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« on: March 03, 2004, 05:22:24 PM »

take me to the clouds, and i'd keep composure.
if you was outta my reach, i'd still keep compusure.
with what we now have develops and girl unfolds ta.
deeper feelings, with your heart left on exposure.
...you'd keep compusure.

you know i dont frut, but still i put my face on.
gotta make you see that with me it wont take long.
life was made strong, i keep my guard up at a constant.
you think you aint got me round those eyes, you talk nonsense.
its been long-since, i got seduced and enjoyed the motion.
come here baby, lie on your front and get out some lotion.
back rub, next the bath tub, hearing a moan, yea thats doug.
time to flex, watch me tongue twist lines and ryhme the next.
see mine and sweat, fully equiped, ready for nookie? im stripped.
clothes off, well the ones i know of, im rough i dont go soft.
tickle the ticklish, giggle as i stiff this, want this on your gift-list.
damn i've sure missed-this, im strapped to a duracell-bunny.
scream my name, what you mean that aint the same, what-the-hell-hunny?
shit aint funny, calling me your last-one, im tryna have-fun.
im loaded to the brim and wanna blast-some, recognise-carpets.
coz you cant walk all over me, just to get-those-thighs-parted...

take me to the clouds, and i'd keep composure.
if you was outta my reach, i'd still keep compusure.
with what we now have develops and girl unfolds ta.
deeper feelings, with your heart left on exposure.
...you'd keep compusure.


^^ just a switch in styles.. what ya'll think!?

« Last Edit: March 03, 2004, 05:23:54 PM by Poetical Indy »
 

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Re:+ KEEP COMPOSURE +
« Reply #1 on: March 04, 2004, 08:13:37 AM »
if u got no talent, nobody got talent

this is whut i thougt when i read this piece

just keep workin n im sure u gon find your way

even a long way gon end once
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I see no changes, all I see is racist faces
misplaced hate makes disgrace to races
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YA CAN'T STOP THA WAVES BUT LEARN TO SURF
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« Reply #2 on: March 04, 2004, 09:34:21 AM »
^^ thanx homie.. im not all down tho.. lol just decided to use multi's.. hehe.. what the rest ya'll think?
 

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« Reply #3 on: March 04, 2004, 11:18:48 AM »
Yo man that piece was pretty dope. Nice style switch n flow, keep on spitten....


Keepin it REAL



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« Reply #4 on: March 04, 2004, 02:02:12 PM »
thanx for the feedback plz.. more would be qualirty... thanx tin.. yea i just wanted a flow change experimenting as always.. why you think they call me indecisive. lol
 

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Re:+ KEEP COMPOSURE +
« Reply #5 on: March 04, 2004, 02:07:24 PM »
yo the piece was dope