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Tales Of a... Teddy Bear? (New Topical)
« on: September 04, 2003, 01:11:15 PM »
Canine ivories playfully rip my tattered fur aside,
Revealing shredded stuffing like the shattered world inside.
Theres nowhere to hide, All I can do is accept my fate,
and pray for death, cause I got nothing left except my hate.
freedom awaits, in the form of a shimmering door of light
but as I die, another's life flashes before my sight.
Old flames ignite, seeing memories hidden away for years.
I watch again, but even still, plastic eyes shed no tears...

Placed inside a crib, see her smile and life truly begins,
An aimless soul finally finds purpose pursuing her grins.
Like organic friends, our natural bond easily grows.
Fall more in love each time this cute blonde squeezes my nose.
Where ever she goes, I'll forever be right by her side,
with a beaming smile reflecting the light of her pride.
glowing inside, I blushed as her sweet laughter kissed my ears,
living in a world of bliss, these plastic eyes shed no tears.

Happy together in any weather, till one day it stormed...
The father of darkness crept in, leaving a girl transformed.
Forced to perform, twelve years old, already made a slave,
Earned a wicked slap for every pained scream she gave.
A man depraved, sated his lust by raping his daughter,
I could only watch as all of her dreams were slaughtered.
Salty water streamed down her cheek, flowin from her fears.
It broke my fuzzy heart, but plastic eyes shed no tears.

For half a decade I watched her succumb to his will,
A hollow soul, but one night she'd finally had her fill.
Poised to kill, hid in darkness under the cover of shade,
A woman scorned, anxious to give her lover a blade.
The debt was paid, while she repeatedly stabbed with grace.
I felt her revenge as fresh drops of blood splashed my face.
She started to pace, across white carpet with crimson smears.
He'll get no sympathy from me, plastic eyes shed no tears.

Baptized in blood, a girl totally in touch with her strife,
Gave me a final embrace, trembling hands clutching her knife,
The love of my life, sobbed one last time, then let me go.
Took the glistening blade, slit her wrist, and let it flow.
Death came slow, but she'd been dead inside for way too long.
She never believed in heaven, but I pray she's wrong.
She stayed so strong, even through all those torturous years.
I yearn to cry for my friend, but plastic eyes shed no tears.
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Re:Tales Of a... Teddy Bear? (New Topical)
« Reply #1 on: September 04, 2003, 03:43:06 PM »
yo this was off the hizzy fo shizzy....
you should drop more shit like this


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Re:Tales Of a... Teddy Bear? (New Topical)
« Reply #2 on: September 04, 2003, 03:46:26 PM »
Oh my god, oh my god, Oh my god, that was absolutely amazing.  The emotion involved in that rhyme was the best I have ever seen, dam that was so fucking good man.
 

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Re:Tales Of a... Teddy Bear? (New Topical)
« Reply #3 on: September 04, 2003, 05:08:18 PM »
Oh my god, oh my god, Oh my god, that was absolutely amazing.  The emotion involved in that rhyme was the best I have ever seen, dam that was so fucking good man.

LOL thanks Bez Good lookin out, You wanna collab on some shit?
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Re:Tales Of a... Teddy Bear? (New Topical)
« Reply #4 on: September 04, 2003, 05:31:00 PM »
sure thing mate, PM me with what ya wanna do.
 

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Re:Tales Of a... Teddy Bear? (New Topical)
« Reply #5 on: September 04, 2003, 06:55:29 PM »
Oh my god, oh my god, Oh my god, that was absolutely amazing.  The emotion involved in that rhyme was the best I have ever seen, dam that was so fucking good man.


dont blow your load bez... lol
but yeah that shit was dope man, keep droppin topicals, ur pretty good at them

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Re:Tales Of a... Teddy Bear? (New Topical)
« Reply #6 on: September 04, 2003, 07:43:49 PM »
hey i really liked that ... very entertainin read...  :)
keep up tha good work ..

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Re:Tales Of a... Teddy Bear? (New Topical)
« Reply #7 on: September 05, 2003, 04:42:27 AM »
"Oh my god, oh my god, Oh my god, that was absolutely amazing.  The emotion involved in that rhyme was the best I have ever seen, dam that was so fucking good man."

yup....u should put that type of stuff on audio....


 

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Re:Tales Of a... Teddy Bear? (New Topical)
« Reply #8 on: September 05, 2003, 09:34:12 AM »
Oh my god, oh my god, Oh my god, that was absolutely amazing.  The emotion involved in that rhyme was the best I have ever seen, dam that was so fucking good man.

dont blow your load bez... lol
but yeah that shit was dope man, keep droppin topicals, ur pretty good at them


lol.. i was gonna say somethin.. im surprised it didnt end, "And oh my god, oh my god, i want to fuck you, oh my god"

lol just givin you a hard time bez
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Re:Tales Of a... Teddy Bear? (New Topical)
« Reply #9 on: September 05, 2003, 10:16:38 AM »
Loved this... everything about it was great
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Re:Tales Of a... Teddy Bear? (New Topical)
« Reply #10 on: September 05, 2003, 02:58:54 PM »
Loved this... everything about it was great

word..

Althou the big red text looks pretty scary on the blue background! lol  ;D
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