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** Nothing Personal **
« on: January 27, 2004, 09:01:47 AM »


...nothing personal or maybe it should be.
no beef or nothing or if you want it their could be.
ima make you famous, how everybody should see.
dealing with uncontrolable forces, so you shouldnt push me.

some people know me in person others merely thru words.
you just rap about the stuff that only you'da done heard.
if you wrote real shit then maybe i'd consider you genuine.
i'll leave your mumma in the state her womb left you in.
your more fake than a replica, fuck your simplicity.
if you take this shit personal, you know where i am come visit me.
zippit-g coz i've had enough of you thinking you own.
talking about what you only hear, and what your eyes have shown.
brain mentality runs thinner than paper.
taking drugs, thinking you thugs, where will rap take ya.
under everybody else, coz you gain no respect in this.
hosting battles, repping your crew would put you outta business.

...nothing personal or maybe it should be.
no beef or nothing or if you want it their could be.
ima make you famous, how everybody should see.
dealing with uncontrolable forces, so you shouldnt push me.

i've heard audio, and whoever you roll with gotta be dense.
he just like you, except more cornier than 50 pence.
gunning me down with lyrics that i've done before wrote to people.
so ima narrow down my technique and vocab, to make me and you equal.
i find it hard to walk away, or even comprimise with a fake.
using the same ol'disses from face to net, how hard are you mate.
i'd like to see you go against me, with no help and something new.
but all i'd find is you biting, and every other voter hunting you.
voiding they votes, but cant coz everyone is with you.
you aint rising above me i'd have to bend down at my knees to hit you.
i have shit to write about not to be funny, just to release some pain.
you wanted in this typa shit as a hobby, and to register with a cool name.
except you rep it to shame, only voters you have know you.
god must feel sorry for your losses, so he feels that he owes you.
more favours than what your ego can do for you brain.
loving your moves, in the mirror you are just plain vain.
dont care what you say, aslong as you get props.
but i wont stop cumming at you until your mouth stops.
until your dick drops, coz you've run outta the viagra.
your like a local prostitute emcee, bitch i've had ya.

...nothing personal or maybe it should be.
no beef or nothing or if you want it their could be.
ima make you famous, how everybody should see.
dealing with uncontrolable forces, so you shouldnt push me.

be honest your a newbie, so stop thinking you great.
repping a fantasy crew that have signed their own fate.
get you out in the open, and rep your crew to the fullest.
send you out to the areas you talk about, get ripped by the bullets.
i laugh to your lyrics, with disses more original than walkers.
murdered doorstep emcee's who are jill dando stalkers.
pure bull-shit talkers, im here to shut you the fuck up.
get your weight problem sorted, get that belly tucked up.
before you cause more problems and beef with the wrong men.
come up to me face to face, call me out then its on then.
you aint far from the truth, you just like to perceive us with lies.
only props i'll give your sorry ass is your a young adolescent youth.
...who tries...

...nothing personal or maybe it should be.
no beef or nothing or if you want it their could be.
ima make you famous, how everybody should see.
dealing with uncontrolable forces, so you shouldnt push me.

^^ fuck you .... thinking you can tell me how to write nd what you think.. your opinions not even counted.. bringing stuff up where on your side i'd rather keep quiet.. but i can make it more interesting for the readers..












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Re:** Nothing Personal **
« Reply #1 on: January 27, 2004, 09:02:29 AM »
.. that last bit werent you the people who give feedback.. its about some people i know... nothing to you guys..

feedback appreciated...
 

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Re:** Nothing Personal **
« Reply #2 on: January 28, 2004, 01:14:49 AM »
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Re:** Nothing Personal **
« Reply #3 on: February 03, 2004, 08:18:43 AM »
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« Reply #4 on: February 03, 2004, 08:37:03 AM »
Liked it man, whos it aimed at?

Last verse was nice.  Chorus was a little weak, but all verses where cool.
 

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« Reply #5 on: February 03, 2004, 08:45:48 AM »
Hey man.. thanx for the feedback.. yea im working on better hooks... inspired by 50 lol.. its aimed at all the peeps who rep shit they aint seen or had. like hoes, glocks, pimps n shit.. thats all getting played out.. shit gotta be real.. and im always tryna remain ill... its also towards some people i know who like to dish but hate it being served back.. but i chose to keep it all inside.. otherwise my words could do some damage.. nah mean... people get to personal... shits just on another level.. not rapping. Then they say "just text battling" when they blatany know it could do more.. not very bright see.. thats all mayne... thanx for the feedback tho..
 

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« Reply #6 on: February 03, 2004, 01:00:11 PM »
it wasn't bad...i'd rather hear that in audio since it's in the form of a completed song, peace.
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Re:** Nothing Personal **
« Reply #7 on: February 03, 2004, 01:52:34 PM »
You been coming up in the world. good to see growth. I would like to know who it's aimed at too.
 

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« Reply #8 on: February 04, 2004, 05:12:59 AM »
Thanx again for the feedback dogg.. its aimed at some peeps on this other board.. who wanting beef with me.. and nit picking in my ryhmes.. thinking they know how to rap.. when i've been their longer than they have lol.. shit is whack... its just alotta shit rolled into one about whiners and wannabes....
 

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Re:** Nothing Personal **
« Reply #9 on: February 04, 2004, 10:37:32 AM »
Shit was a pretty dope piece, propz....


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Re:** Nothing Personal **
« Reply #10 on: February 07, 2004, 12:51:24 PM »
it was nice, I aint seen a lot of the progress goin on lately and aint looked over new rhymes you spit but it was tight.  but im more of a audio type a guy nowadays but still...  you record at all indy?
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« Reply #11 on: February 10, 2004, 08:14:22 AM »
I think im progressing slowly.. but i tend to spit whatever.. if i think its dope or not.. just to get feedback.. to make myself a better artist... i do record.. just waiting for that inspiration to post shit up and sounds good.. i wont post nothing up prototype.. not a perfectionist as such.. but i like people to see my true skill.. on the dotted line.. yea hit me up for a collabo soon homie! holla me your address to your audio stuff.. i wanna check it..