Author Topic: LMAO 2 "Now its Over"  (Read 352 times)

bez

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LMAO 2 "Now its Over"
« on: July 01, 2004, 09:42:46 PM »
Listen kids, your really startin to bore-me-now,
Crushin 5 threads in one post, so you can't ignore-me-now,
Tryin to remember-you-ought to drop decent rhymes some how,
Probably PM'in other members-for-support, like now!!!,
Whats this shit about 9000 posts? why you even tried-to-disgrace,
Only 3 made you angry, thats why you using caps to hide-ya-face,
2 pre-paid bullets will eliminate ya crew like I was hired-ta-waste,
Fools will keep postin knowin I've retired-ya-place,

These kids so unintelligent they sittin waitin-for-more-raw-replies,
I see one post after another wit the same points ya makin-four-or-more-times,
Fools sittin there shakin while I'm breakin-four-or-more-rhymes,
As time passes us by these clowns creatin-more-an-more-lies,
Tryin to throw me some shots, do what ya gotta do-tah-hurt,
But believe me I don't get offended by being called a computer-nerd,
Ain't we all on a message board? or you-dudes-forget?,
I'm the reason they make blockers, watch me destroy these two-newbs-internet,

Your literally talking shit, so hows it feel you two-to-eat-shit?,
I post one rhyme and you gotta post at least a few-to-beat-it,
I'm lettin my rhymes do the talkin, but your postin then cryin-ya-ass-off,
Thats why with every post I'm like laughin-my-ass-off,
You think drama queen's and disses in parts have an effect-on-me,
Ya must be takin viagra cos ya uppin ya own disses like ya gotta erect-for-B,
Expectincy ain't forever lastin, cos I'm still waitin for a hard-rhyme,
I know you boys are sittin on jealousy so I shouldn't give you a hard-time,

You newbs got no respect so I'll do you a favour by forgiven-ya-posts,
Your just the people I'm the leader thats prob why ya given-me-toasts,
Exodus, I feel real bad, but I can't understand what tha fuck-ya-say,
I suggest you pick up a dictionary and lock that exodus book-away,
See I don't gotta reply quickly for nobody, I'll leave-ya-hangin,
By only throwin me threats online could peeps believe-ya-bangin,
Internet gangstas at work, 90% of ya lyrics-are-obsurd,
Tha critics-are-prepared to do ya like B2K and tell ya you got served,

Yo homo's are spittin out ya assholes, no wonder ya druel-over-tush,
Callin me a Nas rip off, but buttons wit lil'letters on em are the only keys you'll-ever-push
Decidin whether to diss me again, fools are caught-in-two-minds,
I ain't even gotta reply, god knows I don't even try, tha biggest favour I did for both of you was ignorin-ya-rhymes!!!!

Haha I couldn't resist, first I took em out with the first "LMAO" then I allowed em back in and took em out again!!!!  Fools don't see that whatever they type, whatever they think or believe doesn't mean shit here, I got them both by the nutsack.  No doubt there will be a part 5, 6, 7 whatever and Arkie boy will drop some more unfounded shit but all the questions have been answered, I'm outter this fellas!!!

I got 99 problems make that 97 cos I've minused-two,
Bez got a tendency to rip the enemy to shreds like these spineless-two,
May as well call me a Jay Z rip too, cos my rhymes stay clean as I sweep-ma-shoulder,
2 vs. 1, but now its 1 vs. none, cos offically this beef-is-over!

!!LMAO!!.......again!!
« Last Edit: July 01, 2004, 09:45:58 PM by Bez »
 

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Re: LMAO 2 "Now its Over"
« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2004, 09:55:21 PM »
bez got atchall i think he got thyzz shyt
 

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Re: LMAO 2 "Now its Over"
« Reply #2 on: July 02, 2004, 05:55:28 AM »
lmao..

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Re: LMAO 2 "Now its Over"
« Reply #3 on: July 02, 2004, 11:21:38 AM »
Pretty good Bez, you might wanna tighten it up a little bit though, I mean, I've been readin' ya disses and they are kinda coverin' the same territory, ya know?  Like, cut it down so you just have the best 16 bars or sumthin', just a suggestion.  Oh, and multis need to have the same number of syllables..Pzzz

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Re: LMAO 2 "Now its Over"
« Reply #4 on: July 02, 2004, 12:02:52 PM »
Pretty good Bez, you might wanna tighten it up a little bit though, I mean, I've been readin' ya disses and they are kinda coverin' the same territory, ya know?  Like, cut it down so you just have the best 16 bars or sumthin', just a suggestion.  Oh, and multis need to have the same number of syllables..Pzzz

Syllables dont really matter tho really. I have read many rhymes where the syllables dont match up but they are still classed as multis.  As ya say I could tighten it up, but it wasnt really a battle for me, just sumit to fuck about with.
 

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Re: LMAO 2 "Now its Over"
« Reply #5 on: July 02, 2004, 12:11:23 PM »
u dont like mah rhyme skills?  :'(
 

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Re: LMAO 2 "Now its Over"
« Reply #6 on: July 02, 2004, 01:16:29 PM »
Nah man, yours was the tightest bar up in this bitch ;D

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Re: LMAO 2 "Now its Over"
« Reply #7 on: July 02, 2004, 05:11:53 PM »
gangsta bez 8)
 

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Re: LMAO 2 "Now its Over"
« Reply #8 on: July 02, 2004, 06:48:59 PM »
bez killed it tho fah real
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Re: LMAO 2 "Now its Over"
« Reply #9 on: July 03, 2004, 05:08:21 AM »
Nah man, yours was the tightest bar up in this bitch ;D
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