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First time around...Salas shyt
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First time around...Salas shyt
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March 18, 2004, 02:16:32 AM »
Aight this is my first time doin this thing but theres alotta shit on my mind lately I felt like spittin about.
yo yo yo/
When we get out the car fuck the trunk it ain't pop up/
already got the heat in the belt u gettin shot up/
and yo it ain't a threat matter fact it's a promise/
get the rock from P.Y. and yayo from Thomas/
chop it up make a buck lay low in the Bahamas/
I ain't there yet so I gotta pack alotta llamas/
cuz theres still drama, I try and stay away but I'll still bust your muthafuckin face like a pinata/
and that's just instinct/
I dont give a fuck what you really think/
try and play me I'll let your body stink/
and no ozium can cover up that smell/
I only rock that when Im burnin an L/
it ain't hard to tell/
norte red flaggin fuck scraps gotta problem I'ma see you in hell
you cocksuckers...
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aka Gas and a Match aka Don't let your girl in the club or we're all gonna fuck her!
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Muthafuckin' Don!
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Re:First time around...Salas shyt
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March 18, 2004, 06:39:20 AM »
aint bad for da
FIRST
but look after da flow dont miss it and think about a topic, no1 talked bout!
and make yo rhymez more complex, and look for a rhymesheme...if u want to write once again!
thants all! good luck!
WincedSpell
but i aint all good 2, i just practice this time .....
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"I grew up on the chill-side, the no-big-deal-side, staying alive was no problem"
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Re:First time around...Salas shyt
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March 18, 2004, 09:44:14 AM »
Piece was aight, i felt the topic, and the flow was good.. lyrically was good could always be better from anyone.. Keep elevating.
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