I'm new but tell me what u think

[Dreamz]

I spit words from the top of my head//
Verbal AK leaveing you of dead//
I leave u shot up like a dieabitic//
On your back yelling out "HELP MEDIC"//
You trying tbe like me, angry and crude//
But yo ucan't here try walking in my shoes//
Your a dick ryder thats how the symptoms occurred//
HIV, Crabs,Fucking guys that how they transfeerred//
Bring what you got cause I'll take the world on//
I'm who I am fuck the pimps and don wons//
I maybe a rookie, but i can adapt to the situation//
let's call you toy story cause you a simple animaton//
Soft is what i hear when i hear you flow//
I'm still standing, no effect from your gentle blows//
My lyrical skill leaves u standing there hypnotize//
U saying "Damn I wish I was him" when I go walikng by//
The battle is almost over I cause I'm strickly Fundametal//
My verabl fire leaves brunt, better check your dental//
You'z a bicth, getting drag around by the collar//
Man At you Vanillia ice wouldn't even holla//

tell me what you think


 

[M Dogg™]

Better than Bubble About To Burst. Keep up the good work.

[Dreamz]

thanks

[TiNmaN]

That shit was a cool little peice, keep that wrk up...