20 Barz of Fire

[Reef]

Yo.. This is sumthin im workin on with my crew... gunna be a song.. tell me what y'all think and wot i could change... Thanx

let me start these twenty bars with threatnin' to leave twenty scars
created by fifty cars related to my brain and its sedated parts
take each line apart so i can show you i rhyme smart
dont start cause when i depart it'll break ya heart
you jus been face to face, in the same place as one of the realest emcees
im so sick the doctors are sayin, 'We gotta kill this emcee'
bar number seven, and i've already blew my chance of goin to heaven
ima start trippin soon..wait till i get to bar eleven
20 bars from three emcees, makes 60 bars for you to envy
add the bridge which is repeated four times usin three rhymes
and consists of four lines thats sixteen which makesa ya total 76
mathmatics, harder to learn than kickin crack habits,
but im the white rabbit, you want it you can have it
i want the game, i take the opportunity and grab it
yake a stab at it, have a rap at it
if i was a thug i'd bust a cap at it
seventeen now, countin down like you were bein chased by freddy mixed wit tha killer clown
but im the killer now, i dont know how u gona keep the crown
penultimate bar now, and im the ultimate at breakin these bars down
but im goin now, be back soon i'll be doin a love track wit puffy and loon