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Proph .:VS:. Ill Logical<<Proph wins>>
« on: August 12, 2003, 02:16:24 AM »
k dogg


10-15 bars
first to 5
3-0 is a KO
explain votes

friday fo sho...lets say 12:00pm cali time


aight peace.
« Last Edit: August 19, 2003, 01:09:08 PM by Big Propheezay »
Battle record: 6-4-0
5 KO's

Wins: Concrete, Qurate-L, Slim-x, Ill Logical, Dreamz, Balliztics
Losses: jaydubuwa, C-Bizzle, Jem, Bez

June awards: Rookie of the month
 

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Re:Proph .:VS:. Ill Logical
« Reply #1 on: August 13, 2003, 09:01:00 AM »
yo, i hope we can battle again sometime in the future cuz imo 10-15 is kinda short, thats why it doesn't really have a conclusion, but whatever


I’ll chain you to a chair and shave off all your hair//
Take a marker and draw a beard then take you to Times’ Square//
Wrap your head in a towel, scribble Bin Ladin on your back , then walk away and just leave you chillin’ there//
You call your self “The Chef” but The Chef is Shallah from the Wu//
I call myself death cuz my techs are the color of blue//
But you can call me the blaster worm, I shut down your system//
I got MCs foaming at the mouth like a rabid raccoon bit them//
See my last battle with Pee Wee was just to get back into the swing of things//
I got a taste of blood and now my Spidy sense is tingaling//
I “cum” ill in battles which leads to a “sticky situation”//
Cuz I switch styles like your mom changes medication//
Which means I put you behind “hard bars” like incarceration//
You wanna test skill, here test this//
Oh shit, I forgot you can’t see me but I’m grabbing my dick//
PM me if you want a pic, jpeg or gif//  
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« Last Edit: August 13, 2003, 09:06:58 AM by Ill Logical »

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Re:Proph .:VS:. Ill Logical
« Reply #2 on: August 14, 2003, 02:15:31 AM »
daaaaaaaaamn, thats a nice verse
 

Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..

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Re:Proph .:VS:. Ill Logical
« Reply #3 on: August 15, 2003, 01:10:34 AM »
cats get ripped by my verbal slap-stick,
leavin MC's with nothin but chapped-lips/
like a king cobra, i inject-ya-vein-quick,
look out dogg, best protect-ya-main-bitch/
cuz im takin everything ya own, even ya wife,
then ill turn around and stab ya, leavin-the-knife/
cuz im raw, rugged and ruthless, breakin-ya-dome
im hard, sluggin ya toothless, shakin-ya-home/
dogg, u betta count ya blessins, pray-to-god,
this is a verbal battle lesson, make u a slave-to-Proph/

homie, my style is sought after, my raps so flaunted,
u a snitch ass busta, u call John Walsh, cuz im "most-wanted"/
ya graves haunted by my loss causing curse,
its all ova now, u drownin, cuz u fully emersed/
Battle record: 6-4-0
5 KO's

Wins: Concrete, Qurate-L, Slim-x, Ill Logical, Dreamz, Balliztics
Losses: jaydubuwa, C-Bizzle, Jem, Bez

June awards: Rookie of the month
 

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Re:Proph .:VS:. Ill Logical<<VOTES>>
« Reply #4 on: August 15, 2003, 01:11:09 PM »
NIce little batle ya'll.  I am going to just get straight to voting.

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Ill-Logical-Nice little verse, no multies in there, wordplay was aight, but not really any punches nor personels in there either.  It was an ok verse but I definetly would advice you tro try and work on your punches a alot more.  Your flow was ok, nothing special tho.

Fav line(s):

I &#8220;cum&#8221; ill in battles which leads to a &#8220;sticky situation&#8221;//
Cuz I switch styles like your mom changes medication//

Oh shit, I forgot you can&#8217;t see me but I&#8217;m grabbing my dick//
PM me if you want a pic, jpeg or gif//  

Score:  2.00

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Proph-shits the same as Ill really.  Nice little verse, wasn't much wordplay in there and your flow was good and your multies thought very forced where ok in place.  Your very was very simplistic and your punches where also like Ill-Logicals quite weak.  You also repped yourself a bit in the verse which brought it down a bit.

Fav Line(s):

cuz im raw, rugged and ruthless, breakin-ya-dome
im hard, sluggin ya toothless, shakin-ya-home/

ya graves haunted by my loss causing curse,
its all ova now, u drownin, cuz u fully emersed/

Score:  2.00


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I gotta give this battle a draw becaause I thought both verse where simple, quite weak, not very entertaining and verrrrrrrry boring.  Punches where lacking, multies where used in some place but still they wasn't used to a good ability, personels where lost and wordplay was way to simple.  Flow was the only thing that I enjoyed from these two verses and still the flow was farrrrr from amazing.  You 2 guys have Bez's first ever draw award, keep working on ya rhymes tho.

DRAW
 

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Re:Proph .:VS:. Ill Logical<<VOTES>>
« Reply #5 on: August 15, 2003, 01:36:16 PM »
both yall didnt really use punches


ill logic:

Fav Lines....

You call your self &#8220;The Chef&#8221; but The Chef is Shallah from the Wu//
I call myself death cuz my techs are the color of blue//

i thought that was your best punch... you didnt have any personals.. you raped about yourself alot...


Proph:

Fav Lines....

"cuz im raw, rugged and ruthless, breakin-ya-dome
im hard, sluggin ya toothless,"

thought you too had a lack of personals... there was alot of shit you could have used by researching..


Final Thought:

Normal Battle.. lacking personals... but had tite flows...
Proph's shit hit harder... and flowed smoother.......

vote: proph


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Re:Proph .:VS:. Ill Logical<<VOTES>>
« Reply #6 on: August 15, 2003, 05:28:06 PM »
Shit...this one was hard to judge, both battlers lacked personals ontheir beats.. they came out a lil weak, and were obviously grudge rappin..not alot to judge on out of this battle.. but im gunna have to say my vote goes to Proph....his ideas were not any better than Ill Logicals..but it did contain some nice Flow in the second paragraph....
« Last Edit: August 15, 2003, 09:17:35 PM by Ballistikz »
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Re:Proph .:VS:. Ill Logical<<VOTES>>
« Reply #7 on: August 18, 2003, 01:09:36 PM »
uppin..
Battle record: 6-4-0
5 KO's

Wins: Concrete, Qurate-L, Slim-x, Ill Logical, Dreamz, Balliztics
Losses: jaydubuwa, C-Bizzle, Jem, Bez

June awards: Rookie of the month
 

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Re:Proph .:VS:. Ill Logical<<VOTES>>
« Reply #8 on: August 18, 2003, 04:59:27 PM »
Uh...iffy battle, im not gonna give yall some straight bullshit so heres it straight...

Proph had Punches and Flow...

Ill had weak wordplay...but had the WP...

V: Proph...

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Re:Proph .:VS:. Ill Logical<<VOTES>>
« Reply #9 on: August 18, 2003, 06:31:22 PM »
KO...aight nice battle dogg lets do it again soon...next time it'll be 20 bars ;D
Battle record: 6-4-0
5 KO's

Wins: Concrete, Qurate-L, Slim-x, Ill Logical, Dreamz, Balliztics
Losses: jaydubuwa, C-Bizzle, Jem, Bez

June awards: Rookie of the month