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Dreamz

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It's over
« on: June 04, 2004, 10:05:14 PM »
June 25th Is That Day When We Walk Across The Stage//
We End One Chapter Just To Start A New Page//
We Spent The Last 13 Years, But Have We Come To An Age//
Where All We Can Do Is Express Our Undyeing Rage//
Will We Rember All The People That We Called Friends?//
The Microsopic Bonds That Hold Us Together Will They End?//
Can We See Thing Better With A Telephoto Lens?//
I'm Sorry So With These Words I Hope To Bring Some Amends//
The Year Is Over And Graduation Is Coming So For NoW It's Over//




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kickz_deluxe

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Re:It's over
« Reply #1 on: June 05, 2004, 02:25:39 AM »
keep it up man, nice story -n i see u improved pretty much...

keep practisin
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even a long way gon end once
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I see no changes, all I see is racist faces
misplaced hate makes disgrace to races
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Re:It's over
« Reply #2 on: June 05, 2004, 05:45:22 AM »
Quote from: kickz_deluxe on June 05, 2004, 02:25:39 AM
keep it up man, nice story -n i see u improved pretty much...

keep practisin

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Dreamz

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Re:It's over
« Reply #3 on: June 05, 2004, 07:53:03 PM »
thanks
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bez

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Re:It's over
« Reply #4 on: June 05, 2004, 08:17:04 PM »
yer nice man, improved!
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