Author Topic: Jem and Mack..........WHUT!  (Read 103 times)

bez

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Jem and Mack..........WHUT!
« on: December 16, 2003, 12:15:23 PM »
You bitches ain't worth a dime to tha skills-ya-represent,
Droppin rhymes all the time just ta see who postin ills-at-present,
You fools are funny, I'm talkin ta Mack-an-Jem,
Take ma original rhymes off the net, see who's relax-in-den,
Droppin dope rhymes since tha start, how it feel-to-bite,
If we was battlin at late hours who rhymes would ya steal-tonight?, huh?
Gangsta's see gangsta's do, everyone of you's proclaimed it, yet I see-no-proof,
Just another youth actin tough when really you's a benzino-spoof,
How can you claim your the best rhymers on the boards when you've-shamed-yourselfs?,
Your like two homosexual fools, dudes-played-themselves,
Bez's rhymes are flame grilled so dey never sloppy-at-taste,
Mack and Jem could make a hot rhyme one time.......at a simple copy-and-paste,
Just think about the vets before you go claimin best-an-worst,
Ya'll like 2pac, well tell me who's keystyle career ya resurectin-first?,
Two guys have been caught bitin, you both-outa-sorts,
I cant make ya good at keystylin, man hope-fa-santa-claus,
Think twice before ya write about the hype-ya-supply,
Cos everyone on the boards know dat every key ya type's-a-lie!
« Last Edit: December 16, 2003, 03:20:51 PM by Bez »
 

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Re:Jem and Mack..........WHUT!
« Reply #1 on: December 16, 2003, 12:56:12 PM »
Nice piece bez, you've improved a lot homie..

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Re:Jem and Mack..........WHUT!
« Reply #2 on: December 18, 2003, 06:34:54 AM »
multies gotta be worked on but overall its sum nice shit
 

bez

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Re:Jem and Mack..........WHUT!
« Reply #3 on: December 18, 2003, 09:38:44 AM »
multies gotta be worked on but overall its sum nice shit
The multis where fine man.