kill/
Still Gotz Ya Blood Stain On My Hands Bout Ta Kill All Ya Fans/
With These Two Hands I Be Wantin By Tha Stands Actin Like A Fan/
Till Ya Trip Cause I Gotz Much Grip N Ya Know Im Still A Crip So Drip By Drip/
Gotz My Pistol On My Hip So Here Ya Tip Fo Ya Don't Be Fuckin With Tha X/
Or Tha Next Than Ya Gona See Is Tha DarkCide Of Me/


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Yo Slim, thanks a lot for that verse which is shitty/
Now be prepared for some adversity/
And when I drop bombs, I don't drop pity/
I'll blow up everyone in your whole fuckin city/
Seriously though, your shit was dope...cause it was bad for my health/
Man I laughed so hard I almost killed myself/
I've never seen someone rhyme a word with the same word so many times in a rap/
You got a new world record and i give you much respect for that/
I don't wanna hurt your feelings cause I know that you'll cry/
But I could beat your ass battling you even when i'm high/
I'll let you keep making up words like thugwood and all-the-o to get by/
And i'm honest when i say i wanna see the darkcide/
Because what there's gonna be is a just another bloody homicide/
When my verbal assault rips ya apart people are gonna say "Oh My!"/
And thats it, you'll be dead, and i will say good-bye.


You're up again. I hope you can respond a little bit faster this time. Peace.

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Part 2 Of 5

Your Next ...



Back In A Flash  Just Ta Bash Ya Hope And Dreams/
Gona Make Ya Baby Mama Cream As She Scream My Name/
Its A Shame Ya Gotz No Game As I Be Livin Up Ta Tha Hall O Fame/
Just Ta Same You Be Livin In Shame Play-n Off My Name/
Man Yo Shit Is Lame Oh Ya Im Ta Blame Cause Ya Can't Sleep/
Makin Ya Shit Weak Like A Pile Of Heap As I Be At My Peek/
Seek-n Ta Kill Spell Out Ya Blood All Over Them Just Before Tha Fall/
Let You Put Ya Spill In Then Its Time Fo Tha Killin/
Cause You Gona Be Feelin Tha Place Between Here N Hell/
No Jail Fo Me As You Can See Been A Thug Way Before 93/
Even If you Don't Agree I Gotz A Better Pet-a-gree/
Cause I'll Smoke Ya Like Tha Finest  Weed  With Out Tha Seeds/
As You Be Begin Please On Ya Knee's As I Be Smokin Tree's Best Believe Me/
It Ain't Easy Ta Fuck With Tha-X Put A Heck-x On Ya Hole Crew/
U Be Actin Tha Fool Just Like A Tool I Take Ya Ta School/
Pull Ya Out Tha Grave Lil Homie Be Brave Cause Your Soul Is My Slave/

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You made a mistake bitch neva fuck with the head of the mob/
But tell your ghostwriter he did a hell of a job/
Cause when I saw that verse I said “Whoa” like Black Rob/
It reminded me of that Bill Murray movie entitled What About Bob/
Where that psycho annoys the hell out of everyone he meets/
Just like how you came and pissed off this entire board of peeps/
With your whack ass icon that gives everyone the creeps/
And then claiming you got a record company and are straight from the streets/
I’m telling you bitch, you can’t handle this/
If you got even one vote it would be scandalous/
You’re battling is so bad its not even a diss/
I don’t need my other homeys to help and assist/
And when its me and you, one on one, I dare you to resist/
Cause I’ll beat youre ass down with an empty bottle of Cris/
And when I kill your fuckin ass you better believe you won’t be missed.


You're up dogg. Keep it coming. Peace.


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I'll be comin back in a flash with two hands full of cash bout ta rip ya baby momma ass/
You tha one who mistakin don't be fakin cause i be brakin you down word for word/
don't ya heard i be tha mac str8 comin for tha attack cause it be rat ta ta ta leavin hoes on their back/
It be a fact i stay strapped still not takin crap still from tha Rattpaq top of my game lookin for tha hall-o-fame/  
Can't be tamed risin from tha flames aim cock pistol scoops aliened bout ta leave ya ass behind/
This is just anther slim-x design can't ya find im behind prison bar from driven stolen car/
Livin this thugg life with tha price of death with in yet i ain't began /
I step ta tha beat bring nothing but tha heat set back and take a seat ya shit is just ta weak/
I be at my peak cause i rise ta tha top of tha heap thats just how i creep /
This is to steep fo ya tryin ta play a game against a playa with great frame its all bout my name/
Leavin ya in shame still as your baby momma talkin my game there ain't no shame ta admit you's got no game/
But its all tha same talkin smack so pack ya shit but i'll keep it legit fo now so if i was ya id quit/
Take a hit of that good shit id smoke ya quicker than tha finest weed no seeds no stems so best sing ya hem’s/
Rollin up wearin my tims with my 20+ rims ya this be slim's bens top of tha line gear wearin Rolex’s/
Dropin booms from here ta Texas so when you see me rollin trow ya town wearin my crown reppin my town/


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You lost slim, its over, try not to fight it/
That was a decent keystyle, but it took you 3 weeks to write it/
You a slim bitch and I’m motherfuckin jacked/
You talk like you’re a thug but we all know its an act/
This battles almost over so get your bags and pack/
Cause when I win this shit I don’t wanna see you comin back/
And if I see you on the streets best believe I’ll be strapped
So lets make a pact…if I win you never post on this board again/
You get off the internet and try to make a friend/
Cause I’m sick of this bullshit dogg this is the end/
You can’t hang with real gangstas so don’t even try it/
You say you got a record label well bitch I don’t buy it/
I own you X, there is nothing you can do/
Maybe in your next lifetime your rappin will be cool/
But postin up this shit and you look like a fool/
Stick to your day job dogg or go back to school.


You're up. Lets finish this.

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A life without pain
--------------------------------------------------

Only fear is my death comin back a bloody murder/
Plainin ta kill ya with no chase cutin off ya face/
Fuckin ya baby momma in ya place as I be cumin in her face/
Be pullin on her waist as she screams in pain tastin her tagg/
Oh ya that just be slang as ya bitch ass be slain no pain/
A-life-without-pain it sound-so-insane with nothin ta gain/

Only death do I fear cause when I die I will re-a-pair/
Plainin-great-things replacing-fake-friends fo enemies/
Enemies with in, still I live my life full of sin no place ta began/  
Be pullin dead body of tha lost-at-all-cost I just went-off/
Left tha rage go showin off my 12 gage mowing hoes down/
Str8 wearin my crown repin my town ya be actin like I be from tha pound/  
   A-life-without-sound ya never-ta-be-found with nothin ta gain/
Itz like it must be insane or some shit from ya brain no pain/
No pain cause when I make tha cut itz ta ya vain, then ya ass got hit by a train/

So do I need ta explain itz was ya suicidal mission fo ya ass ta die/
U’s too fucked up n high so U’s thinkin ya could fly/
That why I ain’t guna fry even when ya momma starts ta cry/
Its do n die hoes like you don’t need ta know why/
So that’s good bye/
 


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You call this a battle, bitch i call it a joke/
How can you claim to have a record label when you're 24 and broke/
You got one last verse kid so try not to choke/
Like it makes a difference...this battle was over before it even started loc/
Your from the darkcide, well im straight from the streets/
And im warning you now that im definitly bringing heat/
I'm elite...Just like candy i'm motherfuckin sweet/
Diabetic, my words are poetic/
Compared to my rhymes your fuckin shit is pathetic/
I had a lot of fun battling you Slim X/
Sorry I had to fuck you up, im done with you next!


Alright man, im done.  My shit got pretty weak by the end but whatever.  Get your last one done and then people can vote. Peace.


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This my last post fo this battle
so I had some fun with it

Ya post was cool bro.
Its good ta battle someone with skills.
this is my first real battle. ya know.

It Was cool. Maybe latter after its over we can battle agen.
in a month from now or so.

good luck.





Ya Last Words


Intro : As I lay you down ta sleep just re-think who brought tha heat and who fell from de-feet/

Personals:

Storm itz tha end of ya term cause ya gotz bad form, I be like a germ/
So when ya swarm try ta hit-in-mess tryin ta diss but in-up in piss and then getz dismissed/
No serum for ya disease bitch please ya be on ya hands knees begging please/
U be tyin ta get ya gold but low-in-behold U about ta fold/
Itz been an-age since ya page U thinking U got ta chance ta dance toe ta toe with slim-x/
What next u gunn-a act like u mike ( Mike Tyson ) but only a tyke or maybe just a dyke/
 

Chorus:

So when ya step ya me and found out ya bout ta die or just be leavin with a black eye/
Nah U can just kiss ya ass good bye n slowly die, bleedin best believing U bitch ass gunn-a fry/
All this when ya high told ya ass ya can’t fly, that’s why I say good-bye/  

Personals Part 2:

Just 4 a minute you though U where with it like George Bennett tryin ta get ur ass ta tha senate/
Been-it done that still ya shit is crap raped in a wacked pick-nic basket/
A-tis-it-a-task-it ur ass goin home in a mother fuckin casket, who ya not gunn-a last-it/
Roll right past-it n blast-it all ta hell, rappin ta Whom Tha Bell Tolls/
Fuckin up all ya golds, laughin like what just happened/      



Outro :
Clip by clip drip by drip U’s be face-in a place-in which no good dogg’s be placed-in/
But not ta be tha space-in between heavens in hell, who fell shall upheld/
U’s was dead on a rival got killed by my death disciples/
Ya Last Words/



 

Slim-x

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Re:Slim-x vs Storm
« Reply #54 on: August 31, 2003, 02:55:19 AM »
1. No Hate Votes That Means Your Vote Dose Not Count If Your Talking Shit To The People In The Battle.

2. Must Post And Use Poll Are It Dose Not Count.
 

Slim-x

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Re:Slim-x vs Storm
« Reply #55 on: August 31, 2003, 05:19:47 PM »


If you wanta Vote read tha rules.
if not you vote don't count!!!!!!!!!!!!


This is tha rules....
 

Slim-x

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Re:Slim-x vs Storm
« Reply #56 on: August 31, 2003, 06:47:54 PM »


  Slim-x vs Storm

 0 = 0 Still no votes
 

Fabulous_Verstyle

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Re:Slim-x vs Storm
« Reply #57 on: August 31, 2003, 06:48:55 PM »
both uf ur verses were tite,its a big battle, so gimme some time makin up an xplained cote for this.

pz
 

Slim-x

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Re:Slim-x vs Storm
« Reply #58 on: August 31, 2003, 06:55:20 PM »


Thanks fo ya time in voting
 

OpTiCaL

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Re:Slim-x vs Storm
« Reply #59 on: September 01, 2003, 03:30:55 AM »
Not bad at all guys...started off badly but rescued nicely...

...ya kno what i mean..some real tight flow there and good lyrical content...


...lets see some more in the future from both of you


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