Author Topic: DREAMS vs INDECISIVE (VOTE PLZ) (Read 508 times)

OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY · « **on:** March 02, 2004, 04:05:11 AM »

I guess normal rules apply except no bar limit lol.. i'll just post this up and see what you think.. ima post my verse up coz i dont see nothing wrong with no bar limit.. anyways peace!

votes 4 wins.
3 - 0 KO!
whatever lol..

Checking in.... (goodluck dreams)

ice-tha-cake, i dont like-this-fake, despite-his-wake, he's been a dyke-since-late.
for christ-sake, spit first? why-wait, i'll come runnin, youn gunnin, and you'll die-straight.
the ripples i might-make, or the fact-you cant handle the pressure of the tightness i rap-to.
ya' verses i laugh-to, their a scripture-for-jesta's, your not worth battlin, i dont wanna diss-or-respect-ya.
you could step-up, and you'll get left-fucked, with your tech-crushed, this game is-just-a-hobby.
you comin' "phata" than scoop, ya elbows droop, wont need a costume inna ordition for mr-blobby.
finished-ya you whack-yo, ass licking an fingers-my-ass-yo, pull it out and grip the mic, all i hear is "shit".
quick with wit, rip to bits, spit for shit, this just gets you-gowin, listen to water droppin coz it gets you-flowin.
left-you-knowin, i scared-your-status, but you fake and (p)raised to much like the bra's-on-stratus. (1)

*switch styles*

"dreams" is all you can do, other than real life your a no-hoper.
3-0 without posting up a verse, coz you've got no-voters.
all you do here dawg, is talk to follow up theirs nothing else.
your catergories "heavy" but you just lost "weight" like vanessa felps.
ima delete your existance, exile your ass when i burn ya birth-log.
your gonna be so ashamed, your gonne be unknown like your un-heard-of.
my styles like a calender, your career days i number.
ima storm on your ass and weather it be hot or flop, ima reign down like thunder.

^^ got bored here.. lol check it and reply!

peace out!

Dreamz · « **Reply #1 on:** March 02, 2004, 04:45:15 PM »

Give my a day or two but will something up
Kinda buzy

OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY · « **Reply #2 on:** March 03, 2004, 06:44:35 AM »

Ok mate.. thats cool!

Dreamz · « **Reply #3 on:** March 04, 2004, 01:05:16 PM »

Yo Check It...........

I don't need to change styles cause a spit what i know//
You'z a no talnet emcee, with weak poetic flows//
You are good and I gave you props...But now you just blow//
I spit the truth weather it dissing you or spiting what I know//
Spilling my heart though out my rhymes..Fuck if i get tossed//
You are as good as a "DJ" named "Lost" Fuck it i'm the boss//(1)
Why do u get Ideals from X-tina do you think she is Hip-Hop//
Ill "ice the cake" no one will show for your wake when u drop//
Go ahead and tell me my days are numbered I'm ready//
If I lose then fuck it cause I know my flows are steady//
Poetical Indy listen up to what I'm about to say//
Please oh Please just admit you are very very gay//
You are one I respect and one I learn from so was up//
You say you don’t respect me fuck it then I’ll tear you ass up//
My words are thin a thin line between good and greatness//
If I lose so what you are still the one with the true fakeness//
So why would you want to go up against me you have no clue//
I’ll cut out your vocals and let you bleed that’s what I’m gonna do//

(1)A mc that everyone made fun of cause his suxs so bad….

YO Good Battle…………

OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY · « **Reply #4 on:** March 04, 2004, 01:36:43 PM »

nice verse man!

VOTES NEEDED!

Kill · « **Reply #5 on:** March 04, 2004, 01:43:19 PM »

honestly, this was better than i expoected, nice battle actually. Indecisive u kinda surprised me cumin up with simple, yet consistant multies that didn't seem forced. flow was mostly pretty good and also the wordplay wasn't bad either

dreamz, yours was ok, flow was cool, but as for wordplay, punches and rhymes Indy's was just more complex and well thought-out. shit was solid, but kinda simplistic at times. so i'ma give this to indy

VOTE = INDECISIVE

Vote on me vs. M Dogg

Dreamz · « **Reply #6 on:** March 04, 2004, 01:51:15 PM »

1-0 you Indy
I know I need some work on some stuff
But thanks for the input

OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY · « **Reply #7 on:** March 04, 2004, 01:53:15 PM »

thnx for voting kill..

yea dreams.. i'll help ya out soon bro! you got msn?

Dreamz · « **Reply #8 on:** March 04, 2004, 03:53:43 PM »

no i got aol
hit me up at
LostDreamz4@aol.com

OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY · « **Reply #9 on:** March 06, 2004, 12:49:27 PM »

^^^ how about some votes!?

kickz_deluxe · « **Reply #10 on:** March 07, 2004, 12:39:55 AM »

indy: i think rhymez were better n more interesting but most time i dont felt them very hittin.

dreamz: how i said, a quite simple scheme, i think u could rewrite it, but it was a good answer on indyz battle.

difficult....difficult...i give ma vote for DREAMZ

but peace out! nuttin but a battle!

pleaze vote on me vs. tiNmanN

bez · « **Reply #11 on:** March 07, 2004, 07:25:21 AM »

Def Indy.

Good shit from both of you but Indy was mo hard hitting and shit.

OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY · « **Reply #12 on:** March 07, 2004, 02:27:45 PM »

Thanx peeps keep this voting going homies! will appreciate it!

Must admit good battle Dreamz homie!

Dreamz · « **Reply #13 on:** March 07, 2004, 07:37:43 PM »

yo good battle Indy
2-1 you
thanks for all the input

Kill · « **Reply #14 on:** March 08, 2004, 07:42:53 AM »

usually u say "good battle" when the voting's over...Indy u did see kickz gave his vote to dreamz?

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