Fuckin With A House Party 2005

[Jimmy Cash2120]

the party was gettin crackin, everything was cool
cats drinkin liquor, bitches in the pool
I was chillin with the gang mackin to some hoes
then I seen some dudes dressed in black head to toe
rollin three deep, I didn’t know their faces
lookin suspicious standin by the beer cases
I said to my homie, “Yo, look at this”
he said “fuck them fags, find your self a bitch”
so I brushed it off and got myself a dime
she was kinda short but still real fine   
I was drunk on hen roc, she was tipsy off wine
we started makin out by the house outside
I said, “why we out here? lets go in my ride”
she whispered, “not yet” then got down on her knees
started suckin my dick, I thought, “this bitch is a slez”
that was when I thought I heard somethin movin in the weeds
then I felt cold metal to the back of my head and someone said “bitch, remember me?”

[The Anarchist]

sry man jus wasnt feelin it

[10dency]

YEAH ,THE RYHMES SEEMED TO FORCED ..IN ALL SERIOUSNESS IT WAS WHACK.

HERES WHY....

THE STORY WENT ABSOLUTELY NOWHERE...

THE STORY BY ITSELF WASNT INTERESTING ENOUGH.....AND IT SEEMED TOTALLY LIKE YOU
WANTED TO COME OFF LIKE A THUG/GANGSTER IN THIS BUT ,THE WAY YOU WROTE THIS YOU SOUND ANYTHING BUT
THAT.

LOL,AT ONE POINT YOU RHYMED KNEEZ WITH SLEZ...OR SLEEZE,SRY SOUNDED FORCED

THIS WAS JUST THE KINNA POST NOBODY WILL ADMIT TO NOT LIKING ....BUT IM STATING THE FACTS THIS WAS
JUST GARBAGE