Author Topic: jus a tiny little sumin  (Read 55 times)

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jus a tiny little sumin
« on: March 28, 2004, 11:48:11 AM »
my styles the kind to put ya gal in motion//
wen im finished her throat b as deep as the ocean//
i aint big headed but i b boasting//
bust a nut on ya bitch like it was sun tan lotion//
ya know i bring the most in, bitch of course i felt her//
cause i get more pussy than an animal shelter//
its true i've had a couple dogs in my time//
but not no more cause the light i got's lime//
plus i turned my back on dem bitches like gonna puff did shyne//
 

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Re:jus a tiny little sumin
« Reply #1 on: March 28, 2004, 02:00:39 PM »
Nyce.. i liked the two opening lines.. if you'da kept it longer and consistant it woulda been a v.good piece.. keep it up.. I need feedback on my "role model" key..