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wilz

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My first! Points of authority/99problems Remix! Pointers Plz
« on: February 15, 2005, 03:14:18 PM »
Yo this is my first attempt at any real shit so tell me whats up n that.
This is a remix over the jay-z linkin Park song Points of authority/99 problems and on the verse when jay starts with "The years 94....."

The years 04 and my house is raw
Outside the window i can see the mutha fuckin law
I got two choices yo, pull open the front door
or bounce to the back and jump out the door.
An I ain't tryin to see no street chase with J
but i ain't got no dolla's to fight the case
So i bounce out the back and I hear
"Son do you know what am stoppin you for?"
Cos am young and u wack or my hats real low
Do i look like a mind reader? Bitch i Dunno
Am I goin to the cells or should i guess some more?
"You were drinkin and i don't wanna hear any more"
"Where were you tonight? were u at a bar?
Are you carrying a wife beater I know a lot of ya are"
I ain't tellin you shit . My I.D.  Legite
"Well do you mind if i look around the house a little bit?"
Well my front door is locked and so is the one in the back
And i know my rights so you goin need a warrant for that
"well aren't you fuckin smart?"
"you some kinda lawyer or summit?"
"Somebody important or sumit?"
Yeah i got drunk at the bar but i know a little bit
Enough that you won't illegally search my shit
"We'll see how smart you are when the Kanines come."
I got 99 problems and the Po Po's one


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Re: My first! Points of authority/99problems Remix! Pointers Plz
« Reply #1 on: February 16, 2005, 03:51:03 PM »
FFS! someone Reply even if its negative feed back! i need to know ;)

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Re: My first! Points of authority/99problems Remix! Pointers Plz
« Reply #2 on: February 16, 2005, 06:00:29 PM »
haha thats pretty legit mane...u recorded that ish or wha homay?
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Re: My first! Points of authority/99problems Remix! Pointers Plz
« Reply #3 on: February 17, 2005, 03:32:34 PM »
nah not yet lol. u think its good? anyone else got an opinion cos i'd really like some feedback.

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Re: My first! Points of authority/99problems Remix! Pointers Plz
« Reply #4 on: March 02, 2005, 05:00:03 PM »
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