Author Topic: + Dear God + (Read 133 times)

OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY · « **on:** February 29, 2004, 03:42:09 PM »

Dear god.

*can you forgive all the innocent, and give them freedom.
*can you send our grandads back because we need them.
*the ghosts i see them, but i miss the touch.
*i wanna be able to feel them, their hands i clutch.
*i love them so much, it would make my life to see them.
*i'd take my soul inplace of theirs to give them life i'd be them.
*i dont wanna greeve them, they deserve a second chance.
*your powerful enough to make this happen, especially in your stance*
*with the world at your feet, you also see me to.
*i've come up early to talk, im not here to meet you.
*your whom im to pleed to, give us back what we once craved.
*the soul you took to quick, and banished the body you graved.

Amen!

Dreamz · « **Reply #1 on:** February 29, 2004, 08:15:26 PM »

there is nothing I can say that
would show show I feel
PROPS to you Indy

kickz_deluxe · « **Reply #2 on:** March 01, 2004, 04:14:49 AM »

fosho dreamz!

OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY · « **Reply #3 on:** March 01, 2004, 01:40:21 PM »

thanx peeps, i was talkin to this girl (behind the poem) and she was upset coz her grandad died and she missed him and life didnt feel right. and it made me feel how that my grandad is watching me and protecting me, and the same for her, so i wrote this.. dedicated to her!

peace tho! thanx for the props, i owe you guys the thanx for the feedback!

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