Quick drop

[bez]

I've never asking for anything, never asked for props,
Now that I think I don't think I've ever moaned about drops,
But I still get dissed and its about time shit stops,
Cos I've son'ed em so many times they should call me their pops,
An this aint even disses em, you know who you are,
You come online and see him an try to start a war,
But I'm gunna go far cos I see past the blah blah,
My Ah ha, will soon become haha so har har,
This aint even a response aint dissin em back,
Just cos they come on and say "his shits wack",
Fact is they cant take the fact I'm fulla facts, fact,
An nobodys ever said "his whole styles jacked",
Its all original all individual I see past the subliminals,
So spiritual I taught Capone to be criminal,
Its so piterful that you diss me wit shit that unmeaningful,
You diss the maximum while your shit is minimal,
As I said this aint nottin, no reply, just a rhyme thats all,
Always taught the bigger they come the harder they fall,
An I aint small neither an I know how to brawl,
You'll crawl before I decide whether your face hits the floor,
Claim I cant write when I been doin this for ages,
The life rhymer the boy that goes through so many stages,
So couragous and not afraid to show his phases,
But when he lets loose these dudes see his rages,
An its a simple technique really but you'll still criticise,
Like I dont know how I write my own fucking rhymes,
I know exactly what I'm jottin on my own fuckin lines,
Write about life, and how it is, these motherfucking times,
So dont dare sit and take the piss when you know nothin,
I dont post for you, I post for myself, thats why I'm always droppin,
Aint no stoppin me see, even if I win the lottery,
I'd still "roll" and "ball" but with money behind me!

[J Bananas]

tyte shit, now i see why im still not recognized yet

[DiSSENT]

[size=08pt]Not bad. To be honest, a few lines were somewhat 'iffy', but we all got room for improvement...including myself. For a quick drop, it was better than average. You rhymed well for the most part & I agreed w/ what you had to say. Keep writing & elevating, dawg. Keep it up - Stay up, Peace*[/size]