Author Topic: Ya'll Need to quit hating...  (Read 460 times)

Hittman

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Re: Ya'll Need to quit hating...
« Reply #15 on: August 29, 2002, 12:46:23 PM »
No, Thats not what I asked. I want to know what you think your favourite metaphors or similies (that you wrote) are.
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The Big Bad Ass

Re: Ya'll Need to quit hating...
« Reply #16 on: August 29, 2002, 01:13:17 PM »
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My lyrics are whack? LoL...Why dont u just go listen too ure snoop dogg CD's if your looking for some simplistic rhymes...


Are you putting yourself on a pedestal above Snoop Dogg in any aspect? No offense man, but how can you say that?
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Re: Ya'll Need to quit hating...
« Reply #17 on: August 29, 2002, 01:20:50 PM »
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Are you putting yourself on a pedestal above Snoop Dogg in any aspect? No offense man, but how can you say that?



Are u fuckin kidding me? here let me ghostwrite a verse for snoop in one second...



Its the muthafuckin D O double G/ Cant u see/ S N double O P/Yes, I gave up weed/But I did it for the children/A long beach crip, and I stay killin/Drug Dealin/WOW I can right nursery rhymes/But I still pull out my nine/and bust a cap in em niggaz/Cuz I love pullin triggaz/Suck this dick/Cant u see bitch/Its 187, from a muthafuckin CRIIIP!



OH MY GOD! Look at the comlexity!! That's better than a Snoop rhyme, and I wrote it in 7 seconds...LoL...name me one person in the whole world who cant write lyrics better than Snoop? I mean come on man...Snoop got flow, and I know thats what it's all about nowadays... but please dont tell me you're looking for Snoop lyrics from me...PeAcE
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Re: Ya'll Need to quit hating...
« Reply #18 on: August 29, 2002, 01:25:19 PM »
^you should ghostwrite for him, probably make yourself a buck or two...sounds like shit he'd say if you ask me^

peace.
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Re: Ya'll Need to quit hating...
« Reply #19 on: August 29, 2002, 01:27:21 PM »
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No, Thats not what I asked. I want to know what you think your favourite metaphors or similies (that you wrote) are.




I like blowin minds with my lryical gift/
And than flowin rymes bouth crtical shit/
Murder material kid/
I like too cereal kill/
Take a box of Cereal and Burry it filled/
Are u ready for a machetti?/
Stuck up ya ass so far that you cant get ya head steady/
Are u ready too let me get 3 deadly machettis/
And than start beheading my enemies by renting bentlys/
and running them over, at they muthafuckin weddings/
Unfortunately fortunate enough to be a rap star/
I said unfortunate cuz I torcher kids to write my phat bars/
Choke em in a jacked car/
Hopin it's a black car/
I chose the color black cuz it's scorcherin like black tar/
The tasks hard/
Steadily beheading enemies without ending up in trapped bars/
Mysterious murders/
We can carry this further/
I ripped jack, he hit back, he said I'm a pervert/
From rape cases too hate racists/
I write about it on blank pages/
From race chases too gays hated, I still proclaim this states basic/




This isnt my best, or even near my best, I just randomly chose it from one of my verses on The One Love... but Tell me what u dont like in this verse, and I'll anazlyze it for u...
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Re: Ya'll Need to quit hating...
« Reply #20 on: August 29, 2002, 01:28:30 PM »
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Its the muthafuckin D O double G
Cant u see
S N double O P
Yes, I gave up weed
But I did it for the children
A long beach crip, and I stay killin
Drug Dealin
WOW I can right nursery rhymes
But I still pull out my nine
and bust a cap in em niggaz
Cuz I love pullin triggaz
Suck this dick
Cant u see bitch
Its 187, from a muthafuckin CRIIIP!

OH MY GOD! Look at the comlexity!!


You think that is complex?

LOL
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bez

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Re: Ya'll Need to quit hating...
« Reply #21 on: August 29, 2002, 01:28:52 PM »
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Are u fuckin kidding me? here let me ghostwrite a verse for snoop in one second...



Its the muthafuckin D O double G/ Cant u see/ S N double O P/Yes, I gave up weed/But I did it for the children/A long beach crip, and I stay killin/Drug Dealin/WOW I can right nursery rhymes/But I still pull out my nine/and bust a cap in em niggaz/Cuz I love pullin triggaz/Suck this dick/Cant u see bitch/Its 187, from a muthafuckin CRIIIP!



OH MY GOD! Look at the comlexity!! That's better than a Snoop rhyme, and I wrote it in 7 seconds...LoL...name me one person in the whole world who cant write lyrics better than Snoop? I mean come on man...Snoop got flow, and I know thats what it's all about nowadays... but please dont tell me you're looking for Snoop lyrics from me...PeAcE


yer but snoops would make that sound so good.
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Re: Ya'll Need to quit hating...
« Reply #22 on: August 29, 2002, 01:30:21 PM »
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I like blowin minds with my lryical gift/
And than flowin rymes bouth crtical shit/
Murder material kid/
I like too cereal kill/
Take a box of Cereal and Burry it filled/
Are u ready for a machetti?/
Stuck up ya ass so far that you cant get ya head steady/
Are u ready too let me get 3 deadly machettis/
And than start beheading my enemies by renting bentlys/
and running them over, at they muthafuckin weddings/
Unfortunately fortunate enough to be a rap star/
I said unfortunate cuz I torcher kids to write my phat bars/
Choke em in a jacked car/
Hopin it's a black car/
I chose the color black cuz it's scorcherin like black tar/
The tasks hard/
Steadily beheading enemies without ending up in trapped bars/
Mysterious murders/
We can carry this further/
I ripped jack, he hit back, he said I'm a pervert/
From rape cases too hate racists/
I write about it on blank pages/
From race chases too gays hated, I still proclaim this states basic/



That's much better
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Re: Ya'll Need to quit hating...
« Reply #23 on: August 29, 2002, 01:30:33 PM »
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You think that is complex?

LOL




I was being sarcastic and showing everyone what type of lyrics snoop writes...
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Re: Ya'll Need to quit hating...
« Reply #24 on: August 29, 2002, 01:31:30 PM »
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That's much better




exactly...Thats a rhyme I wrote in class with complexity, and multis...Not some fake ass, aa-bb, one syllabul Snoop shit...
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