Author Topic: New. Freestyle.  (Read 90 times)

PoTek

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New. Freestyle.
« on: October 14, 2003, 07:25:00 PM »
yo i'm new here and shit...so i got litte free time and busted this rhyme
tell me what you guys think

yo this by first freestyle
and i aint goin shoke like that dude from 8 mile
cause i be split'n words fast like download'n files
what my name b? Potek
i be like big l, catching wreck on any casette deck
all i want is the bitchs,cars and my paycheck
fuck wit me, i'll snap your fuckin neck
PoTek aka. A-pex
 

Reef

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Re:New. Freestyle.
« Reply #1 on: October 15, 2003, 01:34:38 AM »
NOt bad,.. Try and make your shit longer..
 

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Re:New. Freestyle.
« Reply #2 on: October 15, 2003, 05:18:40 AM »
reminds me of me when I got started.  More complexity needed homie.
 

PoTek

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Re:New. Freestyle.
« Reply #3 on: October 15, 2003, 01:18:34 PM »
yah it is kinda simple
well practise makes perfect :P
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Re:New. Freestyle.
« Reply #4 on: October 15, 2003, 03:30:21 PM »
yah it is kinda simple
well practise makes perfect :P

try workin on ya flow a bit...toss in some different rhyme scheme and multis too homie.
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