Quick Key...

[bez]

I'm alone cold and bitter, it happens at winter,
When ya got no where to go, and the snow hits ya harder than a major league hitter,
Everyday gets shiter, life lost without a trace,
Nothing to keep me company but the stars in space,
Dirt so deep in my skin it leaves scars in my face,
Lost the ability to cry cos I got pride beyond this discrace,
Looked down upon like I was diseased beyond fixin,
Here to be liven a life of kids kickin,
All through my life I've been the victim, so sick and tired,
I was once admired but now I'm fadin like a cravin child,
Flakin at the seems but life ain't what it seems, I pray for smiles,
I beg for change, the change of life, cos takin other peoples money to me aint right,
I just wish life would give me an option instead of kickin me down,
Beggin for a smile but all I get is a frown,
What to become of me now, survivin through the struggle,
God dam this business, god dam this money, god dam this life, god dam this trouble!

[|JEM|ILL|]

Not as much thought put into the wording it looks, but it is titled quick Key so it dont matter...

flow and concept were dope though, maybe fit in some allusions and metas or similies to take it up a notch. But overall dope.

[bez]

lol it totally sucked didnt it


I wrote it in about 2 mins literally, just thought I'd post it cause I didnt save it.