Write a verse about this

[Noon Bank$]

I know its not very good but my friend made this and im tryin to come back at it but I have no writing skill what so ever. Help me out..

Make it some g shit. lol

What the fuck was that noob?
I can spit better while while I got my mouth wrapped on a boob.
Who taught you to speak
You sound moronic..
Best rewind your tape of Hooked on Phonics

It's time for you to pack it up, back it in..
Never begin again
You make me have to drop a verse like this so that you're thwarted
Now we'll all see that you're retarded

Break your pencil so you can't write more
Maybe use your verse-writing time to get you an e-whore
Have her virtually play with your nuts cuz you'll never have it
I see you in your parent's basement at 30..
Stroking your fuzzy white rabbit.

Time to go.. I have no time for you.
I'd be better off battling with some bum's stinky shoe
Forget about replying we all know it'll be wack
Feel free to come back when you grow a nut sack..

:chorus:
noooooob... he's a biiiiitchhhhh
nooooooob.. herpes make his balls itch

[Montana00]

well i cant write either but i do know one thing.


it wouldnt take much to get back at that shitty rhyme

[Noon Bank$]

I dont have any punchlines and I no imagination when it comes to this shit.

Someone holla back

[Don Breezio]

wow...thats a horrible rhyme...but here ya go:

man i can't believe those wack rhymes you came with
it won't take much to get back at someone so brainless
my rhymes are original, yours are a steal but not stainless
my lyrics leave you torn like you just took it in the anus
you're lyrics were horrible, you would've been better off biting
but then again that requires reading and writing
a skill that i can tell you never acquired
and people wonder why the illiteracy rate keeps getting higher?

[West C. Connected]

You wanna say I'm Chinese, here's a reminder
Check your Timbs, they probaly say 'Made In China'

 

[Leggy Hendrix]

im not much of a writer but here goes:

you say im retarded? just look at your rhyme
its obvious that shit was just a waste of time
your lyrics is wack so motherfucker stop tryin'
i shouldn't even justify this cat by replyin'
but i got to cos you look familiar to me
i recognised you from the tape drinkin' R Kelly's pee
oh and that 'fuzzy white rabbit' line was totally weak
so put your brain into gear before you choose to speak

[Noon Bank$]

lmao oh shit  

thanks guys

[P Nelson]

His hook sucks..

[Primo]

take it from someone who can actually battle on here. Don't use there verses.. Go to keystyle and ask someone.

Example...Punchlines should be creative like this..

I'm pleading someone delete the scripts from this incompetant fool//
Beat you so bad, Eliza Dushku from Tru Callin' can't go back to save you//

ETC.

[Z the laidback Virus]

Evolution ain't a theory,it's to be accepted,
and that you drop bad rhymes is to be expected
I mean,look at your face...
a total disgrace...and not only for your own race
You write without sanity
and that's brutality to humanity
Your writing doesn't impress,damn what a mess
I considered you of little worth and now even less

[We Fly High]

all you gotta say is that hes a faggot for using the word noob.

[Noon Bank$]

all you gotta say is that hes a faggot for using the word noob.

Well thats been my nickname at the forum for as long as ive been there.. and Ive been there for a long ass time too. lol

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

LOL@making other people write your rhymes...Just use some typical shit.

Doper emcees none existent like RuPaul's clit is
Cant tell if your dick or pussy like topless infants
Couldn't spit sick shit kid lickin' your cold sores
And leave you scared to drop shit like school stalls with no doors