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AbbyNinja

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First Freestyle
« on: October 14, 2003, 04:26:44 PM »
They call me ninja coz i am quick~and ~slick and i don't giv a

shit ~and when i'm on da mic ~i don't rhyme polite,~ i don't ride

a trike ~like Snoop and X who ride da mic ~and rhymes are tight

~and r ready~ to fight ~all day ~and night ~like me they see

~that they can b ~what they want to b ~ is a reality ~so u can

see that they's a G, ~but that's not me. ~ i'm just me.
Some mother fuckers are always trying to ice skate up hill. - Blade
 

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Re:First Freestyle
« Reply #1 on: October 15, 2003, 01:36:28 AM »
Got potential.. try and make it longer and also break it down into barz