NEW KEY by Proph

[Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..]

sit back and flip tracks on the dual vestax/
theres a whack tax for all the shitty rap cats/
im testin how ya brain reacts, to my barrage of lyrics/
its so loud ya hear it, so ill ya fear it/
im jus an omnipresent being/
here there and everywhre, u an adolecent fleeing/
the scene of this lyrical contest/
u tryin to escape my attack, but tahts nonsense/
check my concience but its nowhere to be found/
my sound pounds, its record book bound/
my antics are upon frowned, but im relentless/
knock ya ass out like gas at the dentist/
u made-up fake shit like a seventh day adventist/
ive sent this, enveloped in with anthrax/
call u a postal worker, openin with gas-masks/
afraid of my back-draft of rhyme-heat/
got ya head spinnin like spintek on chrome feet/
ya stuck back in ya seat, ya shocked in amazement/
time of death is now were not gonna save him/
call me the mortician, cuz i examine my kills/
so more like a psycho physician, takin too many pills/
bills bills, gimmicks n thrills/
u a dick ryda with too much time to kill/
thats it now ive had it, im done/
jus a little key to show ya where im comin from/



FEEDBACK appreciated

[C-Bizz]

it was alright man. seemed to get better towards the end. keep doing yo thang.

[Solomen Grundee]

Jesus christ. Your flow sux nutz and it is wayyyyyyyyyyyy toooooo simple, pop some multies, complex multies, imagery, twistin rhyme scheme, or a flipin rhyme scheme...plus it needs content...elevate

[Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..]

who the fuck are u?

and i asked for feedback...not someone telling me what to do. i wasnt aiming for a complex verse...it was just a little freestyle off the top of my dome. so who the fuck are u to come at me like that. that was like ur first fuckin post. fuckin goof.

and yo Bizzle thanks for the input dogg.

[Solomen Grundee]

who the fuck are u?

and i asked for feedback...not someone telling me what to do. i wasnt aiming for a complex verse...it was just a little freestyle off the top of my dome. so who the fuck are u to come at me like that. that was like ur first fuckin post. fuckin goof.

and yo Bizzle thanks for the input dogg.

Constructive critisism...This is "Jem"'s brother...wise up homes

[Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..]

who the fuck are u?

and i asked for feedback...not someone telling me what to do. i wasnt aiming for a complex verse...it was just a little freestyle off the top of my dome. so who the fuck are u to come at me like that. that was like ur first fuckin post. fuckin goof.

and yo Bizzle thanks for the input dogg.

Constructive critisism...This is "Jem"'s brother...wise up homes

LOL that explains A LOT

[abstruse]

NS Proph. But yeh it was coo off the top of the head, i could picture cypherin with tha homies and someone spittin shit like that, it was coo for a free.

[Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..]

NS Proph. But yeh it was coo off the top of the head, i could picture cypherin with tha homies and someone spittin shit like that, it was coo for a free.

yah man thats exactly what im talkin about...just a little key off the top...no attention to multi's n shit...just spittin live.

thanks dogg

peace

[|JEM|ILL|]

NS Proph. But yeh it was coo off the top of the head, i could picture cypherin with tha homies and someone spittin shit like that, it was coo for a free.

yah man thats exactly what im talkin about...just a little key off the top...no attention to multi's n shit...just spittin live.

thanks dogg

peace

Actually it's called spittin sell out, In hip Hop you try and do your best to pay attention to every detail even in a freestyle, when you just lax it, you lose...

[Jimmy Cash]

Actually it's called spittin sell out, In hip Hop you try and do your best to pay attention to every detail even in a freestyle, when you just lax it, you lose...

wtf, a freestyle is a freestyle, you can do whatever the fuck you want

that was some nice shit pro, props

[Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..]

exactly....hip hop is your own...u cant define hip hop like that. like is aid i wasnt down for a colpex rhyme scheme....i wanted to drop somethin simple. ur just an idiot


thansk fo the props dogg

[Ballistikz]

Solomen is a retard obviously.. that was a tight lil flip man.. strong points.. good rhymes.. nice use of words.. it was thug, but still had that poetic quality.. shit was tight.. good job man..