Author Topic: Fascists.  (Read 271 times)

Now_Im_Not_Banned

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Fascists.
« on: January 09, 2004, 03:32:52 PM »
Shiiit....You look infatuated//Rap hazard, I've mastard rap like I've graduated//You agitated, I'm flattered maybe, 'cause rappers aint rappin they just been actin lately//I call that talent wasting//I get your brain uplifted, I'm slayin tricks//My game is sick, my name is sccit, and you? Your names unlisted//I entertain you bitches, no pain no gain, no game no layin' bitches//Don't pray, don't sway, just state your wishes//'Cause Sccit's gone pay a visit and I used to hate existance//But now I laugh at it, how I act faggot// 'Cause I grab your abs, am I allowed to stab at it?//Mad rappin, droppin' verses like bad habbits//Mass murder slash fascists...
 

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Re:Fascists.
« Reply #1 on: January 10, 2004, 04:12:00 AM »
this was aight had no real topic or imagery..... but flow was on point... concentrate more on ur comedy theme or go wit a concept n stick wit it... coz take out the multis n flow u jst said a buncha bullshit like every other rapper num sayin kid? ur at ya best when u spittin comedy but if ur not try n say sumthin num sayin? not just a buncha lines...

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Re:Fascists.
« Reply #2 on: January 10, 2004, 01:14:32 PM »
this was aight had no real topic or imagery..... but flow was on point... concentrate more on ur comedy theme or go wit a concept n stick wit it... coz take out the multis n flow u jst said a buncha bullshit like every other rapper num sayin kid? ur at ya best when u spittin comedy but if ur not try n say sumthin num sayin? not just a buncha lines...

peace

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It's called battle rap, it's not supposed to have a theme...LoL
 

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Re:Fascists.
« Reply #3 on: January 10, 2004, 03:52:25 PM »
Rat-tat-tat-tat
 

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Re:Fascists.
« Reply #4 on: January 10, 2004, 07:41:25 PM »
 

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Re:Fascists.
« Reply #5 on: January 11, 2004, 12:51:27 PM »
i         dont know
 

Now_Im_Not_Banned

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Re:Fascists.
« Reply #6 on: March 30, 2004, 06:18:47 PM »
LOL
 

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Re:Fascists.
« Reply #7 on: March 30, 2004, 06:25:19 PM »
stop uppin old threads man
« Last Edit: March 30, 2004, 06:26:07 PM by Bez »
 

Now_Im_Not_Banned

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Re:Fascists.
« Reply #8 on: March 30, 2004, 06:30:04 PM »
stop uppin old threads man


Why? Is there a rule against it?
 

bez

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Re:Fascists.
« Reply #9 on: March 30, 2004, 06:34:43 PM »
nar, just pointless
 

Now_Im_Not_Banned

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Re:Fascists.
« Reply #10 on: March 30, 2004, 06:35:21 PM »
nar, just pointless


Well, I noticed a lot of new people on this board...
 

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Re:Fascists.
« Reply #11 on: March 31, 2004, 05:52:36 AM »
well , it got a good flow but when automatik1 meant there was no straight topic u said it was a battlerap. but there was no punches so u was talkin bout everythin n nuttin.
but it had multis n good flow, n i think u should make it longer

keep workin on it
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Re:Fascists.
« Reply #12 on: March 31, 2004, 06:07:28 AM »
well , it got a good flow but when automatik1 meant there was no straight topic u said it was a battlerap. but there was no punches so u was talkin bout everythin n nuttin.
but it had multis n good flow, n i think u should make it longer

keep workin on it