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~Mack vs. Vito~ Rnd. 2 (Mack won)
« on: August 28, 2003, 02:31:11 AM »
Allright y'all, Mack wants a rematch cause he thinks I wrote too long a bars in our first battle, so to be fair, I said I would.  Allright,
10 bars
3-0 K0
4 votes to win
explained votes only
tj if you just quote somebody else for your explanation I ain't countin your vote, and I'm spittin first so there will be no bitchin'
« Last Edit: August 30, 2003, 07:11:04 PM by vitodeluca »

.:-ELITE-:.   M-Dogg.. Rodzilla.. SiNiStEr.. VitoDeLuca.. S.H.O.P..  .:-ELITE-:.Wins: Lost titan, bloody apronz, cee hoody, the answer, indecisive, primo, abstruse, ill natural, Adam X, Bez, Illicit aka Cee Ride, CSN, Jemuel, timelock, prophecy, assasin, Mack
Losses: Mack(x2), Red Alert,
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Re:Mack vs. Vito rnd. 2
« Reply #1 on: August 28, 2003, 02:40:45 AM »
Mack wins' like lays, "ya can't have jus one", this bitch cries more often than beauty pagent contestants, guess that easy booty can't be rejected,
The weakest link in VDK, like a chipped xbox ya known fa "playin' backup(s)", ya crews wackest, ya jus get "slapped the fatak-up" (1)
comin outta kill kali bringin fear to this kid's-heart, the fear shit-starts, got ya mommy yellin' from the laundry "Mack what's up wit da skid-marks?" (crappin' in his pants wit fear)
I'm dispersin deadly colds, when cold blooded ruger often-spits, aim the gat at mack, cause I'm known for producin' coffin-fits (coughin' fits)
emptyin' clip magazines, I'm just "periodically able", mack's "outta his element", like plastic on a periodic table,
Mack quotin' beyonce, respect me like I quotes-aretha, only time mack pack's clips, is ta keep hair outta tone's-urethra (dick rider) (2)
ya got slept on bars, like prisoners sleepin' standin-up, this "pussy" needs some help, like a short handed-slut in a hand job rut,
mack gotta new thug life, but tha hood ain't inta-net-passes, ya style's weak when "lackin' killa bites" (kilo bytes) like ya cut off internet-access
mah bars jus lost weight , don't need to drop a novel 4 me-ta-gestate, ya shit's always had a "familiar ring", so I could kill ya via vhs-tape, (3)
leave this reverse oreo-in-da-trailer I know 8 ain't ya home-mile, like stranglin' georgio-wit-a-blazer, I jus killed ya wit ya own-style!! (4)

1) fatak, as in red alert, beat mack, and he's in his crew, oh and "backups" are pirated copies of xbox games
2) mack posted a keystyle called "say my name" like destiny's child, lol
3) as in the movie "the ring" where people died from watchin a video.  Gestate means to hatch a plan.
4) Oreo in reverse, black on the inside, white on the outside, and Georgio Armani
« Last Edit: August 28, 2003, 02:42:28 AM by vitodeluca »

.:-ELITE-:.   M-Dogg.. Rodzilla.. SiNiStEr.. VitoDeLuca.. S.H.O.P..  .:-ELITE-:.Wins: Lost titan, bloody apronz, cee hoody, the answer, indecisive, primo, abstruse, ill natural, Adam X, Bez, Illicit aka Cee Ride, CSN, Jemuel, timelock, prophecy, assasin, Mack
Losses: Mack(x2), Red Alert,
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Re:Mack vs. Vito rnd. 2
« Reply #2 on: August 28, 2003, 02:45:13 AM »
Not my best but whateva... ::)

.:-ELITE-:.   M-Dogg.. Rodzilla.. SiNiStEr.. VitoDeLuca.. S.H.O.P..  .:-ELITE-:.Wins: Lost titan, bloody apronz, cee hoody, the answer, indecisive, primo, abstruse, ill natural, Adam X, Bez, Illicit aka Cee Ride, CSN, Jemuel, timelock, prophecy, assasin, Mack
Losses: Mack(x2), Red Alert,
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Re:Mack vs. Vito rnd. 2
« Reply #3 on: August 28, 2003, 04:01:07 AM »
Ill e-mail-this-bitch-threats,callin me frail-this-kid-jests..
cus now "urine in trouble" like ya jus fuckin failed-a-piss-test..*
ill snap ya neck-wit-a-touch,ruin that little rep-ya-got-up..
Vito only got the "balls-to-speak" when he put his head-ta-my-nuts..
run an call-Elite,you fear my spits like Mack caught-the-SARS..
Vito i thought-he-hard,but to come close ta me had ta drop forty-bars!..
an when you see my "bars"-ya-hate-it,like clostraphobics bein incar-cerated..
the boards new stars-are-make-shift..
livin in cali?..like pornstars ya trin to hard-to-fake-it..
get left scarred-an-naked,quit typin-ya-fool..
ya had one nice line...an even then ya were bitin-Jemuel..
pop tart be like Christina,tell me you a steady-"fighter"..
but Mack is jus too much fa the web...like a heavy-spider..


lol....votes....verse done...


would ya look-at-that...
Vito brought his foot-notes-back,
how can ya repent-this..
It like spittin a verse on stage then sayin when i said that,i meant-this..







 

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Re:Mack vs. Vito rnd. 2
« Reply #4 on: August 28, 2003, 01:00:07 PM »
Mack wins' like lays, "ya can't have jus one", this bitch cries more often than beauty pagent contestants, guess that easy booty can't be rejected,
...Wack, no point to this line...
The weakest link in VDK, like a chipped xbox ya known fa "playin' backup(s)", ya crews wackest, ya jus get "slapped the fatak-up" (1)
..Back up line is ok...Fatak line is wack as fuck...
comin outta kill kali bringin fear to this kid's-heart, the fear shit-starts, got ya mommy yellin' from the laundry "Mack what's up wit da skid-marks?" (crappin' in his pants wit fear)
um no...Played...
I'm dispersin deadly colds, when cold blooded ruger often-spits, aim the gat at mack, cause I'm known for producin' coffin-fits (coughin' fits)
Dope wordplay...
emptyin' clip magazines, I'm just "periodically able", mack's "outta his element", like plastic on a periodic table,
that really doesn't make and fuckin sense at all...
Mack quotin' beyonce, respect me like I quotes-aretha, only time mack pack's clips, is ta keep hair outta tone's-urethra (dick rider) (2)
...LOL!!1 ill...
ya got slept on bars, like prisoners sleepin' standin-up, this "pussy" needs some help, like a short handed-slut in a hand job rut,
...played and weak...
mack gotta new thug life, but tha hood ain't inta-net-passes, ya style's weak when "lackin' killa bites" (kilo bytes) like ya cut off internet-access
...dope punch...
mah bars jus lost weight , don't need to drop a novel 4 me-ta-gestate, ya shit's always had a "familiar ring", so I could kill ya via vhs-tape, (3)
wack!
leave this reverse oreo-in-da-trailer I know 8 ain't ya home-mile, like stranglin' georgio-wit-a-blazer, I jus killed ya wit ya own-style!! (4)
...weak ender...

Ill e-mail-this-bitch-threats,callin me frail-this-kid-jests..
cus now "urine in trouble" like ya jus fuckin failed-a-piss-test..*
STOP WITH THE FUCKIN USE OF MY LINE...but nice personal switch up lol...
ill snap ya neck-wit-a-touch,ruin that little rep-ya-got-up..
Vito only got the "balls-to-speak" when he put his head-ta-my-nuts..
LOL dope wordplay punch...
run an call-Elite,you fear my spits like Mack caught-the-SARS..
Vito i thought-he-hard,but to come close ta me had ta drop forty-bars!..
nice personal punch...
an when you see my "bars"-ya-hate-it,like clostraphobics bein incar-cerated..
Your prisoner wordplay was iller...dope
the boards new stars-are-make-shift..
livin in cali?..like pornstars ya trin to hard-to-fake-it..
word lol dope
get left scarred-an-naked,quit typin-ya-fool..
ya had one nice line...an even then ya were bitin-Jemuel..
I LIKE THIS LINE...lol nice personal
pop tart be like Christina,tell me you a steady-"fighter"..
but Mack is jus too much fa the web...like a heavy-spider..
played and just a filler...weak ending


Flow: Mack
Rhyme Scheme: Mack
Multies: Mack

Punches: Mack
Personals: Mack
Disses: Vito

Wordplay: Vito
Punch Play: Mack

Hardness:Mack
Lyricism: Mack
Humor: Mack

Vote: Mack
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Re:~Mack vs. Vito~ Rnd. 2 (verses up)
« Reply #5 on: August 28, 2003, 01:54:29 PM »
yeah...i put the star next to it but fagot ta explain..i was jus basically bringin up he said it....ya know like on b-boys...in one of the 101's someone post up some shit...bout one upsmanship...basically take somesone koncept an make it betta...



1-0 my way....keep the votes comin....
 

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Re:Mack vs. Vito rnd. 2
« Reply #6 on: August 28, 2003, 02:13:34 PM »
Mack wins' like lays, "ya can't have jus one", this bitch cries more often than beauty pagent contestants, guess that easy booty can't be rejected,
...Wack, no point to this line...
The weakest link in VDK, like a chipped xbox ya known fa "playin' backup(s)", ya crews wackest, ya jus get "slapped the fatak-up" (1)
..Back up line is ok...Fatak line is wack as fuck...
comin outta kill kali bringin fear to this kid's-heart, the fear shit-starts, got ya mommy yellin' from the laundry "Mack what's up wit da skid-marks?" (crappin' in his pants wit fear)
um no...Played...
I'm dispersin deadly colds, when cold blooded ruger often-spits, aim the gat at mack, cause I'm known for producin' coffin-fits (coughin' fits)
Dope wordplay...
emptyin' clip magazines, I'm just "periodically able", mack's "outta his element", like plastic on a periodic table,
that really doesn't make and fuckin sense at all...
Mack quotin' beyonce, respect me like I quotes-aretha, only time mack pack's clips, is ta keep hair outta tone's-urethra (dick rider) (2)
...LOL!!1 ill...
ya got slept on bars, like prisoners sleepin' standin-up, this "pussy" needs some help, like a short handed-slut in a hand job rut,
...played and weak...
mack gotta new thug life, but tha hood ain't inta-net-passes, ya style's weak when "lackin' killa bites" (kilo bytes) like ya cut off internet-access
...dope punch...
mah bars jus lost weight , don't need to drop a novel 4 me-ta-gestate, ya shit's always had a "familiar ring", so I could kill ya via vhs-tape, (3)
wack!
leave this reverse oreo-in-da-trailer I know 8 ain't ya home-mile, like stranglin' georgio-wit-a-blazer, I jus killed ya wit ya own-style!! (4)
...weak ender...

Ill e-mail-this-bitch-threats,callin me frail-this-kid-jests..
cus now "urine in trouble" like ya jus fuckin failed-a-piss-test..*
STOP WITH THE FUCKIN USE OF MY LINE...but nice personal switch up lol...
ill snap ya neck-wit-a-touch,ruin that little rep-ya-got-up..
Vito only got the "balls-to-speak" when he put his head-ta-my-nuts..
LOL dope wordplay punch...
run an call-Elite,you fear my spits like Mack caught-the-SARS..
Vito i thought-he-hard,but to come close ta me had ta drop forty-bars!..
nice personal punch...
an when you see my "bars"-ya-hate-it,like clostraphobics bein incar-cerated..
Your prisoner wordplay was iller...dope
the boards new stars-are-make-shift..
livin in cali?..like pornstars ya trin to hard-to-fake-it..
word lol dope
get left scarred-an-naked,quit typin-ya-fool..
ya had one nice line...an even then ya were bitin-Jemuel..
I LIKE THIS LINE...lol nice personal
pop tart be like Christina,tell me you a steady-"fighter"..
but Mack is jus too much fa the web...like a heavy-spider..
played and just a filler...weak ending


Yo jem, thx for the detailed line by line vote man, shit helps.  One thing though, just so you know, the emptyin' clip "magazines" when I say I'm periodically able it was jus some wordplay on magazines and perodicals, get it?  Plus, you thought the shorthanded slut in a hand job rut was weak?  I thought that was one a my funniest lines...and the whole thing about droppin' a novel, vs. killin' vs. vhs tape, that was some wordplay also.  Anyways, jus wanted ta clarify.

.:-ELITE-:.   M-Dogg.. Rodzilla.. SiNiStEr.. VitoDeLuca.. S.H.O.P..  .:-ELITE-:.Wins: Lost titan, bloody apronz, cee hoody, the answer, indecisive, primo, abstruse, ill natural, Adam X, Bez, Illicit aka Cee Ride, CSN, Jemuel, timelock, prophecy, assasin, Mack
Losses: Mack(x2), Red Alert,
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Re:Mack vs. Vito rnd. 2
« Reply #7 on: August 28, 2003, 02:27:40 PM »
Mack wins' like lays, "ya can't have jus one", this bitch cries more often than beauty pagent contestants, guess that easy booty can't be rejected,
...Wack, no point to this line...
The weakest link in VDK, like a chipped xbox ya known fa "playin' backup(s)", ya crews wackest, ya jus get "slapped the fatak-up" (1)
..Back up line is ok...Fatak line is wack as fuck...
comin outta kill kali bringin fear to this kid's-heart, the fear shit-starts, got ya mommy yellin' from the laundry "Mack what's up wit da skid-marks?" (crappin' in his pants wit fear)
um no...Played...
I'm dispersin deadly colds, when cold blooded ruger often-spits, aim the gat at mack, cause I'm known for producin' coffin-fits (coughin' fits)
Dope wordplay...
emptyin' clip magazines, I'm just "periodically able", mack's "outta his element", like plastic on a periodic table,
that really doesn't make and fuckin sense at all...
Mack quotin' beyonce, respect me like I quotes-aretha, only time mack pack's clips, is ta keep hair outta tone's-urethra (dick rider) (2)
...LOL!!1 ill...
ya got slept on bars, like prisoners sleepin' standin-up, this "pussy" needs some help, like a short handed-slut in a hand job rut,
...played and weak...
mack gotta new thug life, but tha hood ain't inta-net-passes, ya style's weak when "lackin' killa bites" (kilo bytes) like ya cut off internet-access
...dope punch...
mah bars jus lost weight , don't need to drop a novel 4 me-ta-gestate, ya shit's always had a "familiar ring", so I could kill ya via vhs-tape, (3)
wack!
leave this reverse oreo-in-da-trailer I know 8 ain't ya home-mile, like stranglin' georgio-wit-a-blazer, I jus killed ya wit ya own-style!! (4)
...weak ender...

Ill e-mail-this-bitch-threats,callin me frail-this-kid-jests..
cus now "urine in trouble" like ya jus fuckin failed-a-piss-test..*
STOP WITH THE FUCKIN USE OF MY LINE...but nice personal switch up lol...
ill snap ya neck-wit-a-touch,ruin that little rep-ya-got-up..
Vito only got the "balls-to-speak" when he put his head-ta-my-nuts..
LOL dope wordplay punch...
run an call-Elite,you fear my spits like Mack caught-the-SARS..
Vito i thought-he-hard,but to come close ta me had ta drop forty-bars!..
nice personal punch...
an when you see my "bars"-ya-hate-it,like clostraphobics bein incar-cerated..
Your prisoner wordplay was iller...dope
the boards new stars-are-make-shift..
livin in cali?..like pornstars ya trin to hard-to-fake-it..
word lol dope
get left scarred-an-naked,quit typin-ya-fool..
ya had one nice line...an even then ya were bitin-Jemuel..
I LIKE THIS LINE...lol nice personal
pop tart be like Christina,tell me you a steady-"fighter"..
but Mack is jus too much fa the web...like a heavy-spider..
played and just a filler...weak ending


Yo jem, thx for the detailed line by line vote man, shit helps.  One thing though, just so you know, the emptyin' clip "magazines" when I say I'm periodically able it was jus some wordplay on magazines and perodicals, get it?  Plus, you thought the shorthanded slut in a hand job rut was weak?  I thought that was one a my funniest lines...and the whole thing about droppin' a novel, vs. killin' vs. vhs tape, that was some wordplay also.  Anyways, jus wanted ta clarify.


yeah...vito...i aint bein funny(fa once)...but that one thing ya gotta do.....remember some people aint gunna know as much about certain thangs as you are....so some shit jus aint gunna make sense ta um.....plus ya gotta make sure its worded right or it wont come off...cus you know what ya mean..but everyone else might not....i was gunna use this line but i knew if ppl didnt watch wrestlin...theyd view the line as filler....

Theres no 1/2 steppin-wit-Mack,u swung,im jus gettin-ya-back..
cus truth is i "Roc" more than Maivia an Jay-z ina wrestlin-match..
 

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Re:~Mack vs. Vito~ Rnd. 2 (verses up)
« Reply #8 on: August 28, 2003, 02:32:07 PM »
cool man, thx for the advice.  Funny wrestlin' line btw.

.:-ELITE-:.   M-Dogg.. Rodzilla.. SiNiStEr.. VitoDeLuca.. S.H.O.P..  .:-ELITE-:.Wins: Lost titan, bloody apronz, cee hoody, the answer, indecisive, primo, abstruse, ill natural, Adam X, Bez, Illicit aka Cee Ride, CSN, Jemuel, timelock, prophecy, assasin, Mack
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Re:~Mack vs. Vito~ Rnd. 2 (votes!)
« Reply #9 on: August 30, 2003, 03:23:12 PM »
yo id jus like ta say...i really wanna thank everyone that voted for takin the time to vote on this battle...thank you very much


WHAT?

what you mean nobodies voted afta fuckin jemuel,is this a joke or something....you motherfuckaz....
 

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Re:~Mack vs. Vito~ Rnd. 2 (votes!)
« Reply #10 on: August 30, 2003, 04:23:33 PM »
sorry phellas, was going to vote on this today but had a very busy 1.  Will do tomoz.  
 

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Re:~Mack vs. Vito~ Rnd. 2 (votes!)
« Reply #11 on: August 30, 2003, 05:44:05 PM »
Vito - ya verse was real inconsistent, btw the first line didnt flow well at all and there was no real point, like jem said basically.. some punches were dope as fuck, some just had no point, as for the breakdown of ya verse.. jemuel pretty well sized it up for me. Good shit overall, just work on ya scheme a lil.. and i got the periodic line.

Fav. Line -
I'm dispersin deadly colds, when cold blooded ruger often-spits, aim the gat at mack, cause I'm known for producin' coffin-fits//
^^dopest line ive seen from u in a while.. good shit

Mack - good shit homie, real raw and hittin vito pretty good, again J's explanation sized it up pretty well.

Fav. Line -
Vito i thought-he-hard,but to come close ta me had ta drop forty-bars!..
an when you see my "bars"-ya-hate-it,like clostraphobics bein incar-cerated//

Ahh well, real close battle you 2, rivalry been pretty damn good..

Numbaz..
Mack - 4.15/5
Vito - 4.05/5

I decided to give this one to Mack cuz he came raw, his flow was off the hook, content was good, he incorporated everything and threw in a lil humor too. I do feel that vito's better bars, were harder than mack's better bars, but mack was consistent and those good lines were personal and vito had some bad lines.. good shit from both of you either way.

Vote - Mack
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Re:~Mack vs. Vito~ Rnd. 2 (votes!)
« Reply #12 on: August 30, 2003, 05:49:16 PM »
heres my 2 cents.......im not in a mood of writin a full ass vote,

VITO : ya had a nice verse, but wasnt tht strong, the structure wasnt tht good/

MACK : Your verse was half infront of VITO's but as SIN said it was raw, i was feelin every damn line of it. Your whole shit was hard.

VOTE : DA NOTORIOUS MACK
 

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Re:~Mack vs. Vito~ Rnd. 2 (votes!)
« Reply #13 on: August 30, 2003, 07:09:43 PM »
Allright, ko, the funny thing is I thought this verse was better than the one I beat mack with, LOL.  Anyways, thanks to all who voted.  Favor will be returned.

.:-ELITE-:.   M-Dogg.. Rodzilla.. SiNiStEr.. VitoDeLuca.. S.H.O.P..  .:-ELITE-:.Wins: Lost titan, bloody apronz, cee hoody, the answer, indecisive, primo, abstruse, ill natural, Adam X, Bez, Illicit aka Cee Ride, CSN, Jemuel, timelock, prophecy, assasin, Mack
Losses: Mack(x2), Red Alert,
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Re:~Mack vs. Vito~ Rnd. 2 (Mack won)
« Reply #14 on: August 31, 2003, 07:27:41 AM »
dammmm, sorry ya'll.

My vote was for MACK n e ways.  

Sorryyyyyyy.