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'So Tired' my rhyme
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Dub-L
Lil Geezy
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I'm a llama!
'So Tired' my rhyme
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March 25, 2004, 07:57:52 PM »
So tired of people tell me shit, 'bout some racist or some other// Some shit about a hater and some shit about a lover// Idiotic, stupid, nimrodic kids killin' momma they daddy, they sisters they brothers// Fuck, I'm stuck tryin' to write in a enigmatic attic, full of shit that people used to own, and say they had it// But I'm chokin' on the stage like fuckin' rabbit// You statin' the obvious and I wont have it// Can't have it// Take a stab at it// See how far yo' sorry ass can, bitch this rough, this game ain't padded// And you weak ass bitches crumblin'// You mumblin'// Nigga' got you stumblin'// You hear it's thunderin'// I say I'm worth about a Hundred-and// Fifty-million motherfuckin' pennies, and enemies, struggle but I send 'em these, bubble// From the anger that you caused me all the times you talked// And the way I was pushed aside when you walked// But you've embarked on an impossible mission if you wanna' scare me// Niggaz can't tear me// Leatherface couldn't even wear me// But if you weak minded you can't bear me// You asses is scary// But I'm clear like a crystal ball// When I pop off, it sound like a pistol fall// I'm tired so just leave me alone// Nigga, hard as a stone// There ain't no other, no double, no twin, no clones// But wanna-be's who try to act and be like me// But they quickly run away screaming when they hear and see my lightning// Yeah it's frighting// And enlightning// You see the situation is heightning//
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Re:'So Tired' my rhyme
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March 26, 2004, 02:09:42 AM »
Tight.. the flow was tight.. lyrically good.. i felt the scheme.. keep going home boY!
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Suffice
Muthafuckin' Don!
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Re:'So Tired' my rhyme
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March 26, 2004, 03:03:40 AM »
dope and flows well, but it's kinda inconsistent. It started sorta like introspective, and then switched between braggodocio and battlerhyme. I think if contitued the song in the same spirit as the first few bars, we would have a masterpiece
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