Author Topic: Lyrics To my first Demo Track...Subway... Feedback would really be appreciated.  (Read 251 times)

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"Im thinkin bout adding 2 more bars/ 4 more lines at the end for a hott finnisher what yall think?"


just say:

"u like this whisky and extasy? here drink sum more/
and sign this contract: if we go broke i'm a pimp ur ma hore/" ;D




yeah man, i hate really mushy mushy rap. leave that shit to diddy and fab.

2 outta about of a couple hundred cats had sumthin negative?

An' slim that point of the song is not to have a Female singer on it im doin all vocals since i can also sing. And yea I gotta latin beat in the shit mayne...
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ARYC

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"since i can also sing"

i tried to sing once......it made my family want to denounce me...