VITO vs. BEZ (ROUND I VOTES NOW)

[bez]

BEZ

Can't believe you'd attack me, now I gotta finish ya,
I'll piss all over ya rhymes like an iraqi prisioner,
Never even dissed ya, bitches panties are twisted,
All chasin after belts that have been wack since shop lifted,
Out of the blue diss got me thinkin "your on" you cunts,
Chumps talking about excellence...where's your posts in the last six months?,
Truth is, you read the thread and couldn't decide if I'd dissed you,
Well deluca...not even a diss was subliminal, so dumb that it missed you,
Mack stirred up the post, but we really know who flows the most,
And we certainly know it ain't my fault you can't take jokes,
But then you wrote this rip, it was crisp but can't burn ma toast,
Next member of Elite, Patrick Swaze...might as well be cos ya boys is ghosts,

I knew every member had an ego, could spend my time altering ya figure,
Claim to be number one, you guys are zero, I suggest herbal remedys ta get bigger,
Was it the small cock joke that set ya steam off?,
I guess when they cut the cord, doc slipped and snipped an inch or two off,
I'm feelin like Jay Z lately, but ma problems involve bitches,
Truth is man....ya verse certainly had me in stitches,
Not only was it weak it literally made me know I made it,
No wonder you don't post anymore, you been involved in an engagement!,
Inactive for long periods, who in Elite are you tryin to keep sacret?,
Macks only a child so you know you could be done for kiddy porn if you've got wild and naked,
Don't even try and deny man, cos we knew you where gay,
And don't try hidin your plane ticket to L.A,
And heres when ya reply that the gay shit is played,
You might as well spit it, it will make mo of an impact than yo other shit made!
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You motherfucking pussy ass bitch!





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Usual keystyle votin scheme!

[da_notorious_mack]

This board’s status got me on bored status, gettin’
Berated by a b rated rapper throwin fits like a b rated actress
Acts as if  I’ll see his shit and give two clicks,
Take his lip and give two shits, his content is self evident
it’s all in the title, new shit, new shit!
Don’t be a nuisance, I though you knew since
The evidence of  common sentiments set your two pence next ta excrement
Questioned ya lack of excellence, no question hence
Everyone always laughin’ at your expense,

No compliments are common since you got no common sense,
Refuse acceptance of the signs that are ominous,
obvious you don’t want honest sentiment,
Check ya views before you post up some nonsense,
No sense in steppin’ to my crew just to get bent,

Me, Mack, and Sin, that’s the win-win-win
Slap back again just to begin, Vito bringin in a Mack and grin,
My team mate's crazy so I’m committing some sin,
I’m committed to win every engagement I’m in,
Now see how much trouble you in….instigate some shit just to watch it begin...


hmm funny..worked perfectly for me...but then again ive always had a knack for copyin an pastin...

[Kill]

hmm funny..worked perfectly for me...but then again ive always had a knack for copyin an pastin...

LMAO, when all the jokes have become lame and played out as fuck Mack starts makin em himself




aight then, u both voted on my battle with Sin (plus both votes went to me ) so u really deserve this

VITO = ur verse didn't really have a clear rhyme structure but I could flow it surprisingly well and it seemed like sumthin done pretty spontaneously. i don't know what this shit originally was over, but just readin it it lacked the funny and entertaining punches a bit. Nice overall tho

BEZ = as for rhymes and flow ur verse was equal. But what gave u the edge IMO were the punchlines, there were sum that really made me laugh even tho, as i said, i don't know what this is actually about. and btw: that gay shit is played

VOTE = BEZ

[vitodeluca]

Hey, thanks for the vote kill, to answer your question, yeah, mine was just a spontaneous key that I wrote cause Bez was gettin' all pissy about people's feedback, and then he dissed me for no reason.  So it wasn't really a battle verse, but I said if he wanted to post em in the battle section he could, just cause he was sayin' I had no good bars.  If you read my other battle verses they're much different, I just wrote this on kinda a lyrical wordplay tip...Pz

[bez]

Hey, thanks for the vote kill, to answer your question, yeah, mine was just a spontaneous key that I wrote cause Bez was gettin' all pissy about people's feedback, and then he dissed me for no reason.  So it wasn't really a battle verse, but I said if he wanted to post em in the battle section he could, just cause he was sayin' I had no good bars.  If you read my other battle verses they're much different, I just wrote this on kinda a lyrical wordplay tip...Pz

What are you talking about.  I really dont wanna take up this thread with dumbass posts but you really do talk shit.  I never even dissed you.  I dissed Mack saying he had a small dick because he said you was throwing subliminal shots in a me, even I knew you wasn't.  YOu asked me if I was dissing you and I replied jokingly "I suggest you look down your shorts and decide for yourself", it was an obvious joke.

Believe me man my verse was hardly a battle verse either.  I wrote that shit in litterally 10 minutes.  You asked me to put it in here, so I did, don't start making excuses.  I never even got pissy about people feedback either, I am just simply saying that if I wanna diss people to get em mo active I'm gunna do it.  I dissed mack and sin cos sin started to say sum shit about me never touching and gun and shit which I found dumb cos he always puts bullshit in his rhymes and  dissed mack cos he aint dropped a good rhyme in ages yet he still criticses ma flow and style and shit.

Stop moaning man.....getting bored of your bitching.

[vitodeluca]

^^you call that bitching?  hahaha.  allright, whatever, then why don't we say fuck this thread and we'll both write battle verses then?  I guarantee I'll rip you a new one bezzy boy, don't forget who taught ya how to do this in the first place...or should I just bump the thread??? Hahahaha...

[bez]

^^you call that bitching?  hahaha.  allright, whatever, then why don't we say fuck this thread and we'll both write battle verses then?  I guarantee I'll rip you a new one bezzy boy, don't forget who taught ya how to do this in the first place...or should I just bump the thread??? Hahahaha...

Right now man I am totally busy with college work but maybe sometime ove the weekend I'll come outter retirement to whip ya ass.  Lets see how this shit goes first.  Come on ya'll votes, we all know he's the one who wanted this shit in the battle board so lets see what ya'll think!

[bez]

Uppin!

[vitodeluca]

Dude, there's no way givin the activity level of this board that people are gonna vote on both of these, you want a battle, let's do a battle, just lock the other thread, delete it, whatever, kill gave ya your props here, alerg gave me props on the keystyle board, you want a proper battle, let's do it right...

[bez]

Dude, there's no way givin the activity level of this board that people are gonna vote on both of these, you want a battle, let's do a battle, just lock the other thread, delete it, whatever, kill gave ya your props here, alerg gave me props on the keystyle board, you want a proper battle, let's do it right...

just post ya battle verse man, I'll leave this for now.  If people wanna still vote on it its gravy.  Not to arsed tho.

[vitodeluca]

You should at least change the name of one of these threads, almighty mod,  so people can tell the difference between the two.....like round one/round two, ect...