Jemuel .:VS:. @ss@ssin

[|JEM|ILL|]

yall know the rules...10 lines...

[|JEM|ILL|]

Straight spiking heads, hitting the floor n makin ya body-fall
When i'm 'serving @ss' over the 'net' like games of 'volley-ball'!!!
Your tracks are whack, and you don't have a chance to beat-me
So wack you couldn't have a 'hot album' if you 'burned a c.-d.'!!
Lack of skill's genetic; ya mom's a trashy slut, how's this not-clear?
Ya 'fucking garbage'...and 'so did ya dad, that's how ya got-here'!!
Mock-Fear, stop-queer, shit-is-painless, My-hand-writs-is-stainless...
'Fuck his way big', startin with 'Mob Deep', he-'admits-In-Famous'!!(Infamous/In Famous)
You drag-wearing loser, never creative. there's no-fun-flow-in-your-bars...
I HAD to use fake personals for the battle, cuz no-one-knows-who-you-are!!

[bez]

Nice Jem, very nice.  

[Disceptive AssAssin]

HOLD THIS SHIT SUN..


LET ME DROP A JEM ON EM....

MUHAHAHAH

First of all you take my vote for dickrider of the year...
Hands down... cuz no one wants to argue wit this queer../
MY shit hit ear to ear, and then transfers to the rest of ya frame...
Im investin-in-pain, insertin hollow-tips-in-ya-brain../
Point blank.. opps a little too explosive.. those punches are so old they turning corrosive../
Infamous by the way i live my life, fucking wit niggaz thats trife.. you aint know.. now you know feel the blade of my knife/
I protect flanks.. so trying attackin like a circle...
then ill choke-ya-ass till-ya-gasp and then ya turn purple.../
Really-tho wats the drillie-yo... its like every key i go... i see the same shitty ho../*
Dont get made im only being ill, exposed that you fake wit no guts to kill/**
This man spits more shit then a sewer... ya wreek dogg so stop the baths in cow manure.../
Leavin' em blessed wit this last-bar, cover up ya gash'd-scar.. ive been keying here for a couple of years/
Now i see the site accuqired a couple of queers... and for the record most emceez know me... 10 bars deep dogg and ill i gotta say... BLOW ME/***

* yall know what pac song im talking about
** at the end of the pac song..snoop dogg says.. "dont get made at me im only being real" in my key i say " dont get mad im only being ill"

*** i dont know if this dude is new... but he claiming no one knows me...

[|JEM|ILL|]

Drop a vote on one of my battles and i drop a vote on one of yours...

[Disceptive AssAssin]

uppin'

[·SiNiStEr·]

Wooo iM bored..

Jemuel - good punches.. some of your punches were O.K. but you had some tight ones that flowed well and they had some mad creativity.. dope verse..

Fav. Line -
Straight spiking heads, hitting the floor n makin ya body-fall
When i'm 'serving @ss' over the 'net' like games of 'volley-ball'!!!

Assassin - nice verse homie, one of the better assassin verses but I couldnt help to notice that your multis are off..
Im investin-in-pain, insertin hollow-tips-in-ya-brain../
^^ not multis.. a good example usin that bar would be..
Im investin-in-pain simultaneously conquestin-Jem's-brain../
^^ moreless a decent multi.. gotta keep the syllables the same homie.. u know dis.. another example..
then ill choke-ya-ass till-ya-gasp and then ya turn purple.../
^^ lil change right herre..
Choke ya ass till-ya-gaspin, watch ya faint and fill-ya-casket, im the killa in vanilla-bastad../(bastard)
You get what im sayin..
Content wise the verse was aight, pretty hard hittin but U lackin some unity and ya multis were off so Ima have to take that into consideration..

Fav. Line -
This man spits more shit then a sewer... ya wreek dogg so stop the baths in cow manure.../

Numbaz..
Jemuel - 4 / 5
Assassin - 3.45 / 5

Vote - Jemuel

[Disceptive AssAssin]

grr...

[Jimmy Cash]

this was a a close battle for sure, but i'ma have to go with jem. sin pointded out the lack of untiy in the assassins verse, assassin came hard as fuck but jem had the word play

vote = jem

[Disceptive AssAssin]

uppin'

[M Dogg™]

Man, neither verse was truly great. I think though that in the end, Jem had a slightly better verse. so I vote for Jem.

[|JEM|ILL|]

another KO to the list, another closed battle...thanks votes.

[Disceptive AssAssin]

good battle... thanks to all the voters.......